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ArHi FF! Freeloop Chapter 9A, Page 40, 09/Sep (Page 13)

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
You never fail to surprise me, be it your updates or your commentsWink... Here, we all (including Arnav) were wondering how Khushi would lash out at Arnav and what he'd do to pacify her... but that cool indifference when Arnav apologised... truly different style of writing,I'd say... Nice update, dudeSmile   

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 8:21am | IP Logged
simply fabulous.loved it0

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 8:26am | IP Logged
amazing!

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Ah so no slapping CN... Quite a save
well the last line said quite a lot... Khushi is quite funny

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CynicalNoob

Chapter 3:

What he didn't understand was why did it matter to him what she felt in the first place.

To be continued.



This Arnav can't be so dense, can he? She owes him a bowl of sugar and he wants to find out what the liquid in the bowl she was returning tasted like. He didn't dare lick it off the floor and he is secretly hoping that she will offer to make it (or buy it ... this is CynicalNoob's Khushi, right?) for him again.

Freeloop's Arnav is not going to turn down a bowl of free liquid, is he?
He will be rather disappointed if that bowl of made-by-Khushi (or bought-by-Khushi) liquid was only a one-night offer.

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 10:09am | IP Logged
I jus loved Khushi's response heheheheh
Oops Khushi to move out of Payal's house
Lets c what happens then

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Huzzah. Would love to see Arnav tasting his own medicine one bitter mouthful at a time.It's so much better than boxing his ears or punching his stomach. Petty satisfaction, this.LOL

Edited by seoulbeats - 26 July 2012 at 10:26am

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
voila.! you write so well..!! gawd and you said it's your first try..i mean seriously..? m shocked.!
whatever it is i really appreciate your work and will be looking forward to read it further.

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