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Onlooker Goldie
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Hey...read all the missed updates...i think am hooked. You have weaved an intriguing and delightful story in multiple layers, which makes the reader ponder long enough after the story is read. Kudos to you..

Sorry for not responding to for more than a month..i was away from IF. Do pm me future updates. Looking forward to it..

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
 hey k
waiting for ur update
pl update soon
 

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
hello
Started reading your FF and couldnt stop till ch 29. Absolutely mind blowing . I really felt I am reading a novel . Supeb work .

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Hey  Kalyani !!  As I commented in your other FF ...I am absolutely  hooked on to both your FF's ...  I love your narrative style ...  and I eagerly awaiting to read the next update of this  , Would  comment on the story properly once I catch up on my sleep ... right now my brain is completely  shut down  and cant think of anything to write ...  

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 1:57am | IP Logged
just read all 29 chapters in one go... U r an awesome writer Kalyani..

Such a good hold on the story.. keeping the mystery intact... i am so in love with this witty khushi...

Love it to the bits...

Please continue soon and PM the next update..

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
wow..the story is amazingClap..i read all the updates..can u pls pm me when u update the 30th chapter...Smile

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
it's getting interesting now...this story is so unpredictable, can't wait to see what happens next :)

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Why did asr kissed her just coz she denied accepting the issue he shouldn'thave done it

But khushi is running away frm the fact that she is attracted towards him will it complicate the matter that shyam is taking mahis place

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