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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:25am | IP Logged

So this is the house that Kalyaani built. 

Just talking aloud to move forward a bit more clearly, that's all.

Ajit Raizada is married to sukanya who is a Reddy and Akash speaks Telugu and so does Khushi. How does Khushi know Telugu. Isn't she from Bangalore? Is there a Garima/Telugu connection that I missed somewhere.

So actually Khushi is not related to the Raizadas because she is related only to the husband of Ajit's sister or Ajit's friend who could also be Shashi/Garima's friend in their younger days. 

Anjali Jha's facade has dropped a second time, this time picked up by Khushi.
Now it has all got to come together when the whole thing unravels bit by bit.

Nice. Smile

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:43am | IP Logged
anji is scandalous man.. to do that in the traffic signal.. hehehehee..

beautiful written.. enjoyed the update.. i like ajit.. 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Nice update. That hug in the last part touched me. I cant believe Anjali's infidelity. After seeing the anjali in IPKKND, this is an extreme opposite of what we see on week days Tongue 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 1:12am | IP Logged
So anjali's secret is coming in front of the guptas...wonder what twist that wud bring!!!
I know i know u have it all planned but can i be greedy and ask for glimpse of our dear dear ASRWink just missing him
But loving khusi's strong stance to face everything 

Keep writing

P.S. off to Raizada and Sons!!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Just finshed all the chapters ... captivating storyline ...  
love the pace of the story ... unfolding slowly and steadily ...
So Khushi finally gets to meet her biological father ...
Anjali seems to be quite a s**t ... first Imran and now someone else in the car ... Shocked
Love the father daughter relationship between Shashi and Khushi ...
but missing Arnav ... who seems rather busy with Lavanya ... LOL
waiting for more dear Kalyani ... you write really well ... Clap

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:11am | IP Logged
nice update...
when arshi meet to each other?

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:40am | IP Logged
I loved your story. Please PM for future updates?

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Too late, I know. I had school. Reserved
 
Alright, let us begin.
 
I LOVE her bua. Love her a lot. Seriously. She is like a parallel to my grandmother.
 
Now dont take this in the wrong way. I sat through an inter-school book discussion, and hence this
 
I like the way the story is going forward. Now, A request. Everyone wants FF's to be filled with Arnav and Khushi continually joined at the hip, but no. If you have to make Anjali parade on the road naked, do it. Tell this story as YOU please. Because you have a beautiful thing going on here, where the best part is the believabilty of the characters. Just do it.
 
That is what I always try to strive for, in whatever I write. To make my characters seem so human, that you can go "Hey, that is exactly how I would feel, had I been there!" One way you can do that is to take it from around you. Because at the end of the day, you can only write about what you have experienced. And if not, you always have an imagination ;)
 
And no, that doesn't mean I saw someone being abused. Not at all. Glass is totally my imagination, and influence of the books I read. Pinky swear. =P
 
I love the way you write. TOTALLY.
 
Lots of love,
V
 
 


Edited by V323 - 06 August 2012 at 4:29am

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