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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
I wished he called when she was with mahi and ajit, I would love to know their reaction on the change in Arnav. Also to hear the victory through Khushi. Hehehe

Anyways great update. Thanks for frequent update. Loving you for that.

Edited by blablabla_mo7 - 19 September 2012 at 7:13pm

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
I loved this particular lines -

She glanced at her feet and yes they were firmly on the ground, then why did she feel like she was a few inches above. He had called her, not for work but to share his happiness, and this spoke of happy tidings; very happy tidings.


Best ones, it sums up what its all about.

Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 8:05pm | IP Logged

Hmm so Mahi feels J that khushi is really comfortable with Ajit. Ajit seems to be the nice brother and arnav's father comes though as a deal maker.

So they arranged manorama's marriage with Mahi knowing fully well he was involved with garima. 
Lots of back stories and lovely, not rooted to he ground future ones as well.


Edited by serialwatcher16 - 19 September 2012 at 8:05pm

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
omg, i loved the part where mahi was being envious of Ajit,can't wait to read more
thanx for the pm:)

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by citi

Loved the joy spilling out of the phone call.
The pain Khushi felt at the mention of Mahi's youth in Lucknow and how it brought back memories of her mother was intensely expressed. I am waiting to learn what really happened then. It is nice to see the dignity that Khushi maintains in the face of everything.
 
Not many noted this, I like it when readers pick up things beyond Arhi...

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Superb update Kaalyani. Loved it, especially the way you have described the elations and tied them together.

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:11pm | IP Logged

"She glanced at her feet and yes they were firmly on the ground, then why did she feel like she was a few inches above. He had called her, not for work but to share his happiness, and this spoke of happy tidings; very happy tidings."

Awww that was so cute
Amazing update

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Awww that was such an adorable part...
Thanks for the pm.

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