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khusiarnav Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 6:27am | IP Logged
great update...

she is changing team now... working with biological father!!!

"It was clear as day, between the devil aka Arnav and the deep sea aka Mahi, she would choose the deep sea, at least she knew how to swim." - loved it!!

update soon!!
plzz pm me

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lovespell Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
WOW Nice Updates.  I missed most of it.  I was kinda busy past 2 weeks.  In breaks I did read your updates but couldnot comment them.. Finally I took some time to do it.  Very nice take on the story.  Payal is too cute.  Does she give up information llike that or does she realize the growing interest between the two to know each other more????Wink
Arnav is now finally coming back so hoping to see some update on him in the next week.  It's not that I am nagging.  You did a beautiful job giving each character its own importance and I never felt to skip a paragraph because it is on less important characters(which I do in the real serialWinkWink)
Khushi is too cute.  She realized she has a crush on him.  And the little peek in her past regarding Mattt is so cute and really hilarious.
WOW! Her father asked her to call him 'MAHI'.  What The...LOLLOLLOL.  he realized she is uncomfortable near him.  Now she is gonna work under legal department??? But you are gonna find a way to bring ARHI moments I am sure. 
Now my time is up.  See ya in the next much awaited updated.  

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latekate Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchshah Khushi is smitten by ASR...n has accepted that too...goood progress!!!

I am sure tough time's ahead for her..with arnav n mahi around...
btw  Who's Girish? did i forget?
Anyways, Thanks for the the way the story's moving!!
relationship not yet known. but he has been mentioned earlier as well
Originally posted by Kalyaani

Chapter Three

Both her brother and father were useless and irritating all those dreadful days, the only supporting shoulder she had was Girish's, god bless that guy for sticking it with her in the darkest phase of life.

and now again he makes an appearance
Originally posted by Kalyaani

Chapter Thirteen

Khushi had read up everything about diabetes and consulted the endocrinologist whom her Bua visited. If Bua found it silly, she didn't care, such information was never useless, Bua too was diabetic, and she needed to know all this to take care of her after all. Girish had laughed at her and never failed to ask how "lover boy" was doing, each time they spoke, which was almost every other day. There was only one thing holding Khushi back, not that she intended to take this crush any further, the knowledge that Lavanya was his girlfriend. That bit of gossip she got from Suhani, who voiced her crush on ASR rather blatantly, she reminded her of Nandini, always sighing loudly whenever he was mentioned.

may be somebody very special in her life

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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged
no Arnav... not good.. but hoping she'll interact more with Arnav now..
bhadraprasad IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Liked it...You have put us in a turmoil...daughter and biological father...?Awaiting the next chapter and thanks for the PM

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fffan123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Loved the update Kalyaani.

If Khushi gets closer to Mahi, who is her biological father and is unaware of it, I think ASR is definitely going to know about it and would be on the move. This could pose problems for Khushi.

Waiting to read next part.

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xmaangeetx Senior Member

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged


pm soon

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smile1412 Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Great update! Ha little does she know... She might interact with the devil more than she's comfortable with, ain't I right in guessing!?????

Wow... This s really getting interesting! Also it is going to be interesting to watch her handle her biological father! Pls update soon!!

Edited by smile1412 - 14 August 2012 at 11:15am

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