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VirmaanFF: the seven stages of love p2 pg7 (Page 7)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Nice intro about our hero and his heroine..
loved to read viren calling maanvi as angel..
good update, continue the first stage of love soon and thanks for the PM

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Great start to the FF! keep it going Wink

Love the idea of 7 stages


Edited by UrshP - 22 July 2012 at 4:24pm
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first awesome and unique concept
love it
yaaayyy a different concept
loved the beginning do continue soon
it was a wonderful chapter and a delight to readLOLLOLLOL
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Lovely Concept !! Do Continue Soon !!!
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do continue!!
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lovely ...
cont soon

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Thankss to all of u for liking my workBig smile


Part 2

First stage of love

 

 

Virat getting ready for college and admiring himself in front of mirror: dude!! aj to tu bht hi hot lagrha haii .. But ky fayda teri dream girl tjhe yaha bhi nhe mili to.. kaha ho meri dream girl ( making cute childlike face) ... but itna to mjhe pta hai ke u are here in this world. aur me tumhe dhund ke hi rahunga but kese dhundunga me tumhe ...

Jeevika knocked at door

Virat: kon hai

Jeevika: virat me hun!! Jaldi ao late horha hai

Virat:  dii bus 2 min me arha hun

Jeevika : jaldi ana . apni dream girl ke khayalo me kho mat jana.. jaldi a me wait karhe hun neeche tera ..

Virat: (in mind) di ko dream girl wali baat kese pta chali????...  hmmm '. kahi di ne kahi meri diary to nhe parh li .. oh shittt!!!! Di sab ko bta na de.. abhi jata hun di ke paas' chill virat!! Di ne hi parha hai !!Thanks God agar ghar me koi aur parh leta hoo.. sabhal ke rakha kar yrr .. Beta cha lab warna first day late hua na to dadaji teri waat lagayenge

 

Virat came out and rush to jeevika

Virat: di di!! chalo jaldi chalo late horha hai

Jeevika: me bhi kab se whe bolrhi thi !! huhhh

Virat dragged jeevika: di chalo bhi

Jeevika: itni besabri kya hai virat

Virat: Di sit in car fast

And as jeevika sit in car virat start driving and stopped at middle of the road

Jeevika: virat yaha gaadi kyu rok di ??

Virat: di apne meri diary parhi thi kab ???

Jeevika smiled mischievously

Virat: di btao na

Jeevika : virat itna impatient kyu horhe ho mene diary parhi thi .. jab me kal rat tumhe dekhne aye thi k tum soye ho ya nhe tab tumhari diary tumare haath me thi tab mene parhl i

Virat: matlab di ap ne sab parh liya

Jeevika: han mere majnu bhai wese ye ladki tumhe milli ken he aj tak

Virat: di abhi tk to khayalo me hi uska tasawur hai .

Jeevika : chal ab college chale ??

Virat: di ap please ghar me kisi ko mat btana especially swamini bua ko wo to kuch aur ulti baat hi  bnalege please di

Jeevika: okk mere bhia promise me ghar me is diary or teri dream girl ke khayalat kisi se sharen he karunge ab college chale ya first day hi tujhe bunk maarna hai

Virat: han han di chalo na ap ke wo bhi to college me apka inezaat karhe honge na

Jeevika ( hitting on shoulder lighly and blushing ) : virat wo to sirf mera acha dost hai

Virat: ohhh acha dost chalo maan lete hai (winking  to jeevika)

Jeevika : badmaash chal ab

 

On other hand viren was waiting for manvi to get ready

Viren : ramukaka jake dekh aye na manvi tayar hui ke nhe pta nhe kitni der lagayege ye larki

Ramukaka: sahib ye dekhye agye manvi betya

Viren : shukar ha manvi tum agye chalo jaldi ao breakfast kare phir college jana hai

Manvi: han bhai buhat bhunk lage hai chalo ramukaka jaldi breakfast do phir bhai ki subah ki harkat pe class lena bih to baki hai   ( gave viren a brief hug)

Viren: aaj meri angel pehle kha to le

Manvi: han chalo

After a while

Viren: manvi chale ab college jana ha late horha hai

Manvi: bhai do minute breakfast to karne de do na araam se

Viren: ohh meri bhuki sherni sab aj hi khaana ha kyaa chal na meri maa

Maanvi: ohhooo bhai bari betaabi horhe hai bhabhi se milne ki apko hai na

Viren : kyaa kis se milne ha kon bhabhi tumhari ( in shock state )

Maanvi : bhai chill m talking abt jeevika ji

Viren ohh shaitan wo meri sirf achi dost hai bus??

Maanvi: pakka?? (Saying naughtily)

Viren: haan badmaash larki

Maanvi : chalo kehte ho to man leti hun '. (Saying naughtily)

Viren : chale ab ??

Maanvi : bhai ek min me aye.!

Then manvi went near their parent's photo

Maanvi: mummy papa!! Kese ho ap! U know aj mera college ka pehla din hai and me aj ap dono ko buhat miss karhe hun .. mumyy ap ko yaad hai jab mera school ka first day tha jab apne mujhe dahi khilayi thi aur kaha tha ke ye naye safar ka aagaz ha to ye tumhari liye shubh hoga..  papa ap ki blessings ki aaj buhat yaad arhe hai

Then viren who was standing behind wipe away his tears and hugged manvi from back

Viren: hello mummy papa!! Ap to janti ho na angel hai hi aisi and ap dono tension mat lo me hun na apni angel ka khayal rakhne ke liye . Obviously jo zimedari apne mjhe di hai me thori na kabhi use bhulskta hun...me hi mumyy paapa dono hoo  hai na angel??

Manvi : haa bhaya!! Ap mere sab  kuch ho ..

Viren: to tension kyu lerhe ho me tumhe har waqt har pareshaani se bachaonge

Manvi: bhai I love u a lottt.. ap sab se besttt hoo in the world .. ap hi mere sab kuch hoo ..

Then viren wipe away manvi's tear feed him dahi

Then they both headed out of the house

Manvi: bhai can I drive pleaseee please

Viren : ( mumbling) beta aj tu college ki jaga hospital paunchenga

Manvi: bhai mazak mat karo na  mjhe drive karne do na

Viren: ok meri maa ye le keys drive karle but please sabhal ke

 

It 9.00

Virat and manvi's car reach at the gate of Excel College. Both drive their car towards parking plot and then

Banggg''''.

Manvi: ohh God!!! Kis ne push kya meri car ko Damn it!!

Viren: kon andha hai jo dekh ke nhe chala skta

On other side

Virat: kon neend me drive karha hai

Jeevika: chal neeche utar ke dekhte hai

All came out of car first virat and manvi saw each other and they felt some different unique and pleasant sensation' they were stranger but could feel some similarity something inside them which was making their heartbeat going up and down '

This is first stage of love .u met a stranger feel some belonging to them but still your brain doesn't accept this changes. In order to avoid heart feelings u started being opposite of what u fell means u start hating that person but deep inside some feelings some connection starts refreshing

 

 

Precap:

Continuation of first stage of love

Virman fight



Edited by sizzysehrish - 29 July 2012 at 6:51am

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