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I dont care Rajpreet ff Part 8 Oct 16 updated (Page 3)

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Am shocked...rajsimi ka chakkar kya hai huh...

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At night Rajbeer was about to go back to the Base Camp when he crossed by Preeto's room. She had curled her hair and it looked so cute on her shoulder length hair. She was wearing a dark green tank top and grey sweats. The wind blew on her face and she just looked so beautiful. Rajbeer's mind- stop it Rajbeer tumhe Simran ke barre mein sochna chahiye. Preeto ke bare mein nahi.

He left and went back to the Base Camp. Preeto thought ' Rajbeer aur Simran ek dosre ke paas hai mujhe kyun itni jalan ho rahi hai. Babaji please  help me. Mein Rajbeer se kya pyaar karti hon… nahi nahi Rajbeer Simran ka hai tera nahi.'

Morning…

Simran had called Rajbeer in her new room again. Simran was wearing Preeto's clothes. She was in her sleeve red and yellow salwar kamez (the one she had worn when Rajpreet confessed). Rajbeer was shocked seeing her in Preeto's clothes. Rajbeer- yeh tumne kya pehena hai

Simmi- Preeto ke kapde hai mujhpe keyse lag rahe hai.

Rajbeer- tum toh iss duniya ke sabse ugliest outfit ko bhi ek kubsurat outfit baanah sakti ho. I don't know preeto ka taste itna boora kyun tha. I mean just look at her clothing. Kitna kharab lagti thi woh in kapdo mein.

Simmi- I know aur patta nahi iss duniya ka kunsa insaan aisi behenji se pyaar karta.

Rajbeer laughed with Simran. Simmi- Rajbeer tum  mera ek kam karogay kya

Rajbeer- of course

She pulled out a clear fancy bottle with water in it. Rajbeer- yeh kya hai

Simmi- blackmagic

Rajbeer- black magic u r kidding me. Tum aisi stupid chise kyun maanti ho

Simmi- if u love me than do this stupid thing… Preeto ke khane mein iss pani ke  kuch bonde daldo.

Rajbeer- thik hai.

Rajbeer goes to the dinning table. Bani had prepared Preeto's office. She was gonna go give it to Preeto when Rajbeer insisted that he'd take it. Bani agreed without knowing anything. Rajbeer went to Preeto's room. He entered it and saw Preeto was still sleeping. He took out the magical water and added 2 drops of it in it. He then woke Preeto and gave her the juice. She drank it. Rajbeer had no idea what it was gonna do to her. 

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
what the hell is Simran on crack or what? And rajbeer he is being a part of Simran's black magic. Dont believe this
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Simran is hell and Rajbeer toh chamcha bangaya simi ka huh...
waiting for next partBig smile
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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
Mid-night...
Preeto was sleeping. She hears her bedroom door opening, she quickly gets up. Preeto- kun hai
No answer and she hears someone giggling. She gets up. She then hears someone whisper- Preeto tumhari zindagi mere haath mein hai. Then she hears a vicious laugh. Preeto turns back and sees no one. She comes out of her room. Preeto then sees the shadow of two people in the corner of the living room. Preeto- kun hai
No response and the two people giggle more. Preeto- kun hai
She goes to where they were and turns the lights on. Her heart breaks from what she sees. Rajbeer and Simmi were having a liplock. Preeto- Simran Rajbeer tum donu
They break the kiss and look towards Preeto. Simran- o Preeto tum
Preeto- Rajbeer tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.
Rajbeer- tumhe kya lagta hai.
Preeto- but
Simmi- o plz just shut up... Rajbeer tum mujhse keh rahe the na ke tum mujhe apne pyaar ka proof dey sakte ho
Rajbeer- ya
Simmi looks at the floor and picks up a glass bottle and hands it to Rajbeer. Simmi- kill her
Preeto gasps and Rajbeer chuckles. Rajbeer- isse yeh meri kun lagti hai mein isse asani se maar sakta hon.
Sim- do it
Rajbeer- agar tumhe isse khushi milti hai toh.
Preeto- Rajbeer
Rajbeer- im sorry sweetheart lekin Simran mera pyaar hai aur tum mera khilona.
Saying that he quickly takes the bottle from Simran's hand and smashes it on Preeto's head, ruining her face.

Preeto suddenly wakes up. It was morning. And as soon as she opens her eyes she sees Rajbeer smiling at her. Rajbeer- kya hua boora sapna.
Preeto nodds. Rajbeer- chalo Bj tumhe breakfast key liye bola rahi hai.
Preeto- mujhe bhook nahi hai.
Rajbeer- as u wish
Rajbeer leaves her room and Preeto is still in shook. Preeto thought- nahi mein Rajbeer se pyaar karti hon aur woh shayad mujhse pyaar nahi karta lekin woh mere saath aisa nahi karega.
A tear escaped her eye and she wiped it.


Preeto's ex room...
Simmi was the bed and Rajbeer had his head in her lap. Rajbeer- weyse Simmi usse pani mein kya tha jo tumne mujhe kaha Preeto ko deyne ke liye
Simmi- black magic
R- i know that too lekin uska asaar kya hota hai.
Simmi- woh pani pi ne se bhaut boore nightmares atte hai. Sadly uski life toh mein ley nahi sakti lekin usse nightmares zaroor dey sakti hon. Wesye tumne kitne drops diye the usse.
R- five to six
Simmi- thats it... fifteen drops deyne pe asaar sabse best hota hai.
Rajbeet- come on Simran tumne kitni mean keyse ho sakti ho tum pehle toh aisi nahi thi.
Simmi- lekin agar ko mera boyfriend mujhse door karna chahega toh yeh toh bhaut kam sazaa hai uske liye.
Rajbeer- Simmi mujhse ek bhaut zaroori kam a padha hai. I have to go
Simmi- bye
Rajbeer- bye
Rajbeer got up and left.


He drove to a familiar place... to his grandma's shop. He got the keys from his pocket and opened the lock. The lights were not on but he saw something right on the wall in front of him. He closed the door behind him and walked to the wall. All the walls had writing over it. It either said I'M SORRY or I LOVE YOU. Front the writing you could tell that the writer was very helpless and upset. He finally reached the wall and he looked like he was about to cry. He whispered- Im sorry lekin mein kya karta agar yeh natak nahi kiya hota toh tumhara ghar chala jaata aur tumhari family raste pe a jaati. So you could tell that he was talking to Preeto's painting. Rajbeer- i love u... lekin tumne mujhe iss halat mein lakey khadah kar diya hai ke nahi mein tumse pyaar dekha sakta hon ya nahi meri aur Simran ke jhoot pyaar ko khatam kar sakta hon. I promise jo tumne akele saha hai wahi mein uss Neelam ko ehsaas karaonga. Simran se pyaar ka natak karke usse choudonga. Lekin bas aur din nahi sirf kuch aur din uske baad mein Simran ko apni life se nikal donga aur fir mera saara diyaan sirf tumhari yaadash pe hoga. Im so sorry ek baar mein tumhara ghar bachalon, uss ghar ki taraf meri jo responsibility hai usse khatam karlon uske baad mein apne pyaar ka farz bhi nibhaonga. I love you so much. Simran ne boutique ke kuch papers paad liye hai. Agle hafte uska lawyer aega papers ready karke. Simran ko apne lawyer pe bhaut bharosa hai lekin un papers mein ek paper aur hoga. Mera daalah hua paper. Mein Simran ko wapas boutique bheej donga aur papers ley longa. Simran fir jo documents sign karegi woh tumhare ghar ko azaad karaga. Uske baad uss bitch ka humari life mein koi sayaa bhi nahi hoga.

He has a flashback...
Same night as Preeto's accident. He goes to the cliff where Preeto fell off of. He didnt find anything big but still was suspicious about NA and Simmi in her accident. He looked down at the ground and saw that there were tire marks. He then thought of people that Preeto knew and owned cars. The first name- Ahluwalia
He drove his car to Dhruv's house and bribed the watchman to answer his questions. R- koi raat ke baara bhaajay bahar gaya tha.
W- han woh Neelam ji ki car gae thi.
R- unki car kaha hai.
W- waha
He pointed to  NA's car and Rajbeer walked up there. He examined the car and then saw tiny blood drops on the headlights. At first he didn't believe it and then looked a little closer and found a little piece of Preeto's clothing attached to the side of the headlight. Then he was sure that NA had done this entire thing.

Just then his phone rings at of course its that bitch Simran. Simran- hi Rajbeer
R- han jaan bolo
Simran- meet at Cafe Amritsar
R- kyun
Simran- meine abhi abhi ek Rolex ki watch buy ki hai tumhare liye mein chahati hon ke woh tum mere samhe peheno.
R- abhi
Simmi- han abhi
R- abhi thoda busy hon
Simmi- tum apni jaan ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte.
R- thik hai tumse ziyada important kuch aur ho sakta hai.  Just give mein 20 minutes.
Simmi- love u
Rajbeer looked at Preeto's picture and caressed her face and said- love u too.

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 1:33am | IP Logged
oh thankgod it was preeto' s dream and aww my rajbeer is tooo sweet...waiting for next update...Thumbs Up
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Jess that was sweet rajbeer found out n was only using simmi.

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