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manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 (Page 52)

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 4:12am | IP Logged
 No way pari you ended this SS  Monkey Winks Monkey Winksgod knows how will i live without this SS as it was one of my favorite SS's and now i won't get an update well i can at least have a new SS i know you already have our mermaid waala SS but still and vasise your SS are SO CALLED short stories as they are really long LOLbut are always brilliant and this was like the most hilarious SS I've ever read and this part was like the perfect ending and manyata's dialogues were awesome so eager for the baby to come to this world na lol and the baby scene was too cute and the way you described all the emotions when baby came to this world were something i'll call fabulous  and i will surely miss this and will defo miss aakash and his balance ROFL. Pari thanx for such a beautiful SS it was really a pleasure readin your stuff which was really drop dead beautiful i must say. And your regular updates was one thing i really liked bout you as a writer and ofcourse no rotten eggs tomatoes and high heels for you ROFL as i get alot for not updating ROFL you see its almost a month and i've still not updated my FF. Anyways you are brilliant and you did an awesome job with this SS and i guess you are the only writer which has written almost 2-3 SS and that too till 55-78 parts and for that hats off to you Monkey IconsMonkey Icons love you pari jaan love you soo much Monkey IconMonkey IconMonkey Icon
and plzz plzz plzz i want new SS baby i want a new SS plzzMonkey Winks ab mujh jeise masoom ka dil mat todna tum jaan http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m167.gif
 

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
@andy
awww...
Baby sry.. :-(
I know main bhoot shrt ss likhti hu,becoz yar ek limit tk stry ko end krna mujhe pasnd h,main jyada strech ni kr skti...

Nd yes darlng new theme agar mere mind me aaya to definatly main start krugi...
Thanx 4 beautiful cmnt.
Love jaanu.
Muuhh.

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Pari, this is one of the most light hearted and entertaining ff I have ever read. I'm gonna miss this loads Disapprove, haven't got time to read ur other ff,'no  limitation' will star reading that now, but please give us replacement for this ff, pari.

Thank you for giving such a wonderful ff.Hug

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
woww wat a ss and specially ending is dhamakedar with happy ending sond and bilkul MHJT ki tarah ending hai...<3

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Asyalover

woww wat a ss and specially ending is dhamakedar with happy ending sond and bilkul MHJT ki tarah ending hai...<3




thannx alot dear
bt wht s MHJT?
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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 7:10am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 1:56am | IP Logged
I LIKE YOUR STORY

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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
nice ssBig smileBig smile

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