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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
oohh they finally kissed and what a passionate kiss it was ;) i like! but talk about being blunt, the way Arnav told her that they have to do something about this attraction..loll poor khushi she probably took it in the wrong way and will think Arnav just wants to have a fling with her or something along those lines. i am really surprised Arnav felt that khushi might have an affair with mahi..i understand he was slightly intoxicated and jealous, but still he has heard mahi call khushi "beta" ...i hope he realizes his mistake soon enough and finds out truth about their real relationship. this is not the first time Arnav has concluded something so wrong about his uncles...i think this could be connected to his past, but of course i could be wrong and you are the boss :) i really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next one. i had no idea you gave pre cap for your updates so now i shall be stalking your thread very often;) take care and God bless you! 

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Loved it

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Weeelll...What The!!! 0f c0urse s0me triggering fact0rwas necessary f0r igniting this sexual tensi0n in between them...but the fact0r being Mahi's MI t0tally stumpted me!!!
Tell me 0ne thing...isnt Mahi's wife Arnav's bua??? In this case why did he call her Mami??? M def0 c0nfused ab0ut this family structure...and if Arshi by any chance cud be related 0r what???

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
Yeh kya hogaya? :O
Heart attack for Maamaji, and then heart attack for us [with that under the shirt action]
 
Way too much sexual tension. Oh hell yes!
Ab kya hovat hai Kalyaani?
 
Dekhne ka padi.
 
Loved it!
Avi.
 
*Edited
Has Mahi come to know that Khushi is his biological daughter? Confused Random thought LOL


Edited by ArShifan1997 - 21 September 2012 at 3:52pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
nice updateee...
atlast arnav had fallen for khush head over heels haaLOL...
khush is really caring abt her biogoical fatherr...
how arnav can think like tht Angry
thnx 4 pmBig smile

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 2:49pm | IP Logged


Edited by LoLo - 14 January 2013 at 8:30pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Gee when I read this update I was reminded of an old book where the hero always thinks that his heroine has hots for old people
That was one great update amazingly written

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
wonderful update 

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