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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
I liked how you showed the nicer side too
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updt

luvd it

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update! Love the complex character traits. Aren't we all technicolored ? PM me when the next one is up ? 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey there!

So yeah, I know- I have commented only once on this FF and then I kinda disappeared without so much as another 'like'. But believe me when I say- I have been dying to read this ff since the time I read the first two or three chapters. Only, life got in the way- and I had to scramble to write and proof-read my stories, let alone read yours. And I need time to think and analyse every little thing a writer has written in their story, so I just kinda highlighted this one in a Must Read paint, and hoped to get back to it soon. And now, here I am! 

I have just read all the chapters- and may I just say, You, my dear, are a fantastic writer. The steady way in which you evolve each and every facet of a character- Be it Khushi, Arnav or even Anjali for that matter- is just fabulous. There was no point in this story where I found that the story line was abrupt or even disjointed. And that is a great feat. Because this shows the skill you possess. Kudos, for that Hon!

I Love how it is evolving thus far, and Promise that from now on, I'm going to follow it sincerely and without break. Oh, and love the way Khushi is falling for him- and fighting it. And also love the way Arnav keeps thinking of her- without acknowledging the fact that he is falling for her too.

Like I said, Kudos Hon! Keep Writing and Update soon- you have an ardent fan in me, who's waiting on tenterhooks for the next installment. 

Cheers!
G <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tht was beautiful kalyani. I missed their dinner more thn them I guess. Dadi better have a valid reason!! Can't wait for their dinner date!!!! Thnks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really dadi should have a better reason to call him...
Well nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww no dinner :(
Loved the update, they are being so nice to each other and their conversations are much much pleasant.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was really interesting to see these two having a normal convo, rather than going at each others throats..

the fact that arnav noted khushi s disappointment at the cancellation of the dinner date was interesting...he must have realized that she is not as immune to his charms as she purports to be..

The part about the mole had me grinning...wonderful update dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
dadi shud really have a nice reason to spoil the plans of our hero...hmp
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..:))
 Thanks for the pm