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||Too late to apologize|| KR SS :Part 6 Pg85: (Page 50)

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Plzz.. Update!!

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Awww dis was sweet update
n love lawrance ki masti
n hate taani ki smile Dead
waiting 4 nxt part

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
                                                                Part 5
 
Location: Atrium
 
Kirti: ok kria sab hogaya na..
 
Kria: yes mam sab kuch ready hai..
 
Kirti: ok den jo bhi 400 metre race mai part le rahe hai tell dem ki get ready cux half hour mai we have to start the competition ..
 
Vishaka: yea mam..
 
Kirti: geet partcipant ki list ready hai..?
 
Geet: yea mam..
 
Kirti: Aruhi and Pia aap dono check karo ki saare stalls and first aid sab kuch ready hai..
 
Pia & Aruhi : okay Miss.Kirti..
 
Kirti: well den I hope sab sahi ho..
 
Khushi: dont wry mam humne kia hai to sab sahi hi hoga..
 
Kirti: so St.Louis ko inform kia..? cux wo log bhi random games mai partcipate kar sakte hai..
 
Kria: Mam I dun knw ki wo aayenge ya nae but I will ask Arjun or Karan ke wo log aarahe hai ya nahi..
 
Kirti: ok den all d best gals..Hope ki tum log aaj un boys ko harado bohut proud hai na shubhankar ki see my boys u all have to prove dem ki gals bhi kam nahi..!
 
Gal *smiles* : thx mam..
 
Pia: and haan dis tym we will only win..
 
Kirti: dats d spirit..k den mujhe aur sab check karna hai..
 
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Location: Hotel..
 
Rey: guys mujhe Karan ne bola dat aaj sprts day hai and dey are calling us..
 
Sharon: dat gr8 lets go den..
 
Neha: no Sharon Neha not wanting to go...
 
Swayam: den theek hai sharon aur mai jaa rahe hai if u wanna cum so..
 
Rey: k dude waise bhi mera mood nahi aana ka so im not gonna cum..
 
Taani: Rey aap aise kaise nahi jayenge mujhe jaana hai so aapko bhi aana padega..
 
Rey: taani tum jao na..mera mood nahi..
 
Taani: dekh lia rey aap mujhse pyaar hi nahi karte dats y ur not cuming wid me..!
 
Rey: Taani tum bhi na..*sigh* ok fine mai chalunga..
 
Rinni: mai to Amar ke saath delhi mai shopping karungi so im not going..
 
Bharat: mai bhi tumhare aur amar ke saath chalta hu fir mai kya karunga wahan akele..
 
Swayam: ok den me and Sharon,Rey and Taani,Nilesh and Simmi jayenge..
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Location: College
 
Swaron,Nimmi, Taani and Rey were at college now dey went and took der seats..
 
Taani: rey aapko pata hai maine extra games ka board dekha jisme koi bhi participate kar sakta hai..
 
Rey: accha..
 
Taani: rey u knw wat couple game bhi hai..!
 
Sharon: really OMG mai aur swayam part lenge .
 
Swayam: okay..but games kya hai..?
 
Taani: haan but sirf ek hi hai three legged race..
 
Rey: ohhk but taani are u sure humai isme part lena chahiye..cuz im sure hum isme haarenge..
 
Taani: kya matlab..?
 
Rey: matlab tum to aise hi girte rehti ho and agar mere and tumhare legs saath mai tied kar diye jaaye to..
 
Taani: to kya haan..aap mera mazzak bana rahe ho..?
 
Rey: arey nahi nahi mera matlab ye hai ki agar tumhe chot lag gayi to..
 
Taani: ok..fine baad mai dekhenge par hum khelenge ..
 
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Location : locker room..
 
Kria: guys race khtam hogayi hai and ab Basket ball,volley ball and swimming bachi hai so lets go ..
 
Vishaka: dude aaj to in boys ki band baja ni hai..
 
Aruhi: yeh Vishaka..
 
Geet: ab chalo..!
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Location BB court..
 
Rey: guy mai yahan pak gaya hu bhte bhte kya ho raha hai dude..! and nil tu kya dekh raha hai..
 
Nil: Kuch bhi kaho but inka college ka bb court staduim ki tarah lagta hai..itna bada..! Shocked
 
Swayam: lol nil waise ye gals kahan rehgayi ..
 
Rey: lemon spoon race ha pagal hai sab teddy bears jitne ke liye..
 
gals enters..
 
Sharon: talking bout us guys..waise swayam see kitna cutee teddy jeeta maine..
 
Swayam: iske liye tumne spoon apne mooh ke andar rakha..
 
Sharon: spoon ek dum new tha ..and maine usse dettol se saaf karwaya tha..
 
Rey: kya hua taani tum nahi jeeti..
 
Simmi: nae na iska lemon girgaya tha..
 
Nil *murmers* :isko saari cheeze giri hui milti hai kya..?
 
Rey: aww taani koi baat nahi ..
 
Swayam: guys start hone wala hai match..
 
Rey: im not intrested..
 
Sharon: ya waise bhi us miss kripa and vishaka ko kon dekhe..huh..
 
Swayam: Kria ko bb sikhaya kisne..?
 
Rey: sikhaya hoga uske BF ne..
 
Taani: Kria ka Bf kon hai..?
 
Nil: dude karan dekha nahi kaise saath mai rehte hai..
 
Simmi: yea but dey said na dey are only frnds..
 
Rey: kehne se kya ho raha hai
 
  *camera ji now lets focus on the match* LOL
 
Boys and gals aamne saamne staduim mai zoro shoro macha hua hai Kirti and shubhankar are smirking each oder..wahan except rey jo sunglases pehn ke faltu ki comics padh raha hai wo bhi ulti cuz he is peeping on d grnd to see kria yes ofcrss she was looking hot in red..college ki terrace pe jo stalls lage the wo stalls wale bhi St.Lawrence ka match dekhne ke liye peping from der..LOL
dono team is giving tashan to each oder..shubhankar went wid whistle in his hand and ball in his right hand..
 
SHubhankar: k guys den r u ready..?
 
Abhay: ready to hum hamesha hi rehte hai..infact in gals ko hi tym lagta hai..
 
Pia: abhay tum na..
 
Shubhankar: guys plss lets start d game yahan no fights k..
 
Kria: ok sir bring it on..
 
Karan: jeetenge to hum hi kria and is baar bhi trophy hamari hi hogi..
 
Vishaka: karAn u knw wat hum bhi harange nahi..
 
Vishal: lets see..
 
(ps guys mai commentry karing iss match ki so I hope scene describe na karna pade cux commentry mai hi pata chal jaying na..ab dont ask me mai St.Lawrence kaise pohchi) LOL
 
Coach Shubhankar ne ball pehki hawa mai and karan jump karke ball legaye gals unko cover karke ball lene ki koshish kar rahi hai but karan ne ball maan ko paas kardi and ab maan balll bounce karte karte jaa rahe hai goal ki taraf unhe ne ball ko pheka goal mai but geet ne ball ko goal ke andar jaane se rok liya..! but ye kya wahan se sam ne ball catch karli and ab wo jump kara and GOAL..!
 
Khushi: W*F..
 
                                           to ab hamara score hogaya Boys 1 and girls 0
 
ok dis tym Kria ke haath mai ball hai kria ball ko bounce karke jaa rahi hai karan unke peeche hai karan is trying his best to take d ball from kria but kria unhe chance nahi de rahi ye kria ne jump ki and ball aruhi ko de di but ye kya karan ne ball pakadne ke jagah kria ka haath pakad liya hai but sadly karan ko ball nahi mili..aruhi goal ki taraf jaa rahi hai baal mai paseena sundar si haseen ban kar unhe ne jum kia and GOAL..!
 
                 Game kaafi intresting chal raha hai Boys 1 and Girls 1
 
 Abhi baal hai Abhay ke paas pia is struggling wid him but lag raha hai dat abhay pia ko pareshaan kar rahe hai..Vishaka peeche is aayi and wats dis abhay is not in his sense vishaka itne aasani se ball le gayi ye kaise well chodo abhay is now in hosh and gals are in josh pia abhay ko thumbs down karke chali gayi and isse tym mai Vishaka ne jump karke Goal bana liya..wow..
 
                                               Score: boys 1 Girls 2
 
Girls are leading now waise koi baat nahi abhi sirf ek number se hi lead kar rahi hai and waise bhi half tym hona baaki hai mere dost gals again josh ke saath ball ko bounce karna shuru kardia but dis tym hamare Karan bhai ne Aruhi ke haat se baazi mar li kria madam unke peech vishaka aage..but Karan ne jump lagayi and hogaya hamara gooaall..!
 
                            iske ke saath hamare half tym hota hai ..!
                                      
                                            Score hai boys 2 gals 2
*back from commentry box*
 
Kria: guys we have to win sum how..
 
Pia: yea gals..
 
just den boys came..
 
Karan: kya hua thak gayi..
 
Vishal: kaisi baat kar rahe ho tum karan gals hai ofcrzz thakengi,,
 
Aruhi: tum log na..
 
Khushi: bolne do aruhi inki bolti baad mai band ho jayegi..
 
meanwhile at d staduim
 
Sharon: god mai to thak gayi yahan..
 
Taani: sahi mai..rey aap kyu itne chup ho..
 
rey was lost in his own thoughts dun knw y but he dint lyk karan being dis close to kria..
 
Rey: han kya hua..
 
Swayam: tu kahan khoya khoya sa hai..
 
Rey: kuch nahi bas aise hi..
 
Swayam: hmm
 
Rey in his mind : kyu rey tumhe itna bora lag raha hai uss karan ke saath dekhte huye usne hi tumhe choda tha aur use kia tha wo karan ko bhi usekar rahi hogi but y do I care leave it dude u have taani now so chill..
 
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thak gayi guys seriously ab baaki ka kal.. Embarrassed
 
Precap: gals winnig bb boys sad three legged race mai hoing aamna saamna..
 
 


Edited by Abshu_Arsha - 26 July 2012 at 2:21pm

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
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Awesome update abshu Smile

Poor Rey has be with Taani but he deserves it Big smile

Poor boys gone loss in bb LOL


Edited by Himaniahir - 26 July 2012 at 2:28pm

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
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but sunday ko dono unres kar doogi pakka 
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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 1:54am | IP Logged
awsome updateeeSmile
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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 2:14am | IP Logged

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 6:01am | IP Logged
It was amazing...but again u did not PM me!!:(:(:(
Anyways plzzz next tm PM me...I really wanna read this ff!!:):)

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