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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anamika100

This was vintage ASR...Intelligent, sharp, all seeing with an impassive manner, barking orders and caustic speech, working like. Machine...I could gush on and on.  ...and to top it all philandering too?

Glad  Khushi held her own.

What I still do not understand is...why did Ajit feel the need to overpay her?  Hiring her I understand.  Why does Ajit feel duty bound to facilitate her introduction to her father?
 
Yes, Vintage ASR Big smile
 
Ajit does this for a reason and will come in a bit later...

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 1:27am | IP Logged
That was a beautiful chapter:)

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
nice update!Arnav's getting soo curious...it waz a fun read!Smile

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
I love the way you have depicted the relationship between Khushi and her father, can't say it enough. The emotions and insecurities are so real. Love the professionalism and competence of Khushi.


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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
I love ur FF dear... read it one go... wonder why few readers!!!

anyways i love the way u have portrait all the characters... its seems too real...
the dirty secrets of family members intrigues me... 
since our Arnie boy is smeeling fishy and digging deep, it certain in no time he would know who khusi is ... m excited!!


amazing writing... add me in ur list!! i am hooked for sure
will be waiting for ur update
 update soon!!

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 10:30am | IP Logged

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
The initial parts about Khushi being relieved, made me laugh :P Could totally imagine her expression there. And then her silent admiration for his looks, his achievements brought a smile to my face :D
Also the Shyam/ Anjali part has got me thinking. But I'll wait for you to throw more light in that arena, and not judge. Continue soon Kalyaani!:)
And that is absolutely because the way you write is is unique, in the sense it is straightforward, blatant, crystal clear. And I love that about your work.


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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
I agree with mistyrains post.  Of course the chapter is very well written as usual.  The Arnav-Khushi part was interesting as Arnav seems to have remembered the incident in Bangalore.  Nice to know that Khushi is impressed by him professionally and not just physical attributes.

The Shyam Anjali part was different.  So Shyam is aware of her philandering and is ok with it.  her thoughts on adoption will probably play a key role in this story I think.  Personally I think they are narrow minded specially for someone whose mother was adopted.


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