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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Just beacause you know how to swim doesnt make the deep sea any less dangerous...butatleast she has the strength to hold on...though i wish she had choose the devil...but no worries...may be he will come following!!Wink

Nice update
Thanks for PM

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:37pm | IP Logged

K,

Enjoyed the update tremendously. Your aka Khushi's repartee-ing is excellent. LOL

And I like the detailing of Khushi's mind. It is a pleasure to read. 

Thanks.

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
great update...

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
that was freaking awesome...she is stuck b/w MAHI n arnav!

it was a refreshing update...khusi and her first crush and the later when her crush turned out to be a gay had me laughing...loved it!

moving onto the meeting.la seems kinda of show-off n extremely bitchy...

so khusi gng to work with mahi...gr88 oppurtunity for her as far as her work is concerned but she gotta stand head strong and overcome the shadows of her past...best that the past remains buried!

shez is professional not sort of mingling her personal and professional life! u created a wonderful character here! she is high-spirited,strong and infectiously cute!

cant wait for the next update...awesome update!:)



Edited by icegurl789 - 13 August 2012 at 11:53pm

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Genes have a way of finding each other even unknowingly i think. :)

So Khushi finds Arnav interesting :) Well they are programmed to do that, the two of them - :) But Khushi clearly hasn't heard the phrase - you can run but cannot hide :)

Devil and Deep Blue Sea - Both will catch up with her. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Brilliant progress. 


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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 12:07am | IP Logged

ok...so Khushi is smitten by ASR...n has accepted that too...goood progress!!!

I am sure tough time's ahead for her..with arnav n mahi around...
btw  Who's Girish? did i forget?
Anyways, Thanks for the PM...love the way the story's moving!!

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
fabulous conversation between khushi and mahi.. it in intense to think.. how khushi might be feeling dealing with her biological father..

khushi having crush for arnav.. excellent..

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:25am | IP Logged
So by accepting Mahi's proposal she thinks that she can run away from Arnav LOL LOL LOL
Wait till the big man comes back baby ... 
Loved the interaction between Mahi and Khushi ... why do I have a feeling that he does have an inkling about their connection ... 


Kalyani ... Just need a clarification ...
In chapter four  ... 'Ajit recalled the last thing Shashi said "Do this for Manu, do it only for her."'
who is the Manu there ... 
and who is the Manu mentioned in the chapter today ? ... I know that Mahi's wife is Manu-Manorama ... so the call must have been from her today .


Edited by Kishmish - 14 August 2012 at 6:37am

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