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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
fantastic update
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Alinaa-

Chronic Arnav Obsession Disorder; I liked it.

I am really impressed with your choice of words.

I enjoyed verbal war between Arnav and Khusi. Two feisty creatures against each other, even sms was enough to turn on the war. And ASR is ASR, he instead called her than accepting defeat.

I have already mentioned this, but I really love the characterizations of your story, which I wish the show had too.


 
Big smile I had to make up for the date they did not go on...glad you liked it
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by niharika111

So Arnav called!!! very interesting...u know what...my husband had asked me out the first time in a somewhat similar fashion...though the context of our text messages were very different! made me feel nostalgic:)
 
Awww that is so romantic and glad this did help recall fond memories.
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by serialwatcher16


K,

Thank you so much for the 10/10 smile quotient. Big smile
What a lovely morning.
I have to read this again.
I hate smsing but Eavesdropping on your Arnav and your Khushi's sms's seems to make my day.
Let me wish Khushi 'sweet Arnav' dreams.
What a wonderful Girl you have got here. And how wonderful is it to go into each layer of what she is thinking.

 
I hate SMSing too...the lingo puts me off further, that is the reason the words were all typed out and no 'GNSD' kind of messaging.
 
Did I tell you this before? Nice smile Usha Smile

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:19pm | IP Logged

Love the CAOD ... LOL  I think we all have it ... Wink
Awsome ... 

"Ms. Gupta, I need you to confirm all the figures for the three suits we have filed against the chemicals supplier and make sure they're all available for the final case filing for Mama on Friday. Check with Mama for the other details he may require. Also confirm that the files have everything in place for the meeting. We need it finished by Wednesday ideally so we can do a run-through on Thursday and..." he was interrupted before he could finish.

 

"Sir, it's Sunday night and I'm not working at office. I am very tired, may we discuss this tomorrow. Please" she begged, stifling a yawn.

 

"Pardon me" he asked a bit taken aback.

 

"Sir, may we discuss this tomorrow? I have to sleep, have a lot to do at home and office. I am requesting you to allow me sleep" she said in a tired voice.

 

"Are you asking me to allow you to sleep, Ms. Gupta?" teasing her.

 

She colored recalling what she had said and heard him laugh at the other end of the phone. "Good night Ms. Gupta. Sleep well" he said and cut the call before could reply, certain she had lost her voice. " 

I really wonder if Miss Gupta is going to be able to sleep after this ... Wink



Edited by Kishmish - 16 September 2012 at 11:44am

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Loved the update...CAOD indeed! 

Their SMX exchange was cute...did he just call her in pretext of work to hear her voice????

-Sona

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Th0ugh I was quite disap0inted that y0u cancelled their dinner, this maggie cum texting cum ph0ning sessi0n was quite entertaining as well...I mean, all is well till the sparks fly :)

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
I loved this cat and mouse text! They;re literally after each other...  and one can clearly say that Arnav is falling hard for Khushi Kumar Gupta.. and it's not just an act anymore... 

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