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It all started with 300 Rupees Thread TWO! Chap 26 (Page 36)

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Oh god - Ananya - I feel horrible. HORRIBLE. For not updating on time. Believe me I am trying to finish up. I was up until 1:45 am last night, trying to finish up but then I got really tired and I know I have promised that I will update within 24 hours. (which hopefully I will) I have to go to two dinners in the evening, but i will make sure that i will update it before i leave for the parties.
 
I might not be able to send everyone PMs until I come back, but i will def. upload the update before i leave the house.
 
Again - I am extremely sorry.
 
And again - I feel flattered that amidst all the travelling - you are thinking about my FF.
 
I feel so guilty right now - u have NO idea...
 
SORRY DUDE!! REALLY SORRY!!
 
Sigh!
 
Personal Issues: I CAN'T update it until i am 100% satisfied with it, and i am editing part D rite now and as soon as i am satisfied enough, i will post it. Again - seriously very sorry!! :(

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Ok - I give up, Part D went to Part E - so i will update it when I come back from the party. BUT BUT BUT - I promise - I will NOT and i repeat - I will NOT go to sleep until i update it tonite. I PROMISE. I have to go now. Something came up - and believe me - i feel bad, really bad.
 
Please forgive me - I will update it before I go to sleep tonight.
 
Thank you guys...
 
My sincere apology...
 
SORRY!
 
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Please jaldi update kar..
I can't wait.

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errrmm... Tongue
Update soon! Embarrassed

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by karmachameleon

Ok - I give up, Part D went to Part E - so i will update it when I come back from the party. BUT BUT BUT - I promise - I will NOT and i repeat - I will NOT go to sleep until i update it tonite. I PROMISE. I have to go now. Something came up - and believe me - i feel bad, really bad.
 
Please forgive me - I will update it before I go to sleep tonight.
 
Thank you guys...
 
My sincere apology...
 
SORRY!
 
:(
TAKE YOUR TIME DEAR WE KNOW U NEVER BREAK YOUR PROMISES Big smile

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Originally posted by karmachameleon

Ok - I give up, Part D went to Part E - so i will update it when I come back from the party. BUT BUT BUT - I promise - I will NOT and i repeat - I will NOT go to sleep until i update it tonite. I PROMISE. I have to go now. Something came up - and believe me - i feel bad, really bad.
 
Please forgive me - I will update it before I go to sleep tonight.
 
Thank you guys...
 
My sincere apology...
 
SORRY!
 
:(
CHILL YAAR ..relax n take ur time

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by karmachameleon

Oh god - Ananya - I feel horrible. HORRIBLE. For not updating on time. Believe me I am trying to finish up. I was up until 1:45 am last night, trying to finish up but then I got really tired and I know I have promised that I will update within 24 hours. (which hopefully I will) I have to go to two dinners in the evening, but i will make sure that i will update it before i leave for the parties.
 
I might not be able to send everyone PMs until I come back, but i will def. upload the update before i leave the house.
 
Again - I am extremely sorry.
 
And again - I feel flattered that amidst all the travelling - you are thinking about my FF.
 
I feel so guilty right now - u have NO idea...
 
SORRY DUDE!! REALLY SORRY!!
 
Sigh!
 
Personal Issues: I CAN'T update it until i am 100% satisfied with it, and i am editing part D rite now and as soon as i am satisfied enough, i will post it. Again - seriously very sorry!! :(


I totally understand. No worries at all. You don't have to be sorry!
Take your time! :)

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Readers: Thank you for your extral wonderful response to the last update. I wanted to thank you all for your wonderul comments.

Some readers had question about 'K'. She is Karan's sister, she was introduced in the beginning of the story.
 
P.S. Sorry for the delay. Please read and enjoy the update. As I had promised I am updating it before I go to sleep.
 
 
 

It all started with 300 Rupees Chapter 25 (Part A)

He held her tight……..

Wrapping her body with his…….

Very tight…….

He placed a deep kiss on her lips…….

And whispered "I love you……"

 

They stayed there, just like that. He embraced her tight, close to him. Very close. Their hearts were beating in unison. He could hear her breath now calming a bit. Still warm though, breathing in rhythm, in and out on his neck. He could tell she was relaxed now. She wasn't clenching his vest anymore.

He felt her arms around his back. She hugged him back. That put a smile on his face. She couldn't see his face though. He lifted his neck a little to see her face. She had her eyes closed, lying under him, very peacefully. Her face glowed. She looked so calm, totally stress free. He felt her hands on his back again, hugging him tighter.

He slowly whispered "do you want to sleep sweetheart?" She opened her eyes hearing his voice, slowly. And saw the most handsome husband looking at her so affectionately. She replied "no I don't want to sleep. I just got up. Do you want to sleep?" He smiled and said "No sweetheart, I don't want to sleep. I saw you after so long. I just want to look at you, not sleep. Is that fine?" She replied "you want to look at me?" He answered "yes!" She said "for how long?" He said "forever." Saying that he placed another kiss on her lips.

She asked "Did you eat anything?" He answered "I like it how you are worried about my food intake. Yes I did eat, the last slice left in the box, sorry if you were counting on eating that." He smirked saying that. She asked in annoyance "are you making fun of me? I was just hungry, that's why!" He smiled and said "how can you eat so much? You are so small? It just amazes me. And no, I am not making of you. I am just curious. That's all."

She said "I like food." He kissed her forehead and said "I know. And I love that about you." She asked out of nowhere "what else do you love about me?" For a second he thought he didn't hear her correctly, he was surprised to hear that. He looked at her for a brief moment, rested himself on his elbow again and said "everything." She asked "like what?"

He laid flat on his back now, then pulled her on top of him, gently. He moved her locks covering her eyes and said "I love your eyes, they are beautiful. Especially when you are confused. They give away a lot. I just have to look at your eyes to know what you are thinking." She rested her head on his chest now, feeling his heart beat and said "and?" He caressed her beautiful long hair and said "I love it when you address me Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada. Even though you say it when you are angry, it still turns me on." She pulled her neck up to see her smirking husband, she said "I am glad you told me, next time I will be more careful." Before he could reply anything back, his phone rang…….

She quickly moved herself to the side so he could get his phone out of the pocket. He looked at it and pressed end and put it aside. He pulled her back to him and said "sorry about that."

She asked "who was it?" he replied "the office" she said "you can talk if you have to, I don't mind." He answered "but I do mind."

She was intently looking at him when his phone rang again, he picked it up to check who it was, but before he could press end, she took the phone from his hand and saw 'Ms. Saxena' calling. She gave him the phone back with her facial expression changing 360 degrees. He took the phone from her, noticed her face and pressed end. She asked "did she call earlier too?" He heard her, his wife asking a simple yet the most complicated question, he answered honestly "yes, she did" She said "then why did you say it was the office?" He replied "because she is in the office, that's why!" She asked again "how many times a day does she call you?" He answered "I don't know, I have never counted it."

She got pretty annoyed at his honest answers. She detached herself from him, pulled the comforter, covered her half naked body and leaned on the headboard. He saw her do all that for no reason. He sat up and asked her "what's wrong Khushi?" She replied "nothing, you can go to work if you need to." He answered "if I had to go back to work, I wouldn't be staying here with you." She heard him say that, and she didn't even know how and when she collapsed into his chest, all over again. She whispered "thank you for staying with me."

Before he could reply to that, his phone rang again. That sound just irritated her more than she wanted to. This time, before he could even check it, she picked it up from the bed, looked at it, pressed answer and said "if someone is not answering your call that means he doesn't want to talk to you right now. He is busy. Don't call back." CLICK! And she threw the phone back on the bed.

All that happened so quick that neither of them could comprehend it. She finally realized what she just did. She looked up to see his face. She covered her open mouth with her hands and said "oh my god, I am so sorry. I don't know what I was thinking. I didn't mean to do that. I can't believe I just did that. What are you going to tell her now? How are you going to explain? I am so sorry."

He smiled watching her getting nervous like that, he pulled her back to him and said "I didn't know you were so possessive about me?" All she could reply was "I am sorry, I don't know why I did that. I don't know why she kept calling you back. It was just irritating. What are you going to tell her now?" He gently stroked her hair and answered "I don't have to answer to her, I am her boss, not the other way around. Remember? I am not answerable to her, or anyone, expect you Mrs. Raizada."

She couldn't say anything to that. She wanted to say so much after what she just heard but she couldn't bring herself to reply whatsoever. She just hugged him tight and stayed glued to him, in the very arms of her husband. That felt good. She felt loved, she felt needed, she felt wanted, and she felt safe. Right there, with her husband. Her modified husband, who claimed to love her more than anything else right now. How he made her his first priority. She loved that side of him.

It still amazed her how a person with so much anger for her in the past was capable of loving her so much love in the present…..

He had embraced her so closely to him and all of sudden she wanted to talk to him. Today. Now. About everything. She didn't want to postpone it any further. She didn't know how it would end, what would happen afterwards, yet she just wanted to talk to him about everything, regardless of the outcome.

She said "I think I should change. I mean, I should put some clothes on. I just woke up, I feel lousy, I just wanted to freshen up. I hope you don't mind. Is that fine?" He kissed her forehead and said "absolutely! Do you want more coffee?"

She smiled at her new chef husband and said "no thank you! I will quickly shower and then I will meet you downstairs. Go now." Saying that she pushed him off the bed and waited for him to leave the room. She walked to the bathroom, showered, wrapped herself in towel again and came back to the room to look for something to wear. She looked at the mess she had made in the room earlier. She quickly picked up all the clothes and placed them on the bed. She opened her drawer of lingerie collection, exclusively hand-picked by her very own husband, the mighty Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada. She smiled going through them. How they were perfect. She had never imagined that one day he will buy her all that. That too in such assortments. That drawer consisted of all types of colors, fabrics, laces, silks, satins, everything matching. She looked at the beige one, that's nice, she thought. She decided to wear that.

Now she looked for another one of his t-shirts, yet again, and wore it. Then she wore the same pajama as before. She didn't dry her hair, she knew he was downstairs waiting for her to join him. She didn't even clean the mess before going downstairs. She quickly opened the door and started walking downstairs barefoot. She heard him being on the phone.

His back faced her. He was on his Bluetooth. He was going through some files while talking to someone, maybe the office, she wasn't sure. She came downstairs to him. He heard her silent steps. He turned around to see her, how she looked even more striking in his clothes with dripping hair. He walked to her, snaked his arm around her waist, pulled her in and kissed her neck, slightly. Which was still wet from the droplets of her hair. He pointed at his Bluetooth informing her that he was on the phone. She nodded with a smile and moved back.

She went to the couch and sat there patiently for him to be done with the phone call so she could talk to him. Yes, she wanted to talk to him now. Today. At that very moment. She didn't want to procrastinate anymore. The sooner she talked to him, the better it would be. She knew he was being extremely patient for who he was. It still amazed her how he could give her that much time to open up when he was the type of person who got what he wanted, when he wanted.

She looked up to see him. How he looked perfect. So perfect. His perfect eyes, his perfect smile, his perfect hair, his perfect stubble. Perfect? Since when did I start thinking he was perfect? Even I don't know since when, but I do think he is perfect. In his own ways. Yes, he is. My husband is perfect. Maybe that's why I get worried thinking that it will all go away one day. Usually when it's too good to be true, it usually is. No. That's not possible. He has told me over and over again, he loves me. More than anything. And he had showed it to me several times. I can't doubt him now. I SHOULDN'T. I MUST NOT. It would be so wrong to think anything negative as of now about him. He is here. He is back. He loves me. He is here for me. For his wife. For me, just me. I am important in his life, very important. Yes, he loves me. He really does. This is not a dream. It is not going to break once I open my eyes.

It is REAL. He is mine. All MINE. Arnav Singh Raizada is MINE. That sounds so good. I never thought that would sound so good. Him, as my husband, no, not my husband, my perfect husband. I wonder if he feels the same about me. Of course he does. That's why he is here. For me. Only for me. She saw him on his phone again, continuing his 'yell call'. Well, I guess some things never change. She smiled thinking that. Him and his favorite Bluetooth. I feel bad for his Bluetooth. Poor Bluetooth. It has to bear with all his shouting and yelling.

She giggled thinking about her stupid worry for Bluetooth. He heard that, he looked up to see her. How she was lost in some thought and had a big smile on her face. She looked cute and happy. Just like her old self. Always day dreaming. Just like she used to in Raizada Mansion. He wanted to ask her what made her smile so much, but he didn't want to disturb her happy thought. He let her continue day dreaming, or whatever it was that she was doing.

She noticed him watch her. She didn't say anything. Then all of sudden, it was not something she had planned. She didn't know what came over her mind watching him stand like that, so busy discussing something very important, some deal, or something of that sort.

"No, that's not what I asked you to do. It's a very important deal. I can't afford to………." He stopped talking. He felt something. Something on his back………

Her finger caressed his nape then his spine. Straight down……..

He had stopped talking. She came in front of him and whispered "continue with your call, I won't bother you."

"No, I am here, I was saying that it's a very big deal…….." He stopped talking again. He saw her opening the buttons of his vest. One by one. From top to bottom. Slowly, gently, and making sure that her fingers touched all over that vest, pressing them hard enough to be felt on his skin as well. She pulled herself on her toes, wrapped her arms around his neck and whispered in the Bluetooth free ear "I told you, continue with your call, I understand it's important."

She stayed by his neck, just long enough to let him feel the wet drops from her damp hair. She brushed her smooth cheek to his stubble and whispered "I like how you feel right now."

That's all she said. She pulled herself back on her feet, unwrapped her arms from his neck, and opened the last button of his vest. Then she slid her palms inside the vest, on top of his shirt, feeling the perfectly built chest from her bare palm. Then she took the file from his hand, placed in on the table, just the way it was, open. Then she resumed sliding the vest out, leisurely towards his shoulders and out of his arms.

Part B Continues……



Edited by karmachameleon - 11 August 2012 at 11:20pm

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