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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 5:48am | IP Logged
this is one of ur ff's i like the most...

all the characters are very diff...and the way mahi riles up lavanya is hillarious...

waiting to see more interaction bet arnav and khushi...

but aren't mahi and arnav related...he calls him mamaji...so that means arnav and khushi are cousins...isn't it...

Plz clear this one doubt of mine

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Cute/beautiful and super hilarious.  Mahi's comment on lavanya's blouse had me ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
 
Khushi made a place in all raizada's hearts.  Does mahendra know that she is his own blood?  Or just loving her on the instinct?????  
 
Arnav looked like really he had PMS.  Bravo for aakash's comment.  Arnav unknowingly to himeslef expecting to see khushi and learn more about her.
 
Loved the total update.  The way you are portraying the characters is just beautiful..
 
 
 
Thank you mixing telugu in betweeen  (feel close to my heart).  Loved shashi's confidence and trust in khushi
 
Waiting for more

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
I read all 14 parts in one go and you have a wonderful style of writing, I am loving the characters in your FF, you put in each persons emotions very well. I really admire Khushi's strength and I'm absolutely loving the plot. Arnav being curious about Khushi and her crush on him will hopefully draw them closer and I can't wait to read more. Lovely work!Smile

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khusiarnav

Originally posted by Kalyaani

Originally posted by Anamika100

After the last update, I commented that they are separated by distance and in this update, you already handled...he is coming for Diwali and has investigated her...she has soaked up all the office gossip about him  and has developed a full on crush...whoa...that is fast paced.  This is so exciting and I am a sucker for office based romance!!!!!!

By the way...someone should tell Khushi about the old saying?..jumping out of frying pan into fire.

Like the fact that Khushi is very realistic about life and relationships.  she is not imposing on her father and out to make herself known to him...nor is she taking her attraction to AFR as anything more than a crush yet.
 

AFR ??? I have read this a few times on the forum'..sorry to sound silly what does the abbreviation mean?


AFR stands for Arnav f**king Raizada...  it was introduced by our Anne (HOH) in chain series!! :)))

Sorry, I meant to say ASR but this got autocorrected.

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
I have already chosen sides and am sooo glad that Mahi mama made fun of Lavanya's blouse or lack of.  So Khushi has found the necessary distance so she thinks less about Arnav.  He is now picking up some vibes from mama about Khushi and is intrigued.

Can hardly wait for more...

This is one of my favorite stories.  Thanks for writing.

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anamika100

I have already chosen sides and am sooo glad that Mahi mama made fun of Lavanya's blouse or lack of.  So Khushi has found the necessary distance so she thinks less about Arnav.  He is now picking up some vibes from mama about Khushi and is intrigued.

Can hardly wait for more...

This is one of my favorite stories.  Thanks for writing.
 

I was reminded off the Teej episodes when I wrote this and Lavanya's blouse was ridiculous. I am not the kind who insists women have to dress modest, that saree and blouse she wore was fit for a cocktail party not a puja at a temple.

Mamaji's reaction was funny there, so kind of used it in my update.

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
So, I finally caught up!
 
Can I just say wow!! I love the way you are building this up! I'd love to give indivijual review to each chapter, but TIMMMEE NAHI HAIII!!!!
 
bilkul time nahi hai, I seriously want to throw my lappy across. I promise. The detailed review to each and everything. I will post it. Promise. Please don't roll your eyes. I know I did not keep my promise of keeping off IF, but this one i will. :)
 
KBR, you are an amazing writer, and a prolific inspiration. Keep writing. If not for yourself, then for this crazy fangirl you have in Delhi. :)
 
Love,
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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 1:52am | IP Logged

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