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||Too late to apologize|| KR SS :Part 6 Pg85: (Page 84)

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
guys ab kya doing mehdi k karan mera to hath hi ek jgha per fix ho gya

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Aroma mai behosh hojaongi yahan..!
kitna shor hai

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Abshu_Arsha

Aroma mai behosh hojaongi yahan..!
kitna shor hai
bhane mat bna or update kar jaldi wo b long wala now
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged

LOLthnk u for cmpletng demandSmile  but burai was goin on ok no prob..duhh..

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Part 6



( back to commentry)




ok so wee are back an yaa dono team hai bohut josh mai let see ye aakhi 30 mins mai kon jeetega..ok so match start ho chaka hai and as usual boys ke paas ball hai abhay ne ball pass ki maan ko kria maan ke peeche but maan apni height ka fayda utha rahe hai..kria ne jump ki and OMG kria ko chot lagayi hai match abhi rokta hai..!



Kria was on d grnd she got hurt on her knee..all of dem ran towards kria ..



Kria: guys its ok ..im fine..



Karan: aise kaise kria ur fine dekho kitna khoon nikal raha hai..cum lets go..



Kria: no karan u guys cntinue im going..



Karan: but..



Khushi: kria ur rite hum log cntinue karte hai karan..cum kria mai tumhe chod dete ho..



Seeing karan dis tensed about kria rey was feeling jealous he hated it so he banged his chair and left ..



Taani: rey..



Nil: let him go taani..



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Kria was w8ing for nurse to dress her wound but she wasnt der..


Kria: god ye kaha reh gayi..


rey was passing by from medical room he noticed kria was sitting der he went inside he dint want to but dun knw y but atomatically his feets moved inside..Kria was shocked to see rey der..


Kria: reyaansh aap ..app yahan..?


Rey: wo actually..he was lost in her eyes her hairs were flying and sticking on her lips so famous KRIYAANSH LOOK LOOK WIND WIND start hogaya..! rey moved towards her his eyes were still on her..his instant gaze was scaring Kria ( hungry tiger ) poor kria she couldnt move bak also rey went near her touched her hair and tucked dem behind her ears..his other hand moved on her bare leg ( Ps she changed into shorts for dressing btw shld i shw u BB match but i guess u guys are intrested to knw about KR na ) he by mistake touched her wound and she winced in pain he realised wat he did..

Rey: kria im sry wo maine galti se..
 
Kria:its okay reyaansh..
 
Rey: tumne ab tak dressing nae ki..
 
Rey din wanted to care for her but dun knw y he was talkng to her..
 
Kria: nae wo nurse aayi nae..
 
Rey: kria wo tumhaari knee bohut zyada bleed kar rae hai..isme jaldi band aid lagao..
 
Kria: reyaansh abhi nurse aajaye wo laga legi..!
 
Rey: tum na bohud stubbourn ho gimme mai kar deta ho..
 
Kria: nae mai karlungi..
 
he keeps his finger on her lips..she is staring him and is confused y he is soo tensed bout it..Kria wanted to hug him yea she hated him for wat he did wid her but she loved him also..rey wid all care and concern for he was cleaning her wound ..
 
Rey: sambhal ke nae khel sakti thi,,
 
Kria: wo..wo
 
Rey chuckles..(itna bura bhi nae hai guys rey Embarrassed its my oops ramairas chabilal wala rey)
 
Rey: hogaya..
 
Kria: thx reyaansh..
 
Rey: waise tumhe itna accha bb kisne khelna sikhaya..?
 
Kria: hmm karan ne..
 
Rey: ohh..haan wahi ho sakta hai *irritated+jealous* maine jab tumhe sikhane ki koshish ki thi to kyu nahi sikha..
 
Kria: reyaansh aapne sirf ek baar hi sikaya tha..!
 
Rey: haan wo kya hai na doosri baar tumne chance hi nahi dia..
 
Kria: haaw aur jab chance dene aayi thi to mujhe bhagaya kisne tha..
 
she realised wht she said..
 
Rey: kria..
 
Kria: reyaansh leave it shayad universe ji ne aapko kisi aur ko BB sikhane ke liye banaya hai...
 
REy: yea tum kya bb kar rahi ho..
 
Kria: rey..
 
just den gals came hooting and chearing inside d first aid room rey ran frm der..
 
Kria: kya hua tum sab itna shor kyu macha rahe ho..?
 
Geet: hum jeet gaye ..
 
Kria: KYAA..?
 
Vishaka: yea dude WE WON..!
 
Aruhi: boys ka chehra dekhne layak tha..
 
khushi: haan guys mai to abhi bhi hasing..waise kria how is ur knee..
 
Kria: its fine guys..
 
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taani and oders were w8ing for rey..
 
rey came smiling : hey guys..
 
Taani: rey aap kahan the..?
 
Rey: wo washroom gaya tha..
 
Sharon: ok so guys lets go back im tired yaar faltu mai aaye..
 
Simmi: yea dude isse accha rinni ke saath delhi ghoomte..
 
swayam: ok chalo..
 
Taani: nahii..!
 
Rey: kyu..?
 
Taani: three legged race kon karega mere saath..!
 
Rey in his mind : ohh no..!
 
Taani : chalo rey
 
she grabbed him der were sum oder couples taani and rey went der..kria also arrived to see d race..
she saw rey and taani together she was jealous to see dem ..
 
Kria * to her self* : reyaansh kitna bada casanova hai abhi mere saath tha medical room mai ab taani ke saath..ufoo kria tumhe kya waise bhi wo uski gf hai and he LOVES HER tumhe to usne ek saal pehle hi boldia tha uhh cheapster .. mai bhi usse dikha dungi dat i dun like him..mai rae mai participate karungi..karan kidhar hai..
 
Kria: guys karan ko dekha..?
 
Karan: tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye..
 
Kria: karan can u do me a favour..
 
Karan: tumhaare liye jaan bhi ready hai..
 
Kria: den mere saath three leged race mai participate karo..
 
Karan: WHAT? TUM PAGAL HO..
 
pIA: kria tum kahi nae jaogi..
 
Kria: guys plss..
 
Karan:no
 
Vishaka: are u out of ur mind dude..? tumhaari knee dekho..!
 
Kria: mai karungi dats final..!
 
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Precap: three legged race and...,...
 
 


Edited by Abshu_Arsha - 29 July 2012 at 1:05pm

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
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Awesome update abshu

Rey cares about Kriya nice to see that

Kriya is right Rey is such a casinova 

Kriya jealous LOL

So will be Rey LOL


Edited by Himaniahir - 29 July 2012 at 5:50pm
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Wow. . .
Awsome dude. ,
jst lovd it. . .
Rey k dil mai kriya k liye abhi bhi feelings h. . .
Hw cool iz tat. . . .
At last we got a KR scene. . .
Rey iz so concern 4 kriya. . ,
hw sweet of him. , . .
Kaash yeh tarey getz out n kriyaansh b back 2gethr. . .
3 legged race. . .
Wow. . .intresting. . .
Tarey n karan n kriya r takng part. . .
Wow. . .tatz awsome. . . . . .
Luckng 4ward to it. . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . .
N,
plz
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pm me wen u update nxt. . .
Plz plz plz. . .
Egarly waitng 4 the nxt part. . .
Update really really really soon. . .
N dnt 4get to pm me. . . . . . . . .
I vl b waitng. . . . . . . . . .. .
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Superb part Clap...
Rey and Kria dono Jealous hoing LOL...
Gosh Rey still cares for Kria Day Dreaming...
N your Commentary was Awesome Big smile...
Loved it Heart...
Waiting for three legged race Wink...
Rey ne sahi kaha tha Taani thek se chal to sakti nahi hai Three Legged Race kaise kare gi LOL...
Continue soon...
N plz pm me next time Embarrassed.

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