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xmaangeetx Senior Member

Joined: 05 June 2011
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 1:04pm | IP Logged

beautiful descriptions


sparikh IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
oh no...was looking forward to reading abt their first date...but alas, Dadi had to intervene...

probably found out his single status & now has found suitable bahu???

K is acknowledging her feelings, at least to her self...

drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
fantastic update
thanks for the pm
ISensedYou IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
awsum update...
hes tryin to impress her...
n shes cumin to knw tat shes fallin for him...
i wish they had dinner together...
tanx 4 d pm...
continue soon
inspiringstars Goldie

Joined: 27 January 2012
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
The awkwardness, the nervousness to talk, or make polite conversation was all written very nicely by you. Khushi was opening up, and I enjoyed reading how she told him  about his father, and their closeness. And also when she said yes about going for dinner so she wouldnt have to make food for him, because she wouldnt be able to concentrate with him around. LOL!
Arnav, I see a naughty streak in him since the beginning, but this was cute and funny. He feeling weird to use different talks to impress a girl...
All in all, good conversation, if only Dadi wouldnt have been Kabab main haddi!

Kalyaani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by segad

I protest!  Bait and switch!

I expected fireworks, fights, arguments, witty repartee and I get a guy dropping a girl home Confused
I was in two minds, it could be the dinner or the damn call, and I opted for the call. It was too early and honestly it would seem forced, they are warming up to each other and I rather they plan and go on a date. This would be too much of a chance pe dance kind of a situation. Hopefully they do get down to being more than civil in future.

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Khushi4Arnav Senior Member

Joined: 10 February 2012
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Another Lovely Update K... 

The mellowing down and getting along Phase I like.And yeah, it better be a good reason for Daadi to have called him.. humph

God, Arnav hinted his interest twice. Khushi teach Jhanvi "Kolavari Di" & He wants to decide whether Khushi is a good cook whenever she cooks for "HIM" IF you ask me I actually want these 2 encounters.

Note for YOU -  I am falling for this story and all its complexities. You are a Fab writer. 

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Anamika100 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
I think I am more disappointed that the dinner plan got cancelled than either Arnav or Khushi.

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