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||Too late to apologize|| KR SS :Part 6 Pg85: (Page 16)

-CRJ- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Abshu_Arsha

Cry sab mujhpe chillaying..

kaun chillaying

v only asking for a update LOL

kuhu_Arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 9:36am | IP Logged
awsum awsumm awsumm ss,,,,,,,luv it luv it luv vry much,,,,mindblowing supr rocking ss,,,,

i realy want esa kuch ho d3 me,,,,,,toh d3 phir se hit list me aa jayega,,,,,cnt wait 4 nxt update plz plz plz jaldi update karona

ps i m so sry 4 late cmt 
Fate.Intervined IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
waiting for rey n kria meeting.
thnx for pm...
nature2 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
guys itizzz
apurva100 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
plz next part update kar de na...
Mujhe sab ke faces ke reaction jan na hai
specially rey ke..
-Pia- Goldie

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:31am | IP Logged
superb Monkey Icon Cici
mindblowingMonkey Winks
outstandingMonkey Icon
kya bolu yaarMonkey Icons Cici
mere ko tere ff se pyaar hoga huMonkey Winks
tune jo nayi characters choose ki woh bohut masat hain
especially karan,he is soo cuteMonkey Icon
kria aur karan ko rey ke samne couple banaMonkey Emoticons Yoyo dena,rey ko ithna jala dena ki woh kria saath aise dubra karna se pehle1000 times socheMonkey Emoticons
even if its sad ending i would be happy.
par please hum logo ko long udates dena ok
jaldi update karna

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Awesome story.cont soon n pm me.i sincerely hope d louisans suffer n suffer n suffer n beg 4r forgiveness 2 kria on der knees n even den she shuld take aons to forgive after dey redeem demselves over n over.

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
ok guys so im back wid d update..hmm u guys were gussa on me cux maine cliff hanger de diya here u go wid d update..
                                            PART 3
Girl: fine im going..
Girl 2: Kria w8 mai bhi aarahi hu tumhare saath..
Kria: theek hai vishaka ab chal bhi..
Kria and vishaka were muving towards kirti slowly (kirti and louians backs were facing Kria and Vish) Vishakla noticed dat louians are here she poked kria..
Vish: kria aagaye wo log..
Kria turns her head to see dem she went numb..she tried to control her self vishaka patted her back..
Vishaka: kria control k tum un sab ke liya nahi rone wali..
Kria nods her head..karan notices kria and vishaka .. karan kuch kar miss interupter aur vish ko mam se aaj bachana he padega..
Kirti: wo ab tak nahi aayi..dis is it aaj mai unhe principle ke paas leke jaongi..
Karan went towards kria and hugged her tightly..kria was shocked wid dis action of him not only kria evry one ..
Karan: kria mam se bolna dat tum sports day kay preparations me phas gayi thi..!
Kria: mai kaise bolungi..
Karan : shut up and do as i say..
he left kria..Lwariance were shocked dat karan hugged kria as if she is his gf..louians were shocked to see kria der (note vish is hiding behind d pillar cux she dont want to listen kirti mams lecture..)
Kria: sry mam..
Louians dint know how to react it was more shocking den b4 it was totally unexpected..rey's face went pale and body went numb he cant beleive what just happened kria ignored dem she dint even looked at dem once...rey kept on staring her she was changed her hairs were now long,silky and straight she loosly plaited her hairs and was wearing black skinny jeans wid checked aqua and black shirt..taani forgot to blink her eyes she was scared if kria will take rey away from her she turned to look rey's face he was just staring at kria..lawriance peeped to see louians face and chuckled...
Kirti: kria its been 20 min since im here kahan thi tum..
Kria: Mam sry wo..wo..mai..
Kirti: wo .. wo mai kya hai ye kria..? maine tumse e expect nahi kia tha..
Kria was staring at d floor in embaressment..
Vishaka gained courage and came out..
Vishaka: MAM..!

Louians looked whu is der except rey he was still lost in kria..dis was enuf to blow louians head der were shocked + surprised to see Vishaka ..
Kirti: Vishak kahan thi aap..?
Vishaka: Mam mai ..wo actually hum haan mam actually we were busy wid sports day preparations..
B4 Kirti could say anything her cell started ringing..
Kirit: hello ..? yes, sir..yea im cuming..
Kirto: ok..guys meet louians..louians meet Kria and Vishaka hamare dance team ke best dancrs and hamare irresponsible CS,ACS..
Kirti leaves from atruim..
Lwariance started laughing on Kria..
Kria: dat was not funny at all..
Vishaka:dude tu kaise hai..mam mai wo wo mam..haha kuch seekh mujhse..
Geet: chal chodo kria meet st.louis ki dance team se..*chuckle*
Kria: hi... *in a low voice..*
no one replied to her..
Vishaka: hey guys wasup..? hun...
Bharat was really happy to see vishaka and kria ..
Maan: btw karan tune kria ko hug kyu kia..?
Karan: hug koi kaam ka bhi nahi aaya..
rey remebers d hug and gives a dirty look to him..
Khushi: wht do u mean kaam nahi aaya..?
Kria: stop it guys..wo hug sirf isne mujhe bachane ke liya kia tha..
Vishaka: hug se log bach sakte hai not bad dude waise mujhe laga dat i saved u from Kirti mam..
Evry one starts laughing except kria and louians..
Khushi: ok guys come on koi inhe college to dikhaye hamara..!
Vishaka: dude mai dikha deti hu..!
Vishal: Vish mai chal raha hu tere saath..
Karan: ok kool so kria lets practice..
Kria: kya..?
Pia: ur cuming wid us babes sprts day hai yaad hai..and waise bhi kal sunday hai sirf preprations mai tym nikal jayega..
Geet: yea so cum on aaj waise bhi we are free for 2 periods..
Abhay: jao karo practice jeetenge to hum hi..
ok i knw bakwaas tha but mera lappy ka charger is not wrking so bohut mushkil se type kia sab kuch,,.. Cry

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