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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by serialwatcher16


Hmm so Mahi feels J that khushi is really comfortable with Ajit. Ajit seems to be the nice brother and arnav's father comes though as a deal maker.

So they arranged manorama's marriage with Mahi knowing fully well he was involved with garima. 
Lots of back stories and lovely, not rooted to he ground future ones as well.
 

My intelligent Usha or should I say detective Usha; trying to find out the various possibilities of the background story. I like it Big smile

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 4:05am | IP Logged
poor khusi ...
she has to face mahi daily with pain...
i m happy that arnav called her to share his happiness

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
I really liked the update... mahi is getting jealous of the relationship Khusi and Ajit share... hhmmm!!
i guess he will find out what is between them... but the way you have put the emotions in check when three of them were having conversation was amazing!! Poor khusi, its hard for her to handle all this... 

Awww arnav called her not for business but to share his happiness with khusi... thats so sweet!!

I cant say how much i am looking forward to next chapter... Arnav will be back, wont he?? and Mahi... that will be interesting to see... how he will try to know more about khusi and her relation with Ajit!!!

great update Kalyani and thanks for Pm!!

update soon!!

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
amazin part...

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
i competed all chapters at ongo again...
loved the story...i love the way u layered it...
i cant wait for arnav to reach delhi n arshi to meet...

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged

cant wait to read mahis pov wen he comes to knw abt khushi and garima

vl he b shatered to knw dat garima is dead?
thanx 4 da pm

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
I loved the fact that Khushi was the first person that arnav thought off to share his news...
Great chapter!

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 10:15am | IP Logged
great update!Smile

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