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shalini_s

@shalini_s

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Khushi and Payal were too good... liked it..

Arnav thinks Khushi as a puzzle.. waiting to see his reactions if and when he discovers her truth

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Well written . I came across this work now only.I read the 12th chapter first. Let me read the first 11 chapters.Thanks for the PM

Thank you

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

You are really taking it slow on this one. ASR is far far away and while this chapter was a transition and established the everyone loves Khushi and she is a mystery / puzzle to solve for ASR...we the readers are still in the dark.

Tells me...Tells me Pleaze!!!!!! what iz going on?

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

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fluffyktau

@fluffyktau

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Posted: 11 years ago

This Khushi i like, she has comebacks and is not afraid to open her mouth.

Why does Mahi want to work with her? does he see a familiarity in her features?...it may be he is just curious...

So she has admitted to herself that she is attracted to ASR.

Should be interesting when he gets back from south Africa...

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norolim

@norolim

Goldie

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

SECONNDDD

Poor Khush. Never having been in a relationship has to be a downer. She doesn't even know what to do. 😆 And well Lavanya...is just her. 'Nuff said.

How more awkward can awkward get when you're working with your dad who doesnt know you're his daughter. Confusingwa.

This shall create problemwas in ArHi's future relationshipwa I guesses?

Anyhooo.

Loved the update. Gay Irishman. Ohh 😉

Continue soon. :)

Cheers, Avi.

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741866

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

I think she is opening a can of worms. She may avoid Arnav for now but isn't Mahi her biological father? If I recall he is unaware of it. If he also gets close to Khushi, then Arnav's antenna will definitely tingle as she would be close to almost all his family members

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Just beacause you know how to swim doesnt make the deep sea any less dangerous...butatleast she has the strength to hold on...though i wish she had choose the devil...but no worries...may be he will come following!!😉

Nice update

Thanks for PM

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Enjoyed the update tremendously. Your aka Khushi's repartee-ing is excellent. 😆

And I like the detailing of Khushi's mind. It is a pleasure to read.

Thanks.

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catalyst

@catalyst

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

that was freaking awesome...she is stuck b/w MAHI n arnav!

it was a refreshing update...khusi and her first crush and the later when her crush turned out to be a gay had me laughing...loved it!

moving onto the meeting.la seems kinda of show-off n extremely bitchy...

so khusi gng to work with mahi...gr88 oppurtunity for her as far as her work is concerned but she gotta stand head strong and overcome the shadows of her past...best that the past remains buried!

shez is professional not sort of mingling her personal and professional life! u created a wonderful character here! she is high-spirited,strong and infectiously cute!

cant wait for the next update...awesome update!:)

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