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It all started with 300 Rupees Thread TWO! Chap 26 (Page 54)

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Its amazing...:)
Loved the update...:)
Thanks for the pm...:)

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Hi KC,

Thanks for  a wonderful and a long update.

But, I am only longing for more... what is the suspense and why is Khushi really thinking that Arnav might leave her again... something big... well I can't seem to wait.


That was a great, hot Arnav... really tough to handle... but thoroughly loved to see that loving caring husband Arnav...

and Khushi... the possessive one... very well descried... I somehow love this Khushi... she is so nice so like her our Khushi in the serial, but sober and a subtler version of her.


Your writing was amazing as usual and very tactfully created the whole picture of the couple's intimacy... great job.

Please update soon and next time ... pls don't leave us hanging on to the suspense...

Thanks for the PM


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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
i dnt wat to say.. its just mind blowing...
i am glad she decided to talk to him... and she did..
i like her seducing her husband... love her jealousy...
and finally she also confessed...
omg she said "i love you too"... am on 9th cloud... yippie...
loved the whole update...

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
awesome update
continue soon please
and thank u for pm me

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 12:08am | IP Logged
wow!

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Omg omg omg omg omg omg ..
Finally finally finally finally finally
She admitted her love for him
Finally she utter that 3 magical word

It was outstanding.. Their concern for each other..
Love n just love... Pure love

Finally she was ready to share her past with him but still fear of lossing him again
What could be that still scared her

Love the way they played hide shake game using recliner
Their seducting game...
Love the way he console n comfort her
He assured her that he will be always there fore her

She was convinced that she is his life n only his
No one can make him like that except her

Each n every thing was just perfect
I hope she will burst out all her pain which she was holding for long
So that they can live their life together without any condition
Without hiding from the world
I m waiting for them to live their life as other happy couple
where there is no restriction.. No boundaries.. No any worries.. No barriers...
Just them n their happy life with family


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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 6:49am | IP Logged

oh god just read it again Wink

i like wiefy khushi curise abt his food n phone callsLOL 
specially from MS SAXENA n arnav is vvery well aware of dis
he wants khushi to accept dat she is jealouse
 but khushi is khushi
he used her dis weakness when he was on call to win in his game
she seduced him thinking he was busy with ms saxena
i m waiting 2 know wat khushi wants to tel him abt her past
part E was very hot i made me speachless
i m glad dat khushi said those 3 word but seriously wat arnav did she had to say datWink
 
 

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Hi KC, what can I say this is just so incredible! Loved the idea of her wearing very feminine underwear while wearing his clothing! It is just a real turn on for most men when their woman wears their clothing! I remember forgetting certain items of clothing on a trip and had to borrow off my husband until I coud purchase new things! Let's just say it was a very memorable trip!!!Wink

Loved the comradery of them now and the fact that they are comfortable  teasing each other. This shows what a sense of humour you, the author, has as well! I now know that you are a bit of a tease yourself! Very refreshing and makes for an enjoyable read!

On the topic of "teasing" you wrote 9000 words and still left us hanging as to what Khushi's secret is about! Please remember my poor weakened heart!!!Smile

Please continue writing! You are my sanity these days whilst I am at home recuperating!
Maya Di

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