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manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 (Page 51)

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneet..

Cry
I m realy sonam darlng.
2day s no update becoz mere hath me bhoot tej pain ho rha h..
Bt 2mmrow pkka..
:-(i m realy sry
Plz 4gve me.

Pari
Hey Pari. No need to say sorry yaar. It's really ok. Now My excitement is double to read your both updates.Wink
Update from a Mobile phone n still you update your both SS regularly, HATS OFF TO YOU PARI. I like other FFs also but I always wait for your updates, I jus love your story n dialogues.Smile
No worries Champ, I'll wait for your updates k.  n TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF.Hug Hug 



Edited by Vasishtha - 09 October 2012 at 12:23pm

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Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-64

Manyata apne rum me mirror k saamne khadi hoke apna pait dekhti h'of oh abi nikla ni..

Or sb(uday,jagat,jay,tara,vijay,akash,unati)dekh rhe hote h...

Manyata apne stomach pe hath fairti h.
'Kb ayoge g jra jaldi. Tara'arey aaj hi thodi aajayega.
Manyata'tara dekh na ni nikal rha.
Jagat'bhabhi nikal jayega.
Manyata'hawww. Ek min
Savre se mera pait nikalne ki bat kh rhe the tum...
Akash'bdi jaldi smjh gai.
Uday'ha tere jeisi smjhdar ni h na.
Unanti'bhabhi aap sb ko ek bhoot bdi khushi de rhe ho.
Thanku.
Vijay'aacha uday ye bta cricket,ya football team.
Uday'ha ha machine h na ek coin dalege or ek k bad ek aate jayenge..
Akash'suchi aisa bi hota h.
Unanti'hota bi to main machine ni hu.

All laugh...

Jagat'wrna akash tu to cricket team bna leta.
Akash'bache bhoot pasnd h mujhe.
Manyata'mujhe bi.
Jagat'bhabhi agar bhai jeisa bacha sambhal liya h aapne to aap kisi ko sambhal loge..
Uday'pr akash tere bs ki ni h..
Akash'kyn?
Unanti'kyn kya?hm to sambhlte ni h bache sambhalenge.
Jagat'hmari chod
Bhai chal 7th bolte h.
Uday'hmari chod,phone ka bl.
To sambhlta ni h bache sambhalenge sir.
Tara'akash dalwa le.
Manyata'o teri tara.
Unanti'tara tumbi kuch bi bolti ho.
Tara'maine aisa kya bola?
Jagat'haayee,ye ldki bi na,naugty h puri.
Tara shout'arey dalwane k lye hi to bola h.
Uday'kya dalwana h wo uski bat kr ri h kya?
Tara cnfused'uski kiski,main to akash ko kh ri thi phone me bl.dalwa le.
Akash heart pe hath rkh k'thank god,main to kuch glt samjha tha
Uday 'sir tumhi ni sb glt smjhe the.
Vijay'tara double meaning baatein mt bola kr aacha khasa insan pagl bn jayega.
Tara'tum logo ne kya socha.?
Manyata'whi jo tu samjh ri h.
Tara'hawww.
Gadho ab se kuch bolugi hi ni.
Jagat'hmesha yhi bolti h,or hmesha hmare armaan jga deti h..

Uday'weise uncle tere cell me bl.
H kitna?
Akash'pta ni lekin jyada h tumsb se.

Uday'aacha.
Akash'main ab apna cel ni dunga kisi ko...

Jagat'ha rkh le sambhal k wrna hm tera bl.
Khtm krdege..

Jay'chalo sb di ko aaram krne do.
Jagat'ruk na,bhabhi mere se shart lagao.
Manyata'kya?
Jagat'ldki hogi..
Manyata'ldka hoga..
Jay'main bi gues krugi ah ldki..
Tara'twins boy
Unanti'twins grl.
Akash'jo wheguru dede hm to khel lenge uske 7th.
Uday'kamine bol wheguru ki kirpa bni rhe,dene wali to manyata h.
Manyata'uday tum btao na..
Uday manyata ko bck hug krta h.
Main to bolta hu
Mere bhai ki wsh or manyata ki wsh dono.
Akash'mtlb.
Uday'twins bt ldka ldki dono..
Jagat'smjha,chalo dekhte h kiski wsh puri hoti h bt bhai i m always wid u.
Manyata eyes close nd thout'wheguru mere uday ki wsh sunlena...
Uday kisd hr 4head
'take a rest...

Wo sb chale jate h.
Gr'uday main soch rha hu manindar ko bula lu.
Akash'kyn?
Jagat'teri shikyat krni h.
Unanti'ha papag bula lo.
Br'tara beta narendar ko bi bula lo.
Tara'papag wo mere se naraj h pta ni ayenge bi ki ni..
Jagat'ye narendar kaun h?
Uday'arey whi jisko station jane se roka tha,tara ka baap.

Maya sbko dudh deti h.
Br'dudh pee lo,jwan ho abi thoda khaya piya kro.
Vijay'khane pine k lye ye dudh hi mila Tha...
Komal'chup chap pee lo nakhre mt kro..
Akash'ha ni to.
Maa mere dudh k glass me bourvita dal do.

All lookd akash nd loudly laugh.
Jagat'bhai aaj pta chal gya iska dimag itna strong keise h?
Uday'ha bourvita pee,shi h apne bacho ko bi piladiyo..

Maya'uday ye le.
Uday'kya h?main ni pita na aapko pta h.
Ds'uday beta pee le savre se kuch ni khaya tumlogo ne.
Uday naugty'ni ds.plz
Gr'oye khote peele.
Dhudh se bones majbut bnte h.

Uday jagat lookd each othe nd laugh
'phr to aap hi pee lo
Hm to jwan h,budhe to aap ho rhe ho...

Manyata aati h maya k hath me se dudh ka glas leti h or uday ka muh pkad k uske muh me dhudh k glas se dhudh pila deti h.. Uday'chi ganda.
Manyata'kya ganda?chup chap sharifo ki trh pee liya kro dudh smajhe.
Uday'sharif,hm akash ni h.
Maya'tu jis cheez ko khane pine se darta h na,wo ab tu khayega..
Gr'takker ki mili h.
Sabash manyata beta..
After 4 mnth...

Manyata sittng in hall..
Komal'manyata beta ye dwai le.
Manyata dwai khati h.
Tbi sb toys leke aate h hlla mchate huye.
Manyata happy'wow,toys.
Uday dance krte huye aacha hua btadiya hmein pta ni tha my jaanu.

Jagat'saare toys aagye h,cycle,gudiya gudda,tedy bear,train etc..

Manyata khadi hoti exictment me tbi wo phr beith jati h.
Sb toys ko chodke manyata k pas jate h.
Uday uske pait pe hath rkh k r u ok?
Manyata'ye kick mar rha h.
Akash'kya?
Andar foolbal h kya?
Uday'akash chup wo footbal,crickt sb tere pait me hoga.
Uday ne hath rkha h pait wo phr ek kick krta h'o teri.
Hello champ.
Jaldi bahar aa phr face 2 face kick khelege.
Jagat also feel baby's kick
'o teri,meri jan jaldi aa,tere pair bde strng h re..
All laugh.

Last mnth(9mnth)cum..

Manyata apne tummy ko handle krte huye strais se utrti h..
Br'beta g aaram.
Maya'arey jrurt kya thi,aane ki.
Uday'manyata,stop main aata hu.
Manyata'maa wo mujhe suddn she s loudly shout..
Usko pain hone lgta h..

Uday'o teri isko dard start ho gya.
Akash'wo to jb bacha hone wala hota h tb hota h maine suna h.
Tara'chup ho ja gadhe.
Jagat'arey bhai bhabhi ko sambhalo..
Uday manyata ko apne arms me pickup krta h..
Gr'arey gadi nikalo.
Uday'ha to main paidal thodi jauga.

Bt manyata chilate-2 faint ho jati h..
Uday stop nd feard'manyata manyata
Dadi ye to faint ho gai.
Sb preshan..

Uday dar jata h'manyata uth manyata.
Ds'chup uday ekdum chup kuch ni hoga.
Manyata ko yha rkh or saare gaints bahar jaye.
Gr'hm bi.
Uday'aurat ho kya,mard ho to bahar chalo..
Jagat'pr dadi.
Maya'chalo sb bahar bs ldkiya ruk jaye...

Saare gaints bahar chale jate h.
Or idhar manyata ki dilivary komal,maya nd ds krti h.
Jb uski dilivery hoti h to she s shout.

Bahar uday'o thank god jinda h.

Br'beta preshan mt ho sb thik hoga.
Uday'wo to pta h mujhe
Jagat'lekin certifict kha bnega.
Gr'mtlb.
Uday'birth certi.kha bnega.
Hmne pucha hm kha huye
Jagat'to ghr me.
Bhai k bacha puchege hm kha huye?
Uday'to unko bi bolega sb tere dadag ki wjh se hua h gadi jaldi ni nikali or tubhi ghr pe ho gya...
Jagat'ha ni to..

Phr baby cryng ki awaaza aand lgti h..
Vijay'ay baby ro rha h.
Akash'thanku btadiya...

Ds open d door sb khade hoke uday ko dekhti h.
Uday'kya hua?
Aise dyan kyn bni ho sb?
Tara'guess kr kya hua h?
Jay'btao jaldi tbi ntery.
Uday'arey jo bi hua ho mujhe apni manyata ko dekhna h.
Ds'ni phle bta.
Uday'ldka ldki.
Maya'cngrats yhi huye h.
Jagat'o teri,hato na.
Wo dhka deke sb andar jate h.
Dono baby 1grl nd 1boy manyata k 1side lete h.
Both cutely lightly smile nd apne chote-2 hath pair chala rhe h.
Sb unhe dekh k emotional ho jate h...
Specialy uday..
Phle jaga baby ko uthata h.
Waah,bhai u r man...
Ldki bhabhi pe gai h,or ldka
Uday'ldka chacha pe gya h...
Jagat'oh,champ tu to meri trh h...
Phr sb baby k 7th khelte h..

Uday manyata ko 4head pe kis krta h.
'thanku mam...
Manyata'same 2 u sir..
Uday'i m win.
Manyata'9 i m also win.
Uday'how?
Manyata'mere pas bi 2uday h ab.
Uday smile'maine kha tha wheguru ko hmari tunning bhoot
Manyata'bhoot ni kuch jyada hi mst lgi isliye hm yha tk h..
Jagat'bhai lena apne baache ko...
Uday phr undono ko leta h...
Nd both uday ko dekh k smile krte h,or uday k chick pe pair marte h...
Uday'o teri manyata aap apne uday ko pkdo main to apni princes k 7th kheluga..

Gr br komal maya ds blesings dete h...
Manyata'papa aap nam rkhiye.
Uday'apni trh bhaynak mt rkhna.
Jagat'hmari trh swt nam rkhna...

Tara'ruko akash phle unanti ko cal krke bula abi tk aai ni.
Akash cal krta h'u r bl.s insificient..
'ay o teri mera bl.
Khtm keise ho gya?
Jagat'jhoom braber jhoom akash ka bl.khtm .
Akash'sb tum logo ki wjh se hua h.
Uday'ab kbi mt btaiyo kisi ko ghamand se ki itna bl. h.
Gadha.
Unanti aati h'bhabhi,awww
How cute both.
Vijay'h bi to uday manyata k bache...

Ha ni to..


Gr'thanku manyata beta...
'mere pote ka nam '
Gyan.
Uday'ha ekdum shi...
Gyan gyani bnega.

Uday'or meri beti ka nam
'mishti.
Manyata'perfct...

Ds'chalo ab uday manyata,jagat,jay tum sb apni shaitaniya km kro,qki 2shaitan aagye h.
Uday jagat'ni ni champ inhe hm hi to bnayege..
To shaitani krna to hmara janmsidh adhikar h..
Ha ni to..

All laugh...

Jagat'hm sb mile.
Uday'phr dil milne lge.
Manyata'ek ne bhaag k shadi ki.
Jay'to ek ki aragnge mariage hui.
Unanti'or ek ki love cum aragnge,bt
Akash'do ki hui thi atrangi shadi.
Vijay'do baap naraj the,
Tara'pr hm sb ne unhe milke mna liya.
Gr'or phr huye hmare pote poti.
Br'pure ghr me khushiya chai.

All said.
Thats a perfct family.
Nd thats a true frnds gruop...

Ha ni to...
Saayonaara...

Love u all
THE END...
Pari

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
U finished it wow pari absolutly perfect this is wat u call a happy ending but m really gonna miss this ss it was one of my favz after soulmate which was also urz thnk u pari hope u ryt many more

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
loved the ending the whole part was superb and plz start a new ff soon u r wrriting rocks

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Thank u so much
Summi nd mahi..
I m also ms dis ff..

Nd mahi new theme mind me aaya to i m definately start.
Thank u so much..

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 12:42pm | IP Logged

Superb ending Pari...It was just so beautifully writtenClap

and the end scene describing each one's marriage was too cute...Star

You rock for giving regular updates and this funny cum cute cum beautiful story...Hug

and congratz for successfully completing you another ssParty

will look forward to read your more amazing workDay Dreaming



Edited by adorable_rana - 11 October 2012 at 2:54am

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 2:34am | IP Logged
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Superb, superb update Champ. Claps, claps claps for you.Clap Clap Clap
All scenes, all dialogues, everything was so perfect. Jus loved this SS. Brilliantly written.Clap
n First time I liked Akash in any SS/FF.LOL
Loved Jagat n Uday's bonding.Wink
Manveer, J,Jagat,Tara, Vijay, Unnati n Akash jus love these guys.Smile
Great-great SS Pari.Tongue
HAPPY ENDING.Hug  Now I want a new one Champ.Wink 
In any conndition I want a new SS.Wink
Great work Champ.Hug
LOVE YOU.Hug Hug
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Edited by Vasishtha - 11 October 2012 at 3:05am

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Wow what a ending...super happy ending...chalo in shaitano ki toli me aur do nanhe munhe shaitan shamil ho gaye...

Finally Akash ka balance khatam ho he gaya haha...

This SS was funny naughty yet romantic...
Thanks for beautiful SS...

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