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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preetihere

The dynamics are so different here, i love it...Payal is such a releif to read about, i see Deepali and a nice modern one ...did i tell u i love that these girls all have their own careers...i probably did already Big smile
Will Arnav find some link from BuaJi back to his family members i wonder!
 
I agree the serial leaves her looking silly always saying "Paar akash" and nothing more. Payal is a lot better here as I wanted to give her some due in my story at least.
 
Arnav wants to know the motive behind Khushi joining RE, not so keen on the family angle as of now.

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
nice update but when they will meet?

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Loved the update!!
Arnav has a way to get information ,be it from an agency or Payal...Interesting..

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
The story is emerging gradually, the pace is just right, the characters have conviction and I am thoroughly enjoying it. Interesting to know Arnav's POV.

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Life was a puzzle and the process of solving it was challengingly enjoyable and arriving at the solution always gave a sense of achievement



Adore this sentence. 

Wonderful.

Very well written.

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
the arnav n kushi part was amazin...
shes impreesed  as hes very hardworkin...
am glad he remembers in d last tat shes d one whom he kissed in d hospital...
ur work s so crystal clear...
i love it a lot...
tanx 4 d pm...
update soon

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
nice update!i'm really enjoying Arnav's attempt to get to know about Khushi.

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
nice updt
love it
thanks for pm

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