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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
i think the last scene was the most pivotal point in this update... it was such a 'aweee' moment! his loneliness and his attraction was creeping up onto him... and he called the person who was closest to him... in sense of affection i guess :/ 

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
kalyaaniii, i loved it! this story is going sooo well! please pat yourself:) it was so sweet arnav already has started feeling  khushi is that someone special...cant wait for what dadi is going to ask him about khushi and i seriously can't wait when khushi will meet dadi and the rest of the family...i wonder how arnav will react to it?! kindly update soon! 

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much for the wonderful update.
I dont know what to write now. Is it your writing style or I'm being too emotional today, I jumped off my chair at the last line.

Ok coming back to sense. I loved everything, especially the monologue of Arnav in the car. He aint perfect nor is she, but they match each other. I am enjoying their pre-confession or confusion stage. not in hurry for their confession.

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
AWESOME

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 4:45pm | IP Logged

Sweet.

That was really really sweet. 
Thanks k for this story.

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
loved it ...very beautiful

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
awesome update
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reniji66

Originally posted by Kalyaani

Originally posted by niharika111

The note about the relationship between the different characters was particularly enlightening. I have one question though...
I understand that arnav is unaware of the relationship between Khushi and his family.
But Khushi knows that she is the biological daughter of Arnav's mama. Yet she seems to have no reservation in this regard about her growing fondness for Arnav (which to me is borderline incestuous); Does the fact that Arnav's mom and mama are not related by blood, make it acceptable to Khushi, who is so morally righteous otherwise (sorry if I may seem rude), to pursue this attraction that she feels for Arnav?
 

It is one way to look at the matter; she did not grow up with Arnav or Akash to think of them as cousins. Arnav is clueless about her parentage but Khushi knows everything about Arnav and his family tree, yet does not take that as a signal to go ahead with the relationship. Let's not forget she is fighting her attraction, albeit unsuccessfully.

Another reader observed, that it is a common practice in most parts of India; niece marrying her Mama or cousins marrying. Genetically discouraged but practiced widely to keep assets and property within the family; also to avoid issues that may tarnish family honour.

Two things:  Love your quote at the bottom from Atticus.  TKAMB is my very favorite book.  Number two why is there talk of incest when Khushi and Arnav are not related by blood?  If she knows who she is and that Arnav and Mama are not really blood relatives, why is anyone talking of common cousin marriage practices wherever and incest?  I don't get it.  Adoptive means not related by blood.  Khushi did not grow up with them and she is technically not related to them.  Why the concerns?  Why are we talking genetics here when Mama is clearly trying to get them together?  If it was wrong, wouldn't he discourage rather than encourage it?  don't get it.
Well in this case Mama does not know that Khushi is his biological daughter. he likes Khushi and thinks that she would get along very well with Arnav.
Its true that Khushi and Arnav are not related by blood, but once it becomes common knowledge that Khushi is Mama's biological daughter, it might just get a tad bit awkward for the entire family. But yes, it would in no way be illegal.

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