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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Really a very interesting update. Good storyline Smile

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soniachammu Senior Member
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
she both wanted to and not wanted to go
Loved tjeir convo thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Hey Kalyani,
How could you be so cruel yaar? Here I was so much looking forward to the update since the last one and You go CV's way??
Et too brutus..

In your story also Raizada family had to interrupt the couple. Half way through the update I am dreaming about a dinner date and you broke my heart lady..

You better give me dinner date fast.. please please please..
am very very sad  Cry

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
This was a superb ride, unfortable silence slowing turned into bearable small talks.. Too friendly suggestion of having dinner together either at her place or eating out.. You wrote khushi so well, could clearly she her holding back and hesitation in getting involved..

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crazyweird Goldie
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Nice update
I liked how you showed the nicer side too

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summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
nice updt

luvd it

thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Awesome update! Love the complex character traits. Aren't we all technicolored ? PM me when the next one is up ? 

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Gargee Senior Member
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Hey there!

So yeah, I know- I have commented only once on this FF and then I kinda disappeared without so much as another 'like'. But believe me when I say- I have been dying to read this ff since the time I read the first two or three chapters. Only, life got in the way- and I had to scramble to write and proof-read my stories, let alone read yours. And I need time to think and analyse every little thing a writer has written in their story, so I just kinda highlighted this one in a Must Read paint, and hoped to get back to it soon. And now, here I am! 

I have just read all the chapters- and may I just say, You, my dear, are a fantastic writer. The steady way in which you evolve each and every facet of a character- Be it Khushi, Arnav or even Anjali for that matter- is just fabulous. There was no point in this story where I found that the story line was abrupt or even disjointed. And that is a great feat. Because this shows the skill you possess. Kudos, for that Hon!

I Love how it is evolving thus far, and Promise that from now on, I'm going to follow it sincerely and without break. Oh, and love the way Khushi is falling for him- and fighting it. And also love the way Arnav keeps thinking of her- without acknowledging the fact that he is falling for her too.

Like I said, Kudos Hon! Keep Writing and Update soon- you have an ardent fan in me, who's waiting on tenterhooks for the next installment. 

Cheers!
G <3

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