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OS: Iss Pal (Part 2 on Page 3) (Page 6)

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged
oooh Archu Lady Romantic indeed!

I hope it happens like this today or monday...absolutely fantastic! Clap

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
awww so nice hope it happens

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:10am | IP Logged

I cant believe I am so late!! Be back in a bit!! Smile

Edited to add:

Heart Heart Heart Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

Sigh!!!!

Ah Archu..!! I so wish it happens this way!!  What a beautiful shot! And I am glad its a two shot! Smile You do justice to your title you know.. Lady romantic!!! Heart I love the scene as well as the details there..!! You have put Khushi's mind, her perspective, her confusion, her turmoil and finally her surrender so beautifully..!

The first part.. the mention to the fireflies on that ill fated night.. how can she forget them, the other night when she was so scared of the dark and the looming danger! And then again, when she thinks of the lights on the poolside on her birthday.. both dark days, and the man to light up her world, the same, her husband! But one she is so confused about! The one she is so angry with yet cant stop worrying about!! Archu.. this was beautiful!

Second part.. Khushi's embarrassment at HP's interference earlier, thinking of the fall from the cliff in this moment of danger, the moments of dhak-dhak, her refusal to believe that she fell for the trap and lost the bet, Arnav's smirks, his smile, his concern, his teasing, his declarations and the passionate kiss.. wow!! Day Dreaming Each detail just perfect!

Loved loved loved it!!! I hope you keep coming up with these treats for us!! As often as possible!!

PS: I know who the four people are! Embarrassed Thank you for the mention!
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Thank you to everyone here for your comments - this was my first time writing an OS and I had absolutely no idea how it would turn out! Very sweet of everyone, and hope you enjoyed it! Hug

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:48am | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Awesome...!!!!!simply gr8

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Archu kitna pyara lekhti hai , girl you sure are a romance Queen. Beautiful scenes wish GH could use this piece. Loved it. Clap

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged

Hug forgive my super late appearance Archu !

 
 
 
Creating scenes like this with words is very hard and I'm transfixed with what I've just seen here. 
 
Amazing emotional descriptions aside ... it's the way your words made me feel inside that count. 
 
I was affected by every word ... I didn't need to see that tree to see how much it scared Khushi or the way her heart is in conflict and as she squirmed, my Blushing rose without any help from my imagination ... yours did the trick !!!
 
Loved it ... please keep writing and inspiring hearts who encourage us and suppport us ... that's what it's all about ! ... sharing the joy of love in all it's forms ... oooh me got all mushy, will stop now Embarrassed x

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