Dekha Ek Khwaab

FF: Tum Miley -Discontinued Pg 44 - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey awesum .. nd ya it was preety long ... plzz post next partsoon nd thnxx fr d pm .. :)

plzz pm next time

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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: shana0127

u have really kept DEK alive prachurya as reading ur FF reminds me of the time when i used to wait impatiently  for ur witten update on AT chat thread and u used to give live written update of episode .

It seems DEK is still going on and I am reading its live update.

Just one request dear pls give a bit of line spacing in dialogues as I really mix them up while reading and have to read twice to get it.


Do it only if u feel ok with it as I still like it anyways 👏

Thanks for keeping DEK alive as ur FF give me feel of a live update.



@Prachu: In red: I also agree with the spacing part... kinda gets tough to read in 1 go..and have to focus harder many times & I end up mixing up lines too
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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome part

so Uday found out their plan and made manyata come back to roka but manyata was already feeling guilty anyway for betraying her father... i know Jay will do something worse or taunt Manyata but uday is also harrasing Manyata in a way anyway... upar se aakash bhi to hai stupid kahin ka...
i hope manyata ki problems door ho jaye aur at least wo uday ki feelings ko samjhe...
 
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome! awesome! You have kept the real spirit of DEK in ur FF! Uday was so true to his character! And I loved the 'spot boy' part. It was hilarious!
 
Thanks for the pm. Your FF is one of the best, if not the best, in IF land.
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Posted: 11 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE!! Loved it!! Plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update
aww uday found her he shudnt be looking at peoples phones 😆
thx 4 da pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u 4 keeping DEK alive .lov u 4 dis.a big hug.
as a reader m always hungry/thirsty so the length is ok.
 once again m speechless.can't describe my feeling properly.just one word - loved it.loved  it.loved it loved it loved it loved it.loved it.loved it.loved it. loved it loved it.m crazy.loved it totally.loved manveer scene.its beautiful.try 2 update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Prachurya, I was a silent reader of your FF for a while but these last two parts were tooo good, I had to comment! Reading your FF is actually like watching DEK, its so similar and reminds me of the earlier episodes with Manveer nok-jhok! You should have been the CV of the show lol. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Part
 
finally manveer roka is done
 
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
great job prachu. Currently I m in Bermuda on family vacation but sab ki nazaron se chhup kar room mein aa gayee sirf aur sirf isse read karne k liye..

Thanks a ton!!!