Removed the story - Page 5

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by meera30


Poor Khushi. Seems to be dealing with a lot more than just her mother's death - which in itself following something as terrible as cancer can take its toll on the best of folks

Intriguing this tale. Can't wait to read more.

PS: Ajit Raizada has a lot of negativity associated with his name thanks to Anne/ HeadOverHeels :) You are going to change that, aren't you? :)
Hey, I have not read that FF, he is good in my story and goodness is subject to one's view, as always.
Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for the dinner where hopefully a few secrets will be disclosed...what is the link between Ajit nd Shashi? Lovely update.
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Kalyaani


Hey, I have not read that FF, he is good in my story and goodness is subject to one's view, as always.

Oh I agree. That one however is irredeemable :) Human follies are what makes us and I can sense the guilt that Ajit in your tale is trying to fix...So all is well :) 
Posted: 11 years ago
This is so enigmatic.  Nice update and I have lot of questions which I am sure will answered in the upcoming updates and only if I let my cool down.  I am so worked up right now.  Why is Ajit indebted to khushi?  Why does khushi want to stay in Delhi?  And I would love to see arnav's reaction knowing that khushi has joined the companyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† and thanks for the PM
Posted: 11 years ago
This is getting more and more intriguing..i read the comments in the updated page..so all are as baffled as me and eagerly waiting for the next few chapters to unfold the mysteries...;)
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by lovespell


This is so enigmatic.  Nice update and I have lot of questions which I am sure will answered in the upcoming updates and only if I let my cool down.  I am so worked up right now.  Why is Ajit indebted to khushi?  Why does khushi want to stay in Delhi?  And I would love to see arnav's reaction knowing that khushi has joined the companyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† and thanks for the PM
 
 
I am happy; the grin does not leave my face. It was a conscious attempt to keep some intrigue around Khushi and her association with Ajit. As of now the story is on for the next 20 or odd chapters hope to stick to the plan.
 

Let me know if this sounds good. I have realized I am more comfortable with OS's now more than FF's.

Posted: 11 years ago
this is getting more n more mysterious...update soon, looking fwd to it
Posted: 11 years ago
K babyy, me love it!!! I will give a longer one after AUGUST (god, you must be hating august be now! Lol)

Love,
V
Posted: 11 years ago
Ajit recalled the last thing Shashi said "Do this for Manu, do it only for her."


who is Manu?

Did I miss somthing? or she'll be introduced in coming updates
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by latekate


Ajit recalled the last thing Shashi said "Do this for Manu, do it only for her."


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">who is Manu?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Did I miss somthing? or she'll be introduced in coming updates</font>



She will be introduced soon enough, dear.

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