Tumhari Disha


Tumhari Disha
Tumhari Disha

i love you Part 8

eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
Posts: 2151

Posted: 02 May 2005 at 10:51am | IP Logged

hi you guys before i start to write the next part i would just like to say i am getting better, doc checked me out and he says i don't have to stay in bed all day and get outand about thats gr8 because i can use my computer again and not the lap top anyways where were we with the story:

Here is goes:

Dish is in her room brushing her hair, has her back to DK who  has just sneaked in. (This is for you Princess_Mad!) he grabs her palo and pulls her close.

Dish: DK someone will see!!

DK: can't a husband romance with his wife.Wink

Dish: Yes! but you know if mummy ji see's us.Confused

Dk: Ok, i'll close the door!

Dish: DK you can't close the door mummy ji doesn't know we are husband and wife and if she catches us she will be upset.

Suddenly out of know where:

Pori: Your right dish if mummy ji catches you with my husband what will she think.Angry

DK: get lost pori. You can never be my wife!!!LOL

Dish is happy and is smiling, and grining at pori who leaves. Dk turns to face disha.

DK: disha what is that on your face?

Dish: what?

DK: that just there.

Dish: what is it DK?!

Suddenly DK grabs Disha and kisses her on the cheak!!Wink

Dish: DK!!! If someone sees.

DK: I don't care!! I love you and i can tell the whole world this and if you say, to maa right now!!

Dish: no DK!

what do you think

love eran!!!!







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Posted: 02 May 2005 at 10:52am | IP Logged
very good Clap Clap Clap

keep it up eran Clap Clap Clap
lucky-moon Goldie

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Posts: 2427

Posted: 02 May 2005 at 11:01am | IP Logged
wow this is just awesome can't wait for ur next part plz post it asap thankssssssss a zillion for all those lovely lovey dovey scense wow its just spectacular Tongue

Edited by lucky-moon - 02 May 2005 at 11:04am
samy74 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 May 2005 at 12:50pm | IP Logged


keeop it going this is fab...so romantic.........EmbarrassedWink atleast we are getting some romance in your scences as td at present has too much Rona Dhona and Dk is suffering from cry baby syndrome..hope he recovers soon..LOL


paki girl in us Groupbie
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paki girl in us

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Posted: 02 May 2005 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Great....keep it up Clap
eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
Posts: 2151

Posted: 02 May 2005 at 3:15pm | IP Logged

hi you guys!

i need to think of some new ideas so i'll post the next story some time 2morrow!!!!

love eran!!!

Asian Princess Goldie
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Asian Princess

Joined: 01 January 2005
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Posted: 02 May 2005 at 3:18pm | IP Logged

WOWWWW Eran Thats really good Clap i'm loving it .love how the storys flowing keep it up

glad 2 hear ure better

Take care

Love Asian Princess

sukh IF-Rockerz

Joined: 19 November 2004
Posts: 5154

Posted: 02 May 2005 at 3:19pm | IP Logged

good one. online hee sahie. but atleast we can laugh /smile a little bit.


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