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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchshah

Payal n Khushi make good friends...Clap n Aakash n Khushi also share a nice bond...

So, Arnav finally knows that Khushi was the girl whom he kissed in Banglore hospital all those years back!!!
 
I like Khushi's bua...u made a good attempt to make her likeable n modern n independent unlike in the series...Claphats off to u!!
 
Thanks for the PM!
 
Thanks...the characters are mere props in the serial and I do feel bad for them...so this my way of giving them some due Wink

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Khushi and Payal were too good... liked it..
Arnav thinks Khushi as a puzzle.. waiting to see his reactions if and when he discovers her truth

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Well written . I came across this work now only.I read the 12th chapter first. Let me read the first 11 chapters.Thanks for the PM
 
 
Thank you

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
You are really taking it slow on this one.  ASR is far far away and while this chapter was a transition and established the everyone loves Khushi and she is a mystery / puzzle to solve for ASR...we the readers are still in the dark.

Tells me...Tells me Pleaze!!!!!!  what iz going on?
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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 10:56pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
This Khushi i like, she has comebacks and is not afraid to open her mouth.
Why does Mahi want to work with her? does he see a familiarity in her features?...it may be he is just curious...

So she has admitted to herself that she is attracted to ASR. 
Should be interesting when he gets back from south Africa...

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
SECONNDDD
Poor Khush. Never having been in a relationship has to be a downer. She doesn't even know what to do. LOL And well Lavanya...is just her. 'Nuff said.
How more awkward can awkward get when you're working with your dad who doesnt know you're his daughter. Confusingwa.
This shall create problemwas in ArHi's future relationshipwa I guesses?
Anyhooo.
Loved the update. Gay Irishman. Ohh Wink 
Continue soon. :)
 
Cheers, Avi.


Edited by ArShifan1997 - 13 August 2012 at 11:26pm

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
I think she is opening a can of worms.  She may avoid Arnav for now but isn't Mahi her biological father?  If I recall he is unaware of it.  If he also gets close to Khushi, then Arnav's antenna will definitely tingle as she would be close to almost all his family members

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