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ArHi FF! Freeloop Chapter 9A, Page 40, 09/Sep (Page 25)

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by icegurl789

okay the revealation left me shocked...so khusi doesnt stay in the same building as arnav...interesting much!

past is bringing out tons of untold emotions Arnav seriously need to work . 

so Asha is the third angle in the story?

ahhh their friendship is somehow complicated...sharing your stuff with a stranger and letting the stranger be a better judge of your actions somehow leaves us at peace thatz what arnav did in the second last update...but its quite uncertain...strongheaded characters - i wonder what more have you planned for the duo in the next update and what direction their life is gonna head to!


I skipped the part where she finds herself a place and moves out of Payal. Would cover it as a part of their conversation in later chapter.

I think I should write a bit more of Khushi next. Arnav's complexity arises out of messed up childhood and confusion he bathed in during his teens. That needs to be rationalized and dealt with. He has no idea why he is spitting out everything to Khushi though.

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 9:45am | IP Logged
I love their relation
Arnav comes n confesse anythg to her like she is his diary
I love this part of their relation the most

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CynicalNoob

Originally posted by icegurl789

okay the revealation left me shocked...so khusi doesnt stay in the same building as arnav...interesting much!

past is bringing out tons of untold emotions Arnav seriously need to work . 

so Asha is the third angle in the story?

ahhh their friendship is somehow complicated...sharing your stuff with a stranger and letting the stranger be a better judge of your actions somehow leaves us at peace thatz what arnav did in the second last update...but its quite uncertain...strongheaded characters - i wonder what more have you planned for the duo in the next update and what direction their life is gonna head to!


I skipped the part where she finds herself a place and moves out of Payal. Would cover it as a part of their conversation in later chapter.

I think I should write a bit more of Khushi next. Arnav's complexity arises out of messed up childhood and confusion he bathed in during his teens. That needs to be rationalized and dealt with. He has no idea why he is spitting out everything to Khushi though.


well,i would like you to continue with your version of story since you are a writer and better know know your characters...but probably i m getting all so-hyped and impatient for what the next plot is gonna be...till then silencing the impatient part of me...i m all geared up for you to bring in the greyest of past n i m so damm hooked to your story!:)

ps i need to stop jumping to extremely vulnerable conclusions.

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Arnav and Khushi do share a very good rapport... and Arnav's one hell of a confusing soul... And he gets a migraine when he suffers heart-ache? That's quite some condition... lol ( ok, I know it's bad manners to laugh at people's inabilities, I apologise...)   :-)

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged
wow.. what a turn of event.. asha.. hmm interesting.. it is always weird to face the one you loved.. whether they knew about it or not.. it still hurts to see them.. even if you have moved on..

awesome story.. like the way it is going..

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
hmm...well it's indeed a mess..!!
ASHA..?? well than it must be a one sided love na..??
no feelings from her side. guess so..and what about khushi's past.?
not a trace yet.! and she got kicked out of her so-called house too..
well i can predict what's coming on now..and it seems interesting enough too..!
continue soon..

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
poor arnav, he is so confused.
interesting.

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
thax 4 da pm frnd
so arnav loved asha...i cant understand his behaviour
1 moment he says hes f*ckd up coz he loved asha who is lyk a sis 2 aman
2nd moment hes lyf i played game till 4am  dats y m having migrane
 
 
nyc update
waiting 4 da next

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