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ArHi FF! Freeloop Chapter 9A, Page 40, 09/Sep (Page 3)

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by QuiteThoughtful

Hey there, a warm welcome to the forum... I see you are a newbie, so congrats on your first story. I was quite impressed by your writing style, honestly hard to come by stories written with a perfect grammar. However I wonder why Arnav would sleep with a clearly immoral woman... I mean, it strikes as... Odd... Happy writing
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In case you haven't noticed, this is your first post too. So welcome right back at ya! Thanks for the appreciation of my writing skills. I may not have perfect grammar or punctuation and use too many adverbs, but I am trying not to make noob mistakes. (pun totally intended. 6th.Element, that's how you use pun.)

And this is the beginning of a rant. Somehow your last few statements gave me a feel that you are probably 8 or 9 years old who has no frigging clue as to how adults behave or think, and if you are, then ignore rest of the comment and go back to your room and memorize multiplication tables. Not that it would do you any good, but saying.

You sure have a skewed or no wait. Let me go on a limb here and say wrong perception about people and their priorities. This moral policing is sure weary especially in a forum like this but calling a woman immoral so...easily is just...mind boggling.

Et tu woman!

There is no back story, not even a decent introduction about the woman in question here and just gave your halfassed judgment about her being "immoral". If she is immoral then what would Arnav be then? How the heck is he coming clean in this scenario? What kind of a man is he to sleep with a married woman fully knowing the implication of his actions?

Stop judging this woman (and Arnav) without fully understanding their prerogatives. Maybe then you will realize that people don't always fall under black or white or even gray shades.

Maybe they are red and green and blue.

CN. 

 

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
Shit just got serious

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ivre

Shit just got serious
I second that

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
6 posts old and already fighting.
No I don't intend to imply that a person with 1500 posts is authorized to fight
Is jhagde ko kya naam doon?


Edited by ivre - 19 July 2012 at 11:37pm

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Iss War Ko Kya Naam Doon? ;)

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by QuiteThoughtful

Hey there, a warm welcome to the forum... I see you are a newbie, so congrats on your first story. I was quite impressed by your writing style, honestly hard to come by stories written with a perfect grammar. However I wonder why Arnav would sleep with a clearly immoral woman... I mean, it strikes as... Odd... Happy writing
ps. I see legendary initials

ROFL

i am with her... are u even more angry now, Mr. Noob???ROFLROFL

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 1:29am | IP Logged
whoa! this is super intriguing! im loving it so far! cant wait for the next chapter!! :D fantastic writing :)

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