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manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 (Page 43)

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awesome update plz update soon
scared after reading precap dnt make thm fight for long

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Great Update Pari...Thumbs Up

You rock...keep goingHug

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Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-57

Gr change mood'bttmeez h,sharm ni aati ldke k 7th dance krne me.
Br'tere in bttmeez bacho ko sharm ni aati ldkiyo k 7th dance krne me..

Manindar'of oh yaaro sb bhul jao
Br'o aise keise bhul jau,iski wjh se meri gadi thuki thi,mere hath me chot aai thi..
Gr'aadho ki trh gadi chalata h.
Br'arey ja tu hoga pagal,na bacho ko kuch sikhaya h na khud.
Bttmeez
Uday angry'bs,bhoot ho gya,aap avi hi itna bole ja rhe h.
Manyata'mtlb,tere papa bole or mere papa sune kyn?
Jagat'gadi inhone glt chalai thi,hmari koi galti ni thi.
Jay'jyada bhola pan dikhane ki jrurt nhi h..
Sakal se kaminapan jhalak rha h.

Gr'mere to bete h,bol skte h,ye teri besharm betiya dekho bdo ka lhza hi ni h.
Br'ha tere beto ko bda h.
Manyata'to hm ldkiya h to kya muh sil ke beithe..

Jaga'to kya hmne chudiya phni h.
Jay'shok h to ja phn le.

Akash mandap me se uth k aata h'meri shadi hogi ki ni ye btado mujhe..

Manindar'main aapdono se req.krta hu plz shadi ho jane dijiye,uske bad ldlena...

Sb shant..

Shadi ho ri h.
Lekin shadi koi ni dekh rha h,gr br ko dekh rha h.
Uday manyata ko
Jagat jay ko.

Jagat'bhai,ye jay aise to bolti ni h or aaj dekho
Uday'manyata bi na
Lekin kuch bi ho yar hmara baap h uski insult krna srf hmara haq h..

Manyata'main chodugi ni,mere papag ko kuch kha to.
Ha ni to.

Akash unanti'meri
Shadi hmesha yad rhegi.
Qki tumhare papa,manyata k papa ld rhe the mere papa reffri bne the.
Unanti'chup chap shadi kro wrna tumbi player bnjaoge..
Ha ni to...

Vijay'manyata Bhai,papag ki wjh se apne or uday k bich me ldai kyn kr ri h..
Manyata'dimag thik h,papag mere ho or hmare samne papag ki insult ho ye kya shi h?

Pandit'shadi sampan hui,aaj se aap dono pti ptni huye..

Akash'ab ldai krlo..
Shadi ho gai..

Gr'aise logo se ldai krne me bi sharm aati h..
Br'ha tere se or tere pariwar se hmein bi bat ni krni.

Gr'manindar,mere uday-jagat k liye ye besharm ldkiya btai thi tune.

Uday angry or jagat se dhire'bhai ye jyada ho rha h.
Jagat'ye hmara papag bi na..

Manyata sad'jay,bhoot ho gya,ye koi hmse pyar-wyar ni krta..
Isko to main.

Vijay'uncle g sharm kro,aapki hi beti ki shadi h,or meri bhno k baare me kuch khne ki jrurt ni...

Gr'main to khuga,besharmo ki trh iski betiya naach ri h,na chuni ka pta h na kapdo ka,ye ldki(manyata)ye to mere uday jagat dono ko fsane me lgi thi.
Uday'papag bs
Gr'o tu chup kr.
Jay'itne sundar ni aapke ye ldke jo hm lyn maare,inke jeisi harquite ni h.

Gr'itne saare logo k saamne izazat ka khyal ni h,2-2 k ek hi 7th fsa ri h pta ni or kya karm krti hogi..

Br ful 2 angry mood wo gr pe hath uthata h'tbi uday uska hath pkd leta h..

Uday'ni uncle g,hmara hote huye hmare papa ki insult ho jaye hmein brdasht ni..

Manyata also angry'wo br ka hath uday k hath se chudati h'or mere rhte huye mere papa k 7th koi bttmeezi kre to uski izazat to kya aiso ko main dekhna pasnd ni krugi..
Chalo papag..

Manindar'br meri gal sun
Manyata unke samne hath jod k'aapne bulaya,hm aaye,bhoot aachi respct mili uske lye thanku.
Aaj k bad aise log jb party me aye to to hmein mt bulana..

Jagat woried'bhai wo manyata ja ri h.

Ds'manyata beta.
Gr'bttmeez ldki..

Uday cntinuos lookd hr,manyata bi piche mudke use dekhti h..
Both angry,painful eyecntct...

Wo chali jati h...

Sb apne-2 ghr jate h..
Uday jagat sadly beithe h.
Gr'manindar apne dost soch samjh k bnaya kr..
Manindar'br bhoot changa insan h.
Pta ni.
Maya'wo kudiya to bdi masum thi..
Khas tor pe wo kya nam tha.
Ds'manyata.
Maya'ha.
Gr'oye koi masum wasum ni thi besharm thi.

Uday out of cntrl'bs kro,kya besharmi dikhai usne,kya bina kapdo k nach ri thi kya?besharm thi besharm thi..

Jagat uday ko cntrl krne ki koshish kr rha h'bhai shant..
Uday shout'bs wo bi whi kr rhe the jo hm kr rhe the,aapki izazat izazat dusro ki izazat jeise khel.
Unanti aapki hi beti,uske bare me koi kuch khega to bnduk leke khade ho jaoge...

Uday ful 2 angry mood..

Gr dhire se'lekin tu ro kyn rha h?teri aankhn me aashu h..
Uday relize'maine glti krdi mujhe aisa ni krna chahiye tha..
Gr'beta,hm aaj k bad us pariwar se ni milege..
Uday apne baap ko angry look me dekhta h,or guse me wha se apne rum me chala jata h...
Rum ka darwaza lock krdeta h.
Jagat'bhai darwaaza khol.

Maya'aap kyn faltu bolte ho,jb pta h uday k guse k saamne aapki bi ni chalti.
Ds'hy bhagwan sb thik krna.

Maya bi jati h jagat k pas'uday darwaza khol beta..
Uday ko itna gusa krte huye kbi ni dekha..
Or rote huye to.
Jagat phr gr k pas jata h'mere bhai ko kuch hua na to pure ghr ko aag lga dunga...


Tara'papag paani or ye dwai lijiye..
Br'manyata jay beta idhar aa mere pas.
Manyata jay br k pas jake beithti h.
Br'beta,aap dono hmein bhoot pyar krti h,hmein pta h..
Shant hojao,arey aapke rhte huye hmein koi ni chu skta..
Lekin glti to thi hmari,hmne hath utha diya wo bi apni umr k buzarg pe..
Vijay'papag apni beti k baare me koi glt ni sun skta..
Komal'ha pta h,pr kya 2beto k samne uske baap pe koi hath utha rha h kya wo shi h?

Manyata huged br'i m sry papag agar wo unke papa the,to aap bi to hmare papa ho...

Br'mere beta,jao khana kha lo or sb bhul jao.
Manyata wipes hr tears'menu bhukh ni h..
Komal'tenu meri kasam h chalo sb jake phle khana khao..

Sb jate h.
Khana kha k,manyata bad pe cution se apna face chupa k rone lgti h..
Manyata uday cryng alot..

Jagat jay also vry sad...

Jagat'bhai darwaaza khol na.

Uday shout'jagat wo ni manegi ab,wo dur chali jayegi..
Meri glti thi,baap ki izazt k chaker me manyata ki insult krdi.
Jagat'bhai,wo bura ni manegi,aap dono to bhoot pyar krte h.
Uday'jagat maine uski aankho me aashu dekhe,or wo meri wjh se ni the.
Jagat'ni bhai,tujhe meri kasam darwaaza khol.

Uday darwaaza kholta h.
Uday hugd jagat..

Ds sb dekhti h'maine to socha tha uday kbi kmjor ni pd skta..
Uday'dadi,meri taqat bi manyata h kmjori bi manyata,

Ds'chup ho ja, har maan gya..

Manyata cryng alot.
'wo ni ayega ab..
Hm dono ne keise ldai krli.
Jay'di,sb thik ho jayega.
Uday jrur ayega.
Manyata'ni wo ab ni ayega,main uske 7th jwan ldai..

Vijay'sb glt hua.
Or sb hmara papag ki wjh se...

Manyata cntinuous say'main ni rh skti uske bina..
Uday meri zindgi h Jagat'bhai sb thik ho jayega,manyata aapse naraj ni ho skti...
Ds'ha uday jagat such bol rha h.
Uday'dadi maine kuch glt kiya kya?
Ds'wo ni pta mujhe lekin giri raj ne jo bola wo glt tha..
Ldki ki izazat hoti h,agar uske papa k samne koi aisa bolega to kaun se baap se shan hoga...
Uday'pr dadi...chup
Ye sb maya sunleti h.
'maa..
Maya'sry,wo jane lgti h.
Uday inocentaly'maa,ruko...
Maya stop'mujhe pta h tere dil k sbse kareeb jagat h or teri ds h..
Pr mujhe to itna to lgta tha ki main teri maa hu to shayed teri bat smjh jau..
Pr

Or idhar
Komal'suniye,wo ldka nam kya tha uday wo aacha tha.
Br'ha,to
Komal'hmari manyata k liye
Br'bs,jo kam imposible h uske baare me bat krna bekaar h..
Hm apni manyata jay ki shadh us ghr me ni kruga..
Bs wo bolke chale jate h..

Komal'pasnd to inko bi h,lekin ego.
Chado main apni manyata k pas jati hu...

Komal rum me jati h
Manyata ne ro roke bura hal bna rkha h.
Komal woried'manyata beta kya hua?
Ise kya hua?ro kyn ri h beta?
Manyata huged hr'maa,main uske bina mar jaungi.
Komal sbko dekhti h'kiske bina kya bat h?

Vijay darwaaza bnd krta h,idhr jagat darwaaza bnd krta h...

Vijay saari sachai btata h komal ko,

Idhr maya ko uday jagat sb btate h...

Komal'haayee,rabba itna kuch ho gya or btaya bi ni mujhe.
Jay'maa hm btadete,bs papa k dar se..
Komal quit angry'bs mujhe koi explation ni chahiye...

Maya'bs itna hi trust tha mere pe,chad mujhe jane de.
Uday hugd maya'i m sry maa,main kya kru maa??

Maya pic hm chick'arey tu rota bi h phle bche ki trh rona bnd kr.
Or mere mere uday jagat jb ye khte h ki ye kam muskil h..
Tb mujhe lgta h ki maine ni gr ne paida kiya h.

All laugh.

Manyata decently'maa,mujhe maaf krdo,main sb btadeti aapko..
Pr dar lgta tha.
Komal'tere papag ko bi wo ldka pasnd h,bs unka ego samne aa rha h.
Tara'maa,uday manyata k sivaye kisi or se shadi ni krega,ek aadmi se bilkul ni.
Komal'manyata k lye uday pasnd h unhe..
Manyata'wo ni manege.
Komal'ye na word to meri manyata jay vijay bolte hi ni..,

Ds'arey gr ko bi manyata jay pasnd h uday jagat k lye.
Bs ghamandi h.
Maya hold uday jagat hand'mujhe bs itna pta h,mere bacho k liye kuch imposible ni h.,
Mujhe manyata ko bhu k rup me dekhna h.

Uday'maa,ek shart h.
Maya'kya?
Uday'manyata aapki bdi bhu jay aapki choti bhu..
Maya jagat k kan pkdti h'khud ni bta skta..
Ha to leke aao..

Manyata'maa aap hmare 7th hona na.
Komal'tujhe koi utna pyar krne wala ni milega...
Mujhe uday hi chahiye tere liye,or jay jagat tere liye.
Ni bolegi to bi smjh jaungi...
Ha ni to.
All huged komal
'thanku maa...

Uday jagat hugd maya nd ds 'thanx alot maya nd ds.
With laugh.

Uday'mai ja rha hu manyata ko mnane
Chal jagat pinky to jaldi man jati h,lalmirchi thodi deir se.
Jagat'chal bhai...

Continue
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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
gr8 update pari...really awesome...what a twist...Smile

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:27am | IP Logged

first of all really very sorry for like not commenting in years

i am so sorry was kinda busy with my own update and trust
me i can't update like you regularly i am very lazy LOLLOL
 
Anways coming to the chappy it was very well written
loved the way you described the emotions of both Uday
and manyata haaye rula dala pari tumne to muje CryCry
but it was os heart touching plus loved the
whole brijraj and girjraj fiasco i enjoyed it to the core
i know you must be thinking kaise ladkki hai jisme
sabko rona aaya usme isne maze liye LOLLOL
but the convo and whole fight fiasco was very true
ofc koi bhi apne daddy ke baare me bura nahi sunsakta nahi
parents apne baccho ke baare me bura sun sakte hai
so no reason to say you "hey pari manveer ki ladai kyu karwai"
i have nothing against them being together
 
i really dont know why you don't get attention
you're FF are so amazing but still you dont get any
appreciation i know it must hurt you i am a writer too
and i know its dificult to actually update and you update regularly
anyways you are AWESOME StarStar muahh :*
 
EDITED The below text in an add on and my fav lines from this update  Wink
 
Uday'maa,ek shart h.
Maya'kya?
Uday'manyata aapki bdi bhu jay aapki choti bhu..
Maya jagat k kan pkdti h'khud ni bta skta..


Edited by AndreaBaid - 28 September 2012 at 11:31am

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Awesome chapter...I like Uday's dialogues in this chapter...oh thanks for not making sepration track...ab to jaldi se M-U & J-J ki band baja barat karao...

Edited by Pooja_0910 - 28 September 2012 at 11:34am

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Awesumm update pari just awesum superb.. First I was really scared to read this update cuz of ur precap but now I knw I did a gud thing reading it luved ittt... Plz update next part soon cnt w8 to see uday makeup wif manyata

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
@andy hi babe
h r u?
Firstly 9 need 2 say sry yar.
I m 2 lazy yar,bt i loved alots readrs cmnts.
Anyway,uday-manyata jb tk lde na tb tk kuch normal ni hota.
Lol.
Bs apne-2 papa ko bchane k chaker me ld pde.
Bt don't wory.
Nd i lovd u r cmnt specialy red colour lynes..

Nd my ff s nt awosum yar,sbke ff pdhti hu to lgta h ni abi or rapchik likhna h...
Bt u lyk love my ff.
Thanx alot.
Thanx 4 a such a beautiful cmnt..
Hug 4 u.
Love u...

@pooja cum soon manveer nd j-j mariage..

Pari

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