Joined: 06 March 2005
hi you guys before i start to write the next part i would just like to say i am getting better, doc checked me out and he says i don't have to stay in bed all day and get outand about thats gr8 because i can use my computer again and not the lap top anyways where were we with the story:
Here is goes:
Dish is in her room brushing her hair, has her back to DK who has just sneaked in. (This is for you Princess_Mad!) he grabs her palo and pulls her close.
Dish: DK someone will see!!
DK: can't a husband romance with his wife.
Dish: Yes! but you know if mummy ji see's us.
Dk: Ok, i'll close the door!
Dish: DK you can't close the door mummy ji doesn't know we are husband and wife and if she catches us she will be upset.
Suddenly out of know where:
Pori: Your right dish if mummy ji catches you with my husband what will she think.
DK: get lost pori. You can never be my wife!!!
Dish is happy and is smiling, and grining at pori who leaves. Dk turns to face disha.
DK: disha what is that on your face?
DK: that just there.
Dish: what is it DK?!
Suddenly DK grabs Disha and kisses her on the cheak!!
Dish: DK!!! If someone sees.
DK: I don't care!! I love you and i can tell the whole world this and if you say, to maa right now!!
Dish: no DK!
what do you think
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Joined: 03 March 2005
keeop it going this is fab...so romantic......... atleast we are getting some romance in your scences as td at present has too much Rona Dhona and Dk is suffering from cry baby syndrome..hope he recovers soon..
Joined: 09 April 2005
Joined: 06 March 2005
hi you guys!
i need to think of some new ideas so i'll post the next story some time 2morrow!!!!
Joined: 01 January 2005
WOWWWW Eran Thats really good i'm loving it .love how the storys flowing keep it up
glad 2 hear ure better
Love Asian Princess
Joined: 19 November 2004
good one. online hee sahie. but atleast we can laugh /smile a little bit.
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