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OS: MR AND MRS. LAAD GOVERNOR part 2 (last) page 8 (Page 9)

Satina Goldie
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
part 2 was great!

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Good one.

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
wonderful update Clap

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mariam42 Senior Member
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Just read both parts together,
And have to say, u r an AMAZING WRITER!
Would love to read more of ur work so have sent a buddy request
Please accept and send me pm's with anything u write!
Again, LOVED THE OS!
Embarrassed

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
very nice OS!!
 
something like this should have happened in the show too!!
 
CVs should get ideas from u!!Wink
 
write an epilogue plz!!

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Superb second part. Loved it. Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Loved the end part!

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
thank you for both the pms... loved this heart-warming os, with its doses of humor! arnav and khushi are truly the incarnations of tom and jerry: love how khushi never backs down and always wants to have the last word! your os had many beautiful moments but the best one was: "When I thought I lost you Khushi," and Khushi could hear her voice crack on the words as moisture took over his eyes "I cannot even tell you how I felt… it was like… it was like… I had lost a part of myself… no, it was worse." this was a long overdue confession, which then nicely flowed into the humorous scene where khushi realised that arnav had tricked her again... nani knocking on the door and the two not wanting to be found in their semi-dressed state was simply hilarious!
 
khushi blushing in arnav's arms as he smirks gleefully at her is always a sight to die for... the morning after convo with its touch of humor was very nicely done!

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