It all started with 300 Rupees Thread TWO! Chap 26 - Page 37

Posted: 11 years ago
i dnt wat to say.. its just mind blowing...
i am glad she decided to talk to him... and she did..
i like her seducing her husband... love her jealousy...
and finally she also confessed...
omg she said "i love you too"... am on 9th cloud... yippie...
loved the whole update...
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
continue soon please
and thank u for pm me
Posted: 11 years ago
Omg omg omg omg omg omg ..
Finally finally finally finally finally
She admitted her love for him
Finally she utter that 3 magical word

It was outstanding.. Their concern for each other..
Love n just love... Pure love

Finally she was ready to share her past with him but still fear of lossing him again
What could be that still scared her

Love the way they played hide shake game using recliner
Their seducting game...
Love the way he console n comfort her
He assured her that he will be always there fore her

She was convinced that she is his life n only his
No one can make him like that except her

Each n every thing was just perfect
I hope she will burst out all her pain which she was holding for long
So that they can live their life together without any condition
Without hiding from the world
I m waiting for them to live their life as other happy couple
where there is no restriction.. No boundaries.. No any worries.. No barriers...
Just them n their happy life with family


Posted: 11 years ago

oh god just read it again ๐Ÿ˜‰

i like wiefy khushi curise abt his food n phone calls๐Ÿ˜† 
specially from MS SAXENA n arnav is vvery well aware of dis
he wants khushi to accept dat she is jealouse
 but khushi is khushi
he used her dis weakness when he was on call to win in his game
she seduced him thinking he was busy with ms saxena
i m waiting 2 know wat khushi wants to tel him abt her past
part E was very hot i made me speachless
i m glad dat khushi said those 3 word but seriously wat arnav did she had to say dat๐Ÿ˜‰
 
 
Posted: 11 years ago
Hi KC, what can I say this is just so incredible! Loved the idea of her wearing very feminine underwear while wearing his clothing! It is just a real turn on for most men when their woman wears their clothing! I remember forgetting certain items of clothing on a trip and had to borrow off my husband until I coud purchase new things! Let's just say it was a very memorable trip!!!๐Ÿ˜‰

Loved the comradery of them now and the fact that they are comfortable  teasing each other. This shows what a sense of humour you, the author, has as well! I now know that you are a bit of a tease yourself! Very refreshing and makes for an enjoyable read!

On the topic of "teasing" you wrote 9000 words and still left us hanging as to what Khushi's secret is about! Please remember my poor weakened heart!!!๐Ÿ˜Š

Please continue writing! You are my sanity these days whilst I am at home recuperating!
Maya Di
Posted: 11 years ago
I've read chapter 25 (all parts) so many times now, that I've lost count.

Trust me, I wanted to put in a super-long detailed comment. But believe me when I say this, according to me, words cannot do justice to this chapter. I'm so awestruck by this chapter right now that I can't get myself to write anything. So much in one single update - pain, passion, humor and above all LOVE.

So I'm sorry about not giving you detailed feedback but my reason is genuine.

This story has touched me in a totally unexpected way.  You are SUCH a talented writer, you should write a book and get it published.  'Captivating' doesn't quite do your work justice.

I want you to know that I'm in no way a flatterer. I only praise where it's due. This story and your efforts completely deserve it!


Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by ananya123


I've read chapter 25 (all parts) so many times now, that I've lost count.

Trust me, I wanted to put in a super-long detailed comment. But believe me when I say this, according to me, words cannot do justice to this chapter. I'm so awestruck by this chapter right now that I can't get myself to write anything. So much in one single update - pain, passion, humor and above all LOVE.

So I'm sorry about not giving you detailed feedback but my reason is genuine.

This story has touched me in a totally unexpected way.  You are SUCH a talented writer, you should write a book and get it published.  'Captivating' doesn't quite do your work justice.

I want you to know that I'm in no way a flatterer. I only praise where it's due. This story and your efforts completely deserve it!


 
 
I don't know what to say. Your comment has made me speechless. I want to thank you so many times but i dont think that would be good enough. So i am just going to stay mum and re-read ur wonderful feedback and enjoy the moment! BIG SIGH!! Whoever you are - u just stole my heart all over again!! :)
 
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...

thanks 4 d pm
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...im speechless!
It was simply beautiful
Thanx foh da pm nd cont soon
Posted: 11 years ago
first of all really sorry for commenting late...
loved ur update...
arnav is so patience with her...love him for it...
and loved the way how she gets abgry when ever roshini name comes ...
the way they both played catch me game...cute...
my heart was beating faster when she said she will say him the truth...
what could be it...did she had a baby or something...i dont now...but waiting for it...last part was hot...
update asap...
once again iam sorry...tom i will read fate mate and comment...sorry for that too

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