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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Too late, I know. I had school. Reserved
 
Alright, let us begin.
 
I LOVE her bua. Love her a lot. Seriously. She is like a parallel to my grandmother.
 
Now dont take this in the wrong way. I sat through an inter-school book discussion, and hence this
 
I like the way the story is going forward. Now, A request. Everyone wants FF's to be filled with Arnav and Khushi continually joined at the hip, but no. If you have to make Anjali parade on the road naked, do it. Tell this story as YOU please. Because you have a beautiful thing going on here, where the best part is the believabilty of the characters. Just do it.
 
That is what I always try to strive for, in whatever I write. To make my characters seem so human, that you can go "Hey, that is exactly how I would feel, had I been there!" One way you can do that is to take it from around you. Because at the end of the day, you can only write about what you have experienced. And if not, you always have an imagination ;)
 
And no, that doesn't mean I saw someone being abused. Not at all. Glass is totally my imagination, and influence of the books I read. Pinky swear. =P
 
I love the way you write. TOTALLY.
 
Lots of love,
V
 
 


Edited by V323 - 06 August 2012 at 4:29am

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:58am | IP Logged
For the first time in my history of reading ArShi FFs, I am compelled to say I am not exactly looking forward eagerly to ArShi, for the reason that this FF is more than just ArShi and I am already curious about Khushi's past. More than Arnav, the surprise-shock package is Anjali - a complete role reversal I should say. Ajit not only seems to have a lot of skeletons in his cupboard but his clan is busy hiding a lot more in their own closets. I hope you would spare Akash.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Viji79

For the first time in my history of reading ArShi FFs, I am compelled to say I am not exactly looking forward eagerly to ArShi, for the reason that this FF is more than just ArShi and I am already curious about Khushi's past. More than Arnav, the surprise-shock package is Anjali - a complete role reversal I should say. Ajit not only seems to have a lot of skeletons in his cupboard but his clan is busy hiding a lot more in their own closets. I hope you would spare Akash.
 

Thanks….that I greedily take this as a compliment. The purpose is that, a story of many people fate brings together. The pursuit is of love and in all forms. The pace and details may be slow, it builds to make a story.

Thanks again.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Her father's fears are so real. When an adopted child goes looking for the biological parent's a feeling of fear of the unknown and what it might lead to is natural. But in my opinion parents are the one's who bring you up and love you all your life and nothing changes that. You have depicted all of this well through the conversation between Shashi and Madhumati.
Anjali is turning out to be quite interesting...waiting for her story to unravel. 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
This story is very real. Yes and being from the southern part of India, this suddenly feels a lot more close to home. References to cities I live in, languages I speak / understand / hear all day.

And I'm loving it all

I love how all your chaarcters are so well etched. I can see Ajit and Madhumati (not as the actors you've outlined but as real people!)

Khushi - my heart goes out to her. The journey of an adopted child. Torn between the father you've always known and the father you know is the real deal.

Brilliantly done KBR. I'm enjoying this journey! And I agree after ages I don't really care when Arnav and Khushi will meet and thereafter!

That's no mean feat!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Like it. Interested to know how Arnav and Khushi will meet.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Hi! So I came here after going through you other FF and then checking out your index. And I hooked to this one too! You write superbly well. The pace of the stories is brilliant. Its like you peel a layer of your story in every update. Well done! :)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
I love how you write.  There is so much maturity in how you are handling Khushi's journey thru life.  If she is the biological daughter of Ajit's brother-in-law, why does Ajit's mother know about her and why did Ajit ask her if she wanted to meet his family?  I would have thought that neither Ajit nor Khushi want to raise too many questions?


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