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ArHi FF! Freeloop Chapter 9A, Page 40, 09/Sep (Page 37)

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
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I loved it!! gonna keep it short, load shedding. F*L :(
 
and as for the feeling wierd to talk to a 16 year old part. How about this? I remind you of the time when you were a hormone driven, socially incompetent teen as well? Were you, just by the way?
 
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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
N now am imagining exactly what she meant..n m nt able to gather my thoughts..
They need to have a talk it seems!!
Thanks!

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nice oneee...
thnx 4 pmBig smile

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
part 8 B
awesome...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
I'm really liking your characters CN. Ok, not exactly liking them (knowing you, Khushi might as well be guilty of something even as we brand her innocent). They make me a bit uncomfortable but yes, they are damn interesting.
Good writing. And as for checking out S, did you try some of her crazy humour? I though you might like that...

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 10:20am | IP Logged
nice update.. :)

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 10:27am | IP Logged
It hurts plain and simple - unrequited love or love that just cannot...be. It has no rhyme and reason, logic dictates that one should just take a step back and continue on another path; forget the other person, they can't give you what you want, you can't give them what they want, just stop with the self torture and move on.

If only it could be that simple! If only people didn't spend...decades even in limbo...about their feelings because they are always running away from accepting what just can't, shouldn't or won't ever be! That kind of stuff turns the bravest people into the meekest, the kindest and most loving of individuals into the most selfish, all in the name of self-preservation. It's a horrible, nasty feeling, alas it is part and parcel of being human. Another unfortunate consequence is the almost deification of the object of one's unrequited love: somehow they become brighter, better in your memories, they're faults melting away into the ether with the hurt..

I applaud Arnav for keeping that smile on his face and for the first time I sympathise with and feel sorry for the guy. Perhaps Khushi may be the person to help him understand why it never could be with Asha and show him that it takes the right person to move on. If it was right to begin with and was meant to happen then regardless of Asha's closeness with his family it would have. But he has to understand that and take her off that pedestal - he has to seek clarity and closure.

Or perhaps in your story Arnav and Asha finally get together? Who knows it's your story CN, Wink. Although I would ask that you give poor tortured Khushi some respite - poor girl! Let her be swept off her feet!

ETA: I said these feelings are horrible and nasty...they certainly feel like that when you're in the thick of it. Doesn't mean going through these experiences is necessarily bad...it just feels really crappy LOL to feel that way!

Clap Brilliant chapter by the way!


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Tht was awesome too good! Loved it. Pls update soon! Thnks for the pm.

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