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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 1:51am | IP Logged
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Anandi and Shiv are stranded in a cowshed when heavy rains flood the village of Jaitsar.  Shiv offers to help Anandi as the cattle in the cowshed are getting drenched and the rain doesn't seem to stop in the near future. Shiv grabs a plastic sheet and puts it on the roof of the cowshed and thereby rescuing the cattle. Anandi once again is thankful to Shiv that he came to her rescue. And Shiv says "mere hote hue aapko koi takleef nahi hogi" (I'll always be there for you) . They both wait in vain for the rain to stop. Shiv calls Dadisa and assures her that Anandi is safe with him. The rain stops by evening and Shiv(totally drenched and then dried due to chill wind) drops Anandi to her haweli and leaves for his home. And the next day Anandi visits the collector office to check on some papers regarding the grant issued for the development of her school. She notices that the collector hasn't yet reached the office. She calls Bheem Singh and comes to know that he is out of town and has no clue as why the collector hasn't come to the office. Anandi though reluctant calls him and she is a bit worried when he doesn't pick her call. She decides to visit his home. She goes to his house and the door is open. She goes inside to see that Shiv is lying on the bed. She goes close by and puts her hand on his forehead and she comes to know that he is running high fever. (Arre inhe to bahut tez bukhar hai..doctor Lal Singh ko call karti hoon)  she picks up her phone and calls Laal Singh. "Laal Singh collector sahib ko bahut tez bukhar hai...kya tum unke ghar aa sakte ho..jaldi se" "Abhi pahunchta hoon Anandi" says Laal Singh. Shiv could barely open his eyes. Laal Singh enters and examines  Shiv. He tells Anandi "barish me bheegne se bukhar hai..fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai" Anandi takes a deep breadth and thanks God. Laal Singh continues "tum inke maathe pe geela kapda lagate rehna..main kuch dawaiyan leke aata hoon". Anandi nods her head. Anandi hurriedly goes inside and gets a bowl of lukewarm water and a towel.  She wets the cloth and puts it on Shiv's forehead. Shiv slowly opens his eyes and looks at Anandi with a lot of gratitude and love. Anandi is a bit embarrassed at the situation they are in.    Laal Singh comes with the medicines and tells Anandi to put Shiv on medication immediately. Anandi hurriedly goes in and gets a spoon and gives medicine to Shiv. Anandi tells Laal Singh that Shiv might not have eaten anything and tells him what happened the previous day. Laal Singh tells Anandi "kuch halka sa kha lena chahiye nahi to kamzori bad jayegi" Anandi wonders what to do now. She tells Laal Singh to wait there for sometime and she would quickly go home and get something for Shiv. Laal Singh agrees and Anandi rushes back home. Daadi sa asks "kahan doudi ja rahi hai chhori?" Anandi narrates  what happened and tells Daadi sa "soch ti hoon thodi si khichdi banake le jaaun" Daadi Sa is all smiles and tells her to go ahead. Anandi makes khichdi and takes it tp Shiv. Shiv is feeling slightly better after taking the medicine. Laal Singh he has to rush to the hospital and leaves. Now its Anandi and Shiv in the room.  Shiv looks at her fondly and Anandi gives a stare and immediately looks away. She gets some khichdi in the plate and tells Shiv that he has to eat now. Shiv says he is not at all hungry. Anandi says "aisey kaise chalega...khana to aapko khana hi padega..tab hi jaldi theek ho payenge" she literally takes a spoon and feeds him. Shiv gives that stare once gain as Anandi feeds him. She tells him "aaj office aane ki zaroorat nahi hai..saare meetings cancel kar dijiye aur sham tak aaram kijiye" Main phir aapse milungi" shiv is speechless and just looks at her. He is thanking his stars for the fever. As Anandi leaves Shiv just takes the blanket and gets lost in her thoughts.

 

Scene 2:

Shiv teaches Anandi to drive

Well..Anandi comes back home thinking about Shiv and in the evening she calls him to check on his fever. Shiv is glad and smiling looking at Anandi s name flashing on his mobile screen. He picks up the call "Hi Anandi". Anandi says "Collector saab, ab tabiyat kaisi hai aapki?" Shiv says "kaafi better feel kar raha hun...Anandiji, thank you for everything. Agar aap nahi hoti to..." Anandi just smiles and says "arrey thank you kis baat ki...maine wo wohi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga

Next morning..Anandi is up early so that she meets Shiv first and then visit her school. She calls the driver and Bhairon says that "Driver  ki to tabiyat kharab hai beta..woh 2-3 din tak nahi aayega..tumhe kahin jaldi jaana hai?" Anandi says "haan baapusa, mujhe collector sahib ke office jaana hai aur uske baad school. Paidal jaaungi to der ho jayegi" Bhairon says "mujhe kuch kaam se bahar jaana hai, main tujhe collector sahib ki office tak chhod dunga" Anandi says 'thheek hai' and Bhairon drops her to collector's office. Anandi first checks on his health and then they will be looking at the new chart of the development of the school. She then tells him that she is in a hurry and has to go to school. Shiv offers to drop her and she would be wondering whether to go with him. Before she could say anything he picks up his jeep keys and says "chaliye". She follows him and on the way she tells him that "main har baar aapko taqleef deti hoon..aapko apna kaam chhodke mujhe drop karna padta hai" ..for that Shiv smiles and says "toh aap gaadi chalana kyon nahi seekhti?" Anandi wonders and says" yeh baat to mere dimag me bilkul nahi aayi..lekin mujhe jeep chalana sikhayega koun?" Shiv is waiting for her to say that, but controls himself and says "yeh baat to sahi kahi aapne.. hmmm" . Anandi looks at him and smiles shyly as if she knows that Shiv is teasing her. They both look at each other, smile and look away. Both say it together..Shiv saying "agar aap chahe to main aapko gaadi chalana sikha sakta hoon" and Anandi saying "kya aap mujhe gaadi chalana sikhayenge?"  They both start laughing and then Shiv says "theek hai to kal subah jogging ground pr milte hai" Anandi nods her head.

The next day Shiv and Anandi meet. After a quick exchange of good mornings shiv starts explaining her the techniques of driving ..what is clutch, what is break and accelerator etc. Anandi listens to him like an obedient student and then Anandi is on the driving seat. Shiv sitting next to her. While explain he happens to brush her hands many a times. They come very close to each other and then finally shiv shouts "break lagayiye please..aur itna fast nahi..aaaj to pehla din hai".  Anandi hurriedly puts the break ! Then shiv asks her "kya aap mujhe mere ghar drop karengi?" Anandi just smiles and says "abhi nahi collector sahab..thode aur din aur main apni gaadi khud chalakar aaungi"  They both smile and get on the jeep. :)

scene 3 updated

Anandi is a pro in driving now and the whole village especially young girls look up to her for inspiration. Anandi cant thank Shiv enough for this. She realizes that all men are not alike.  The awkwardness  that she had with Shiv seems to have reduced to a large extent. They are comfortable with each other. She knows that he is not like any other man that she has met in her life. She feels a sense of security when he is around. She knows that he is someone she can burst out on. She knows that she can be totally herself with him. She can open up with all her ideas and all her thoughts about the development of her village and she knows that they together as a team can do wonders to their little village. The people of Jaitsar also realise that they are a blessing to their village and adore them for that. At the same time, Anandi feels no pressure from her family to get married. Her family has realised that the time will heal her wounds and she would be out of it soon and that only Shiv can do it for her. So they have left her alone to handle her life the way she wants.  Anandi knows that her family is her biggest support and they will be ready any time she wants.  She leads quite a hectic schedule with so much to be done for Jaitsar and her school. 

Its the annual day of Anandi's school and all the children prepare for the event. Anandi, Gulli are trying their level best to put up a good show. They call for a meeting to discuss who would be the chief guest for the event. All the girls in unison want to call Shiv and no one else as he is very much responsible for the development of their school. Anandi has no go but to accept it. Now she goes to the collector's office and says "sorry, maine aapko is waqt pe disturb kiya" ..shiv says "jee bilkul nahi..kahiye..kuch kaam tha?" Anandi "Ji woh kya hai na, humari school ka shanivaar ko annual day hai, aur saari ladkiya chahti hai ki aap chief guest ho..kaafi tayyari kar rahi hai uske liye" . Shiv looks at her and says"wow!  Thats great...Kya sirf  girls hi chahti hain ki main aaun?  Principal nahi?" Anandi is slightly embarrassed and blushes a bit and says "ji nahi..hum sab chahte hai ki aap humare chief guest bane" Shiv is thrilled hearing this and says "tab to main zaroor aana chahunga" . Anandi says "Jee thank you..aur mujhe poora vishwas hai ki aap ladkiyon ki mehnat se kaafi khush honge" Shiv replies "ofcourse! Aapki students jo hai!"  Anandi gives a shy smile and says "bye". 

Shiv reaches the school and greets everyone. Anandi is leading the whole lot of girls. As shiv comes some of the girls come and do the traditional welcome. Anandi is just making sure that everything falls in place. Anandi calls Shiv on the stage. She welcomes all the people and parents to the event and also says that "Aaj hamare liye yeh garv ki baat hai ki hamare saath hum sabke pyare collector sahib moujud hain jinhone humare Jaitsar ke liye itna kuch kiya aur hamen aur sapne dekhna sikhaya..main chahti hoon ki woh kuch shabd kahen" Shiv was listening to Anandi with all attention and was feeling good that she thinks good of him. Shiv gets up and comes on to the podium and says 'Main aap logon se zyada time nahi lunga, jis gaon me Anandi jaisi sarpanch ho aur aap logon ka saath toh mere jaise collector ka kaam kaafi asaan ho jaata hai. Aapne mujhe yahan bulaya uske liye bahut dhanyavaad aur I wish the girls all the best". Shiv comes and sits next to Anandi. Anandi whispers 'aapne to bilkul baat nahi ki' Shiv goes close to her and says 'arrey mujhe bhashan dena pasand nahi hai..agar main apna kaam theek karunga to my work will speak for itself!' Anandi seems impressed and says 'achha!!' and they both smile looking into each others eyes. The girls put up a great show and Shiv tells Anandi 'yeh dance aapne sikhaya in bachchiyon ko' Anandi says 'ji haan' Shiv 'mujhe to bilkul yakeen nahi hota...aap aur itna achha dance' Anandi knows that he is teasing her ,,she hits him on the shoulder fondly. They are done for the day and Shiv tells Anandi 'ab ghar jake aaram keejiye, bahut thak gayi hongi' Anandi just nods her head and says 'good night'. They seem to be extremely happy in each others company. Shiv doesn't want rush her into anything . Anandi feels that she shouldn't have been so rude to him after the marriage proposal.  She wants to apologize for that and she somehow is not able to. She decides to do that the next day. She is in her room lying on the bed..and her mobile beeps. Its a message from Shiv 'you put up an excellent show. I m so proud of you.' Anandi replies 'Thank you and that encourages me to do for more my girls and their future. Good night'. Anandi is staring at the message with a shy smile on her face. Shiv is staring at his phone dreaming of the days that are going to comeby!!   

 


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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Aww how cutee!  She really should learn how to drive a car in the show!  

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Cute! Continue soon please :)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:34am | IP Logged
aww thats so nice

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the drivig scene was also cute -x-

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