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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera30

This story is very real. Yes and being from the southern part of India, this suddenly feels a lot more close to home. References to cities I live in, languages I speak / understand / hear all day.

And I'm loving it all

I love how all your chaarcters are so well etched. I can see Ajit and Madhumati (not as the actors you've outlined but as real people!)

Khushi - my heart goes out to her. The journey of an adopted child. Torn between the father you've always known and the father you know is the real deal.

Brilliantly done KBR. I'm enjoying this journey! And I agree after ages I don't really care when Arnav and Khushi will meet and thereafter!

That's no mean feat!
 

Thanks dear, a lot of it is, how I have seen it in life as a resident of a cosmopolitan city as Bangalore. Exposed to so many languages and cultures

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kalyaani

Originally posted by Viji79

For the first time in my history of reading ArShi FFs, I am compelled to say I am not exactly looking forward eagerly to ArShi, for the reason that this FF is more than just ArShi and I am already curious about Khushi's past. More than Arnav, the surprise-shock package is Anjali - a complete role reversal I should say. Ajit not only seems to have a lot of skeletons in his cupboard but his clan is busy hiding a lot more in their own closets. I hope you would spare Akash.
 

Thanks'.that I greedily take this as a compliment. The purpose is that, a story of many people fate brings together. The pursuit is of love and in all forms. The pace and details may be slow, it builds to make a story.

Thanks again.

 
You dont have to be greedy, because it was meant to be a heartfelt compliment. Sorry if it sound like one. The pace of the story is perfect.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:50pm | IP Logged

Just came across this story...read it in one go...

So finally the suspense is out...but still Arnav n Khushi are not in any way blood related, right?
since Khushi's biological father's Arnav's Bua's husband...(just to b clear)
waiting for Arnav- khushi meet...Akash n Payal are a cute couple...so are Arnav's parents dead.???
ok, waiting for the next update

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
hey loved all the chapters!!!!Smile
liked your way of carrying the story line...
eager to read more..
excellent jobClap

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
amazing story 
please update 

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
interesting and extremely intriguing...
this ff has got me hooked...i loved it!
refreshing concept,mindblowing and well-etched character,loving the pace of the story!
indeed a gr88 work!
do pm meeh when u update!
a friend request on your way!:)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
WOW!  I missed on so many updates. Read all of them.  SO to begin with - Why did arnav change his decision to drop the South Africa trip??  Khushi met her biological father and we know now that he is Ajit's sister's husband.  Shashi is already feeling insecure but I loved madhumathi in this the way she handled his insecurity.  The caharacters in your FF are very mature. I want to see how how khushi handles the truth?  Ajit-Khushi bonding is so warm.  And how does khushi know telugu?  It felt very near to me as I have telugu roots too. Khushi said she initially wants to meet only ajit's wife.  and now she wants to teach payal telugu.  Soon I am sure she will be attached to the family before anyone knows it.  Waiting for you update.  Awesome job

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Woww...awesum ff, read all 9 parts in one go...beautifully written.

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