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meera30 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Genes have a way of finding each other even unknowingly i think. :)

So Khushi finds Arnav interesting :) Well they are programmed to do that, the two of them - :) But Khushi clearly hasn't heard the phrase - you can run but cannot hide :)

Devil and Deep Blue Sea - Both will catch up with her. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Brilliant progress. 


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Posted: 11 years ago

ok...so Khushi is smitten by ASR...n has accepted that too...goood progress!!!

I am sure tough time's ahead for her..with arnav n mahi around...
btw  Who's Girish? did i forget?
Anyways, Thanks for the PM...love the way the story's moving!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous conversation between khushi and mahi.. it in intense to think.. how khushi might be feeling dealing with her biological father..

khushi having crush for arnav.. excellent..
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Posted: 11 years ago
So by accepting Mahi's proposal she thinks that she can run away from Arnav ðŸ˜† ðŸ˜† ðŸ˜†
Wait till the big man comes back baby ... 
Loved the interaction between Mahi and Khushi ... why do I have a feeling that he does have an inkling about their connection ... 


Kalyani ... Just need a clarification ...
In chapter four  ... 'Ajit recalled the last thing Shashi said "Do this for Manu, do it only for her."'
who is the Manu there ... 
and who is the Manu mentioned in the chapter today ? ... I know that Mahi's wife is Manu-Manorama ... so the call must have been from her today .
Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago
reflorated thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I HATE EXAMS... RESERVED
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well she can hide all she wants but she has to face the music one day. And I adore the character you've bestowed Khushi with, powerful, strong minded, I love. Great going with the story Kalyaani!:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ha ha ha! Khushi has a full-blown crush on him i like the way u described her concern on the diabetes angle ...totally "sankadevi-ish"  😆 wish we had known how Khushi was before she learned the ugly truths and made her so sad!
Am happy she is handling herself well before "Mahi"...aaahhh finally a small word on Manu Manorama!
Didn't want her to get that solution to be away from Arnav..but u know better!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very interesting..
Thanks for the PM and update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kalyani, i like the way story is progressing. You have a talent in thinking up stories and putting it beautifully. I like your storied basically for the complexities in the relationships between characters and how they are entwined with each other. This FF is my fav from ur collection. 
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Posted: 11 years ago

So this is Manu?

This is getting interesting.