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Posted: 11 years ago
So khushi is Arnav's bua's husband's biological daughter.. That is some news..

Awesome part.. I really like ajit's character..
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Posted: 11 years ago
The plot thickens. It is getting complicated and am waiting to learn her mother's story. Love the bond between Khushi and her father, Shashi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting revelation!!
Waiting to know more about her mother's past...
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Posted: 11 years ago
so she is Mahinder's daughter?that's interesting!plz do update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: V323

BRB

 
I loved the angst in the update. Poor Khushi.
 
That happens a lot, you know. Lot of people think hatred is the emotional opposite of love. It is not. The actual opposite is apathy, where you dont give a damn what happens to the person in front of you.
 
So the fact that Khushi did not feel hatred for him, did not surprise me.
 
I was very happy with the phone-conversation.
 
So Manohar doesn't know Khushi is his daughter. That is indeed interesting. I wonder how you will take it forward.
 
I like how the story is unfurling, Rao. Kudos to you.
 
PS- Me first, on BOTH the FF's. Awesome stalker I am. =P
 
Love,
V

 
Thanks V, hope everyone understands that the pursuit of love here is not between Arnav and Khushi alone...it between various relations
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Nici0306

So khushi is Arnav's bua's husband's biological daughter.. That is some news..

Awesome part.. I really like ajit's character..

 
I liked the complicated way you brought the connection...really cute...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely chapter, hatred and apathy, terrific counterparts:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice FF. Reading for the first time today. You have a way with writing stories 👏

Wondering what would have happened in the past that Garima had Mahi's child and he never got to know it. Also wondering how did shashi accept garima along with the child. 🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read this for the first time today and am very impressed. Tight story, well written, gripping

Please accept my buddy request.  
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Edited by Kalyaani - 10 years ago