FF:Kismat Ka Khel Part 26 Page 145 (28/8/2012) - Page 84

👏Wow Sheetal, you really are awesome, the way you penned  the emotions, just so beautiful.. Love it..Eagerly waiting for the next update..

wow awesomr update... aab toh priya ka heart melt kar do na...


bichare ram ko maaf kardo he is trying so hard...   ...


poor ram...

next romantic update dena potraying priyas love for ram...

please will be waiting for that...

so ram has plan a surprise party for priya cool now what's in store 4 priya  @ for us 😃

superb update sheetal ram has planned a surprise party for priya nice 

Sry for being late. Ram u hv to control yaar otherwise priya will again become sherni. by the way sheetal di u know onething that u r sweetest than me. Update soonEdited by Pinkjali - 11 years ago

Wow!! Awesome update yaar! 👏
Ram's dialogues are killing me! 😉 Loved them!!
Can't wait for the next part! Bechara Ram! Kitna tadpayegi yeh Priya! 😛
Fab writing.. You're too good!! 😃 Plz continue soon..
Thanks a lot for the PM dear..

Amazing part written really well 👏
Thanx for the pm and continue soon 😃

Superb update Sheetal...thanks for the PM...😳

Originally posted by: Lavi_961

Woww!! Awesme man! Hw cn u write so well! Awesme.. Awesme.. Awesme!! Thanks! Eager to read the nxt part..

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH LAVI 🤗❤️!!! That is really so so sweet of you... 😳

I will have the next part up soon

Originally posted by: PunyaS

Sheetal, 👏👏👏

Seriously, how can someone be so good writing emotions??!!

I absolutely love the way you delve deep into the hearts of the characters and bring out their unexplained emotions, according to the situations they are caught in. Priya's anger is justified. And then that perplexed feeling when she is resisting Ram's presence is beautifully portrayed. Ram's longing as well as restrain is so natural. He is, after all, a sensitive and gentle man.

Love the way this FF is progressing.

Thanks so much for this one Sheetal.

You are terrific!

Punya I am so touched by your comment!! 😳 Thank you is not even enough to explain my gratitude right now!! I just want to give you a BIG 🤗 for this comment!! And I hope that as I move the story forward you will enjoy it just as much!!
❤️