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I dont care Rajpreet ff Part 8 Oct 16 updated (Page 2)

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
Nurse- o han apki betti ka operation kafi behengah hai.
Bj- kitna kharcha hoga.
nurse- biz lakh (20 lakh). Operation toh hum abhi kar rahe hai lekin jab tak fees nahi milti tab tak hum apko patient se nahi milne dengay.
Rajbeer- biz lakh lekin itni baadi rakam
nurse- yeh humara problem nahi hai.
Sunny- ap kuch toh sochiye hum biz lakh rupee kaha se laengay.
nurse- issi liye toh humne kaha hai ke hum operation abhi kar rahe hai.
Bj- thik hai hum biz lakh rupee dey dengay.

11 am...
Bj and Papaji come and give twenty lakh to the reception. Rajbeer- Bj Papaji apke paas biz lakh kaha se ae.
Papaji- puttar jo ghar humari betti ki zindagi bachane ke kam na ae toh woh kisi kam ka nahi hai.
Rajbeer- apne ghar bech diya.
Papaji- na betta na becha nahi girwi rakha hai.
Sunny- kiske paas.
Papaji- mera ek dost hai uska ek betta hai Govind. Meine usse baat ki woh hume biz lakh dey raha hai aur humara ghar uske paas girwi rakha hai.
Rajbeer- accha hai agar girwi rakha toh apni jaan pehchan wale ke paas rakhe.
Bj- chalo uska operation khatam hua.
Sunny- nahi
Simmi had overheard all this conversation. Simmi thought "hmmm. Preeto tumhe tumhari galti ki zazzah ab mile gi. Mere Rajbeer se pyaar kiya usse apne jaal mein fas aya tha na tumne. I hope ke tumhara operation successful nahi ho. Govind... mein mom se kehke tumhare ghar ko kharid leyti hon. Fir toh tumhe ek chin ki moth bhi hasil nahi hogi. Tumhari behene tumhe kushengi ke tumhari waja se unke ghar chala gaya."
Simmi smirks.

Rajbeer sees Simmi and goes to her. Raj- tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.
Simmi- woh mein thodi frest air leyne ja rahi thi
Raj- o toh jao.
Simmi- han
Simmi goes outside and calls her mom. Simmi- hello mom
NA- Simmi betta kaha ho ap
Simmi- mom mein hospital mein hon Preeto ka accident hua tha. Lekin mom mujhe apse ek kam hai.
Na- kya
Simmi- yeh jo Dhillons hai unka ghar kisi Govind ke paas girwi hai.
NA- what kyun
Simmi- Preeto ke operation ke liye
NA smiles- o
Simmi- toh mein chahati hon ke ap woh ghar uss Govind ko peyse deke kharid ley
NA- thik hai peyse ki bhasah hi unhe patta chalti hai.
Simmi- thanks mom
NA- ur welcome
Simmi cuts the phone. Rajbeer heard is entire convo. Rajbeer thinks " kyun Simran kyun itni choti soch kyun hai tumhari. Meri Preeto ki yeh halat ho na ho tumhari waja se hi hai. Mein tumhe choudonga nahi Simran. Lekin kuch kar bhi nahi sakta. Tumhari maa ne Preeto ka ghar kharid liya hai. Agar meine kuch kiya toh kya patta tum Bj Papaji Meeta di Bani Sonu sab ko ghar se bahar nikal do. God yeh keysi situation mein dal diya hai mujhe."

Preeto's operation is over. The doctors come out. Bj- kya hua
Doctor- apki betti ko toh bach liya lekin uski mentally health ka kuch patta nahi.
Papaji- apne humari bachi ko bacha liye thank u so much doctor.
Doctor smiles and goes.

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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Simi did like that to give it to dhillions later na or is she really stupid..i mean i feel rajbeer must have misunderstood simi...anyways waiting to know whats next...:)
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i dont think Simmi will give the house back to the Dhillons because she said ur sisters will hate u for loosing their house. She even said that this was all happening because Rajbeer fell in love with her. I wonder what Rajbeer will do.
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10 hours after the operation...
Rajbeer and Sunny were in the hospital room with Preeto when she regained conscious. Preeto- ap donu
That got Rajbeer and Sunny's attention. Preeto- ap donu kun hai... aur mein iss hospital mein keyse ae. 
Rajbeer- tumhe kuch yaad nahi hai. 
Preeto- kya yaad hona chahiye. Meri Bj kaha hai. Bj
Rajbeer- mein ley ke atta hon unhe
Preeto- what ap unhe jaante ho
Rajbeer thought that she doesnt remember him so he shouldnt tell her what happened in the past year or else there is going to be a bad impact on her brain. Sunny- nahi woh baas tumhara ek car se accident hua tha aur hum tumhe yaha ley ae. 
Preeto- o
Rajbeer get Bj and Bj almost cries seeing her daughter alive- Preeto meri bachi... toh thik toh hai na 
Preeto- han Bj mein thik hon. 
Rajbeer then sees her fakes mangalsutra and choda aur the table and goes and hides it. 
Doctor comes and checks her. Doctor- toh six weeks total rest tumhare donu pair fractured hain.

Doctor took Sunny Bj Rajbeer and Simran aside- dekhiye kya inhone aisa kuch kaha hai jise apko lagta hai ke inhe kuch yaad nahi hai
Sunny- doctor woh mujhe aur Rajbeer ko nahi pehchanti
Doctor- kya... Rajbeer tumhe aur Preeto ko mile kitna waqt hua hai
Rajbeer- almost a year
Doctor- o dekhiye inke dimag pe kisi bhi tarah ka zaor inki jaan leywa hai. I suggest ap bhi apni zindagi ka ek saal bhol jae aur sab kuch freshly start kare. I mean hi hello se baat karo fir jaan pehchan fir se baanao.

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
1 month later...
Preeto was ready to get discharged but she was told that Sunny was Pankaj's cousin. Dhruv had saved Ishu from some goons and had brought her home safely. Simran was Dhruv's sister. Rajbeer had nothing to do with any of them and he was the one that brought her to the hospital. Preeto thought of Rajbeer as a friend but she didnt remember that they were in love. Meanwhile all this took place Rajbeer and Simmi got close. No one knew the reason why. Preeto noticed their secret romance in the hospital room and then as time went by she felt jealous of Simran. O and they told her that she accidently got in front of a car and met a accident thats why she was here.

Preeto was in a wheelchair since both of her legs were broken. On the day she entered the Dhillon house, Govind (the one who the Dhillon got money from) came. Papaji- arrey Govind tu yaha
Govind- masterji meinu maaf kijiaga meinu ek bhaut vaddhi musbat mein fasgaya si. Isiliye meine tuwada ghar kisi aur ko dey na padah.
Papaji and Bj became furioud- kisi diya hai tu
Before Govind could answer Simmi interrupted- meine kharidah hai yeh ghar
Papaji- par Simran tujhe iss ghar ko kharidh ne ki zarorat kya thi.
Simmi- thi uncle ji thi. Mujhe yeh ghar bhaut pasand tha aur mujhe yaha pe rehna tha. Yeh meri bhabhi ka ghar hai issi liye mujhe  thoda awkward feel hota tha. Issi liye meine Govind se yeh ghar kharid liya
Bj- o toh yeh baat thi. Tu bolna tujhe kaha rehna hai ab yeh kanooni toor pe tera ghaar hai.
Simmi- kahi khaas nahi mujhe Preeto ke kamre mein rehna hai.
Bj n Papaji were shocked- Preeto ke kamre mein.
Ishu- kya
They turned to her. Simmi- han mujhe Preeto ke kamre mein rehna hai.
Bj- thik hai Ishu tu aur Meeta uska kamra Simran ke liye saaf karo.
Simmi- o nahi nahi Bj mujhe kamra jeysa hai weysa pasand hai.
Ishu- han aur hum Preeto ko uss kamre mein nahi jaane dey sakte.
Rajbeer- kyun uss kamre mein kya hai.
Ishu- Preeto pehle se issi nahi thi. Woh patta nahi modern traditional donu pehenti thi. Aur isse kapde toh khabhi nahi. Tum sab usse sirf ek saal se jaante ho hum usse uski poori zindagi se jaante hai. Bj mujhe store room ki chabi dijia. Aur han Rajbeer tum Preeto ko niche wale last right kamre mein ley jao. Wahi uska pehle wala kamra tha.
Rajbeer- thik hai
Rajbeer goes to Preeto who was by the dinning table talking to Meeta. Rajbeer- Preeto chalo tumhe tumhare kamre tak ley jaata hon.
Preeto- okay
He drove Preeto all the way to her ex-room. He opened the room and saw a bed and three degrees of the wall above the headboard. To the right he saw empty cupboard and a dressing table. Preeto was shocked seeing her bedroom like this- what the f. ISHMEET ISHMEET
Ishmeet went to her. Ishu- kya hua Preeto
Preeto- what the hell Ishmeet tumne fir se mera kamra saaf kiya. Aur iss baar toh haad hi hogae. tumne mera saara saman saaf kar diya.
Ishu- woh woh woh actually Bj ne kaha tha ke bhaut acche se iss kamre ki saafe kardon. Aur han tera saman humne upar rakha tha. Mein abhi latti hon aur jeysa tha waha rakh dey ti hon.
Preeto- then its okay
Rajbeer was shocked seeing this new version of Preeto. Then he got a SMS for Simmi. Rajbeer read- Rajbeer please mere nae kamre mein ao.
Rajbeer messaged back- han darling abhi aya.


Preeto's ex-room...
Rajbeer had his arms around Simmi's waist. Rajbeer- toh mujhe kyun bolaya yaha
Simmi- i mean just look at this room Rajbeer. Yeh kitna like down market hai.
Rajbeer- toh kyun select kiya koi aur kamra kun leyti.
Simmi- keyse karti. (wraps her arms around Rajbeer's neck) Uss Preeto ne mere Rajbeer ko mujhse chine ki koshish ki thi aur mein at least uska room toh usse chine sakti ho na.
Rajbeer- accha lekin Rajbeer toh humesha tumhara tha.
Simmi- i know lekin tum pehle Preeto ke assh paash kyun mandrate the.
Rajbeer- i was fooled Simmi. Patta nahi kya hogaya tha mujhe jo mein Preeto ke pyaar ke jaal mein faas gaya tha.
Simmi- im gald ke uska black magic tumpe se oathar gaya.
Rajbeer- hmmm
Rajbeer and Simmi bring their faces closer and start kissing each other on the lips.

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Am shocked...rajsimi ka chakkar kya hai huh...
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At night Rajbeer was about to go back to the Base Camp when he crossed by Preeto's room. She had curled her hair and it looked so cute on her shoulder length hair. She was wearing a dark green tank top and grey sweats. The wind blew on her face and she just looked so beautiful. Rajbeer's mind- stop it Rajbeer tumhe Simran ke barre mein sochna chahiye. Preeto ke bare mein nahi.

He left and went back to the Base Camp. Preeto thought ' Rajbeer aur Simran ek dosre ke paas hai mujhe kyun itni jalan ho rahi hai. Babaji please  help me. Mein Rajbeer se kya pyaar karti hon… nahi nahi Rajbeer Simran ka hai tera nahi.'

Morning…

Simran had called Rajbeer in her new room again. Simran was wearing Preeto's clothes. She was in her sleeve red and yellow salwar kamez (the one she had worn when Rajpreet confessed). Rajbeer was shocked seeing her in Preeto's clothes. Rajbeer- yeh tumne kya pehena hai

Simmi- Preeto ke kapde hai mujhpe keyse lag rahe hai.

Rajbeer- tum toh iss duniya ke sabse ugliest outfit ko bhi ek kubsurat outfit baanah sakti ho. I don't know preeto ka taste itna boora kyun tha. I mean just look at her clothing. Kitna kharab lagti thi woh in kapdo mein.

Simmi- I know aur patta nahi iss duniya ka kunsa insaan aisi behenji se pyaar karta.

Rajbeer laughed with Simran. Simmi- Rajbeer tum  mera ek kam karogay kya

Rajbeer- of course

She pulled out a clear fancy bottle with water in it. Rajbeer- yeh kya hai

Simmi- blackmagic

Rajbeer- black magic u r kidding me. Tum aisi stupid chise kyun maanti ho

Simmi- if u love me than do this stupid thing… Preeto ke khane mein iss pani ke  kuch bonde daldo.

Rajbeer- thik hai.

Rajbeer goes to the dinning table. Bani had prepared Preeto's office. She was gonna go give it to Preeto when Rajbeer insisted that he'd take it. Bani agreed without knowing anything. Rajbeer went to Preeto's room. He entered it and saw Preeto was still sleeping. He took out the magical water and added 2 drops of it in it. He then woke Preeto and gave her the juice. She drank it. Rajbeer had no idea what it was gonna do to her. 

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
what the hell is Simran on crack or what? And rajbeer he is being a part of Simran's black magic. Dont believe this

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