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Arshi: OS: THE BET !!! COMPLETE (Page 13)

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Loved it
Thanks for the PM

Geet

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged
was really stupendous update...
finally akash opened his mouth hp he does same in
serial nd nk lolz he right Arnav should have thought this
before lolz hp tat something like this happens in da serial too

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
thanku for such a lovely story.

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
nice one

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Very nice...I am looking forward to more of your work.
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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 3:21am | IP Logged
beautiful !!!!!!! Smile
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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 5:32am | IP Logged
lovely...
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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
RES !!!

Wow Now That was damn romantic like you had siad n the Pm 
Loved the way he told her  his life was dark till she entered 
Loved the part the lit the lamps together
The scene was so visual 
I was blushing and grinning throughout the pat 
Wow it was just magnificent
He  made the terrus a memorable place for a good thing that was an awesome idea you were rite I wish so badly this happens in the serial I mean the proposal in the terrus was the most amazing part 
He had decorated the poolside too
Loved the ring !!
Loved the way he proposed her it was all so romantic Your an awesome writer !!
And then the family enter first time there s no disturbance 
And I also loved Payal's reaction 
The way you stated that she could not ever receive such a treatment from Akash 
Clap for Akash he finally spoke  up
And ya!! they conquered the JI In 6 months - Lolz it also cracked me up 
The last part was ROMANTIC AND FILLED WITH HUMOROUSNESS 
Payal accepts its a long.. way to go
Loved Angele positive take on the whole thing I wish she would do that in the serial too 
Over all I loved 
And thanks for the Pm
Take care 
Amanda 




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