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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by V323

BRB
 
I loved the angst in the update. Poor Khushi.
 
That happens a lot, you know. Lot of people think hatred is the emotional opposite of love. It is not. The actual opposite is apathy, where you dont give a damn what happens to the person in front of you.
 
So the fact that Khushi did not feel hatred for him, did not surprise me.
 
I was very happy with the phone-conversation.
 
So Manohar doesn't know Khushi is his daughter. That is indeed interesting. I wonder how you will take it forward.
 
I like how the story is unfurling, Rao. Kudos to you.
 
PS- Me first, on BOTH the FF's. Awesome stalker I am. =P
 
Love,
V
 
Thanks V, hope everyone understands that the pursuit of love here is not between Arnav and Khushi alone...it between various relations

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nici0306

So khushi is Arnav's bua's husband's biological daughter.. That is some news..

Awesome part.. I really like ajit's character..
 
I liked the complicated way you brought the connection...really cute...

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Lovely chapter, hatred and apathy, terrific counterparts:)

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Very nice FF. Reading for the first time today. You have a way with writing stories Clap

Wondering what would have happened in the past that Garima had Mahi's child and he never got to know it. Also wondering how did shashi accept garima along with the child. Ermm

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Just read this for the first time today and am very impressed. Tight story, well written, gripping

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:05am | IP Logged
nice update.  Chachaji seems like a gentleman.  Anjali is definitely not a lady in your story.  Is she at least a nice person?
Also since Arnav is in Cape Town, it would be interesting to see how you plan on making them meet.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Hey ... have just started reading The Pursuit of Love ...
just read chapter one ... am loving it ... LOL 

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