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OS: MR AND MRS. LAAD GOVERNOR part 2 (last) page 8 (Page 13)

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mariam42

Just read both parts together,
And have to say, u r an AMAZING WRITER!
Would love to read more of ur work so have sent a buddy request
Please accept and send me pm's with anything u write!
Again, LOVED THE OS!
Embarrassed


Thank you so much for such a sweet commentSmile

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by glamourbird

very nice OS!!
 
something like this should have happened in the show too!!
 
CVs should get ideas from u!!Wink
 
write an epilogue plz!!

tahbk you...

i didn't plan on writing an epilogue... but if i come up with something I'll definetely pen it downSmile
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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maddy1270

thank you for both the pms... loved this heart-warming os, with its doses of humor! arnav and khushi are truly the incarnations of tom and jerry: love how khushi never backs down and always wants to have the last word! your os had many beautiful moments but the best one was: "When I thought I lost you Khushi," and Khushi could hear her voice crack on the words as moisture took over his eyes "I cannot even tell you how I felt' it was like' it was like' I had lost a part of myself' no, it was worse." this was a long overdue confession, which then nicely flowed into the humorous scene where khushi realised that arnav had tricked her again... nani knocking on the door and the two not wanting to be found in their semi-dressed state was simply hilarious!
 
khushi blushing in arnav's arms as he smirks gleefully at her is always a sight to die for... the morning after convo with its touch of humor was very nicely done!


thanks so much dear! you always find something worth appreciating and always let me know...
thank u...Smile

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iluvarshi15



wooo Lovely work Avi (can I call yu that?) OMG I just read both parts that was incredible ... wow this was Awsome Wink. I wish this happened in the show, its better than wat happened .. yuur really talented and I love this OS its Cute, Hot, Funny x all the best things in one ... and wat a great Ending Embarrassed... its really sweet I just love it ... Man I can't describe it -_-' it was just "BEAUTIFUL" Heart
Great OS keep it up Thumbs Up

Love Aqsa x Wink Tongue Embarrassed



thanks Aqsa for such an incredibly sweet commentSmile Embarrassedand yes you can call me Avi...Smile
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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:23am | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Haww.. So cute.. Heart

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aaliyahassan

how badly  i wished something like this to happen..Cry
thank god atleast here they completed their kissWink
u amalgamated every emotion in it Embarrassed
last part of the os was outstanding. i was continously blushing as if he was saying all that to me Embarrassed
loved it yar..Smile
great work as usual Big smile 



hehehe... ab hugs ke saath almost kisses ko bhi naam dena padega... 3 ho gayi...
diwali almost kiss, hp almost kiss and badi chop almost kiss... whats say??Tongue

you should read the msg kriti sent to me... vo bhi blush karne lagi thi... i was blushing while typing it on Dad's laptop... kamre mein aate to band baj jati!LOL
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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AnnieKittWatt

Aww...Aww...Aha!!...Aye Haaye!!...*giggle*... Phew!! *fanning myself*...ROFL...Blushing...Hailaah!!...ROFL

These were my reactions as I read the part!! Hahahaahh...It was wonderfully written, Avi!
Very sweet, cute, hilarious (in terms of Khushi), *sigh* dreamy and lovely (in terms of Arnav confessing), funny (in terms of Khushi illustrating so easily), and Wow!!
Thank you for the next part, pal!! This was definitely worth reading and enjoyable!Big smile

Annie



Thanks soo much annie! that was a cute responseEmbarrassed the part in red made me chuckle... i'm so glad it happened... that in itself is a complimentEmbarrassed

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