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manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 (Page 34)

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Nice update Pari.Clap Clap Clap Hillarious.ROFL
I loved first part of the  update. Loved the convo of BR-M-J-VB.Wink
I liked their new names.LOL
Swimming pool scene was also nice n Akash.ROFL Loved Akash's confession n UV-Jagat scene n dialogues, they all r too funny.ROFL
Awesome updates.Wink
Sorry last time I couldn't comment on the update, EmbarrassedJust read both parts 42 together.Both updates were Fab.Smile
Thanks for the regular updates.Tongue
Great job Pari.Thumbs Up
HUGS.Hug Hug



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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Awesome update pari
Lol sorry for such a late comment
Was busy reading all the chaps
It took me around 3 to 4 weeks
But I must say its hilarious I was ROFL
While reading all the chaps
You are so amazing and u update regularly
What more I want from you ? Nohing
Love you pari
Keep writing

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Awesum... Luved the pool part...n uday manyata part was sooo awesum

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-46

Uday vryclosed hr,she s eyeclose nd breaths up nd dwn.
Uday slowly cum hr ear'manyata i lo..???

Manyata k phone ki ring bjti h.
Both break cncentration..

Manyata push hm,nd side jake sir niche krke khadi ho jati h..

Uday'arey ha na use fir pkad k apni trf khichta h,or chain bnd krdeta,phr chod deta h.
'apna phone uthale,kamina bj bj ke iska dum ghut jayega...
Wo bolke chala jata h.
Both smilng.
Manyata'love krta h,pr bolta kyn ni h,bda ajeeb ldka h..
Gunda..

Uday'yar,ab to is mendaki ko offer maar hi de..
Ab isse dur rhna mushkil...

Manyata pick d cal'ha,tara kya hua?
Phr network ki wjh se cal cut jati h.
Manyata'haaayeee,rabba,idhr se bahr nikalo phle...

Wo nikalti h bahr nd wo sb uday,jagat,akash,vijay,jay,unanti beithe h.
Tbi manyata'ay kisi k pas phone h?
Akash'ha sbke pas h.
Kyn?tera phone dub gya kya?
Uday'kya kam h?
Manyata'mujhe tara ko phone krna h.
Jagat'ha to apne daabe se krle.
Manyata'bones shop,mere phone me srf 2rs.bl h...

Akash'waah,kya maal h tere phone.
Uday'kyn?tere phone me kitna bl. H.
Akash'500rs.bl.h,kal hi dalwaye the.

Jagat'akash dikha jra apna standard phone...
Akash jagat ko phone dikhata h...
Jagat'le manyata ab isi se yhi bat krle.
Akash'ni mera bl.
Uday'arey,hm dubaara tera bl.dalwa denge.
Yar...

Manyata calng tara.
Speaker on krke...
'hello tara bol kya hua?
Tara'yha koi khana ni kha rha h,kya kru?
Jay'sbki chod tune kha lya na..
Tara'arey ni,papag ki tbiyet khraab ho ri h lekin wo kha ni rhe.
Uday'tu chod de,apne aap teri saas bhaagi-2 aayegi..

Tara'lekin yar.
Ek min mumy kitchen me ja ri h..

Vijay'bigad gai tbiyet.
Tara'agar wo ni khayege to.
Uday'jyada nkhre krena to muh pkadiyo,or chammch se khana uthaiyo or muh me dal diyo khana.
Manyata'sharfat se na khaye to gundegurdi se hi shi.

Komal'hy bhagwan,inki tbiyet bigad gai h,kya khana bnau?

Komal lookd ki kitchen me saara khana bna h.
Wo jaldi-2 bina soche smjhe khana le jati h br k lye.

Tara'main abi phone rkhti hu.
Cal cut.

Tara'hm jeisa uday ne kha h weisa hi krugi..

Br ki saanse tej hori h.
Komal'ye lijiye kuch kha lijiye.
Br'ni,mujhe chalange kiya h.
Devendar'are unke chaker me apni tbiyet mt kharab kr.
Br'ni.
Tara'of oh kya ni ni lga rkha h,tbiyet thik krlo,phr jitna mujhe marna h mar lena pr khana to khao..

Br'ni.khana mujhe.
Tara'aise keise ni khaoge.
Wo br ka muh zbrdasti open krti h nd zbrdasti unhe khana khilati h.

Komal'ye kya paglpan h?
Tara'paglpan to aapko krna chahiye tha..lekin aap alg hi muh fula k beithi h...

Br'ni
Tara'ni ni kya?
Aap mere papa mt bno main to aapki beti jrur bnugi.

Or wo phr unhe paani pilati h nd chod deti h.
Tara'gusa mujhe se or apne bacho se ho,khane ki kya glti.
Agar aacha lga ho to kha lena or.

Tara apne papag or bhaiyo se'avi hi itne patle ni huye ho,lau khana.

Sb chup..
Wo phr sbke lye khana lati h..
Sb khana khate h.

Tara'weise ek bat to h papag(br) manyata jeise beti hona ghr me to tnsn to rhegi hi ni...

Tara chali jati h.
Tara calng manyata'manyata khana kha lya sbne.
Manyata'arey wah keise?

Uday'pagal,muh se hi khaya hoga...

Jagat'tere papa unique honge to alg bat..
Jay'kamino chup ho jao.
Tara'arey jaldi aao na.
Manyata'ha phle ye bta kya kiya tune aisa?

Tara phr sb btati h..
Uday'o teri,tune such me aisa krdiya..
Tara'ha tumne hi to kha tha..
Jagat'abe hmne to mjak kiya tha...

Tara'hawww..
Ab kya hoga?
Wo phone dar k chod deti h.

Vijay'jaldi chalo wo dar gai h,kamino bolna jrur tha.

Jagat'hm bi chalege.
Akash'mere 12rs.cut gye..

Uday'ha chal abi bharpai krta hu..

Akash phle chalajata h.
Uday'apne cel me koi bl.mt dalwana,isi k 500 khtm krna...
Jay'khin bi cal krna ho to.
Jagat'ha na.
Ab chalo...

Phr wha manyata k ghr phuchte h..
Jisko khidki se jana h wo wha se jate h or sb door se aate h.

Br,devendar,rajveer,vicky nd komal beithe h.
Jay'arey wah,abi tk apna chalagnge nibha rhe h.

Vijay'aaj weaknes ni aa ri h..
Papag kya bat h.?
Manyata'chado,hmein tara bhabhi hmein khana do...
Hm rum me h..

Wo bi rum me chale jate h...

Tara phr rum me 8 k lye khana leke aati h...

Uday'yar tara tu bi had krti h,itna khana akele bnadiya.
Tara'chal pagal h kya?
Vijay,manyata jay ne hm sbne milke bnaya tha.
Jagat'o teri jay ne baap re sambhalo kya bnaya h isne.
Tara'sbziya kaati h.
Uday'tbi soch rha hu,sbzi tedi-medi kyn cuti h.
All laugh.

Akash'vijay ne kya kiya?
Uday'ha sikh le akash,hmari bhan se kam krwaya na to bs..
Manyata'vijay rice fryed kr rhe the.
Jagat'tbi jal gai h.
Jagat'tune kya kiya manyata?

Tara'rice bnaya,paneer bnaya,dal bnai,sbzi bnai..

Uday'hmm
Tbi soch rha hu jalne ki smell khane ki kha se.
Manyata 'uth,mt khao tum dono.
Utho,

Jagat'pagal,ab to mjak bi searious smjhne lgi.
Jay'pagal,hm to dra rhe the...

Manyata'main aati hu..
Uday'ek min.main bi aata hu..
Wo jati h,br ki tblets leti h,preshan h.

Wo jeise hi turn hoti h,weise hi uday use rok leta h,wo apne dono hatho k bich me use lock krleta h..
'kya bat h ms.hwahwai,preshan kyn?
Manyata'ni to main preshan ni hu.
Uday smile'chal jhuthi,wo kya h na jb mujhe lgta h ki mujhe koi pasnd krta h koi mujhe pasnd aata h to uski khushi bi chupaye ni chupta.
Manyata'sbse bda kamina h tu.
Uday'ab jo bi kh bat kya h bta?
Manyata'papag ko dwai deni h pr keise?roj ka kam h mera ye.
Jagat cum'kya ulte sidhe shok pale h.
Itni si bat ki ki chinta..
Uday'mendaki tu chal,main aata hu...
Manyata chali jati h.

Uday'jagat chal vijay k pas.
Jagat'vijay,chal natak kr.
Vijay'natak.
Akash'arey ha drama.
Vijay'ok,arey o sambha.
Uday'ha bs,bn gya tu gabber,kamine pait me bhoot tej drd ho weisa natak kr.
Vijay'pr kyn?
Manyata'jo kh rhe h wo kro.
Vijay'aa..
Mera pait.
Uday'abe sun,pait drd k tgda natak kr,tera baap ayega to bolega beta ye dwai kha le.
Jagat'to tu ye dwaiya pkad or shart rkhiyo ki phle aap ye dwai khao,tb khauga..

All said'o plan papag ko dwai khilane ka..

Vijay natak krta h'aa,aa mera pait.
Komal br woried'bhag k aate h'vijay kya hua beta?
Vijay'maa mera pait drd ho rha h.

Br'komal jaldi rum me se pait drd ki dwai lao.
Manyata,jay,tara'haww,kya hua?
Br'dur rho,tumhare khane me hi kuch hoga.
Manyata'aacha,pr aap sb to thik Ho.
Ha ni to...

Komal'chup rho,ye le beta dwai.
Vijay'shi to kh ri manyata.
Br'ha thik h ye dwai kha...
Vijay'aa
Ni ek shart h.
Komal'kya zid h,shart.
Vijay'papa phle aap ye dwai khao.

Jay'jaldi kha lo,wrna bhai to.
Tara'papa g plz na.
Manyata'ab kya jeise khana khaya h weise khilaye,khao na bhai ki tbiyet bigad ri h.

Akash'ye budha sanki h.
Jagat-uday shout'kha le na.
Drame kr rha h.
Br'ye awaz
Vijay'maine bola..
Br jaldi se vijay k hath me se dwai leke kha leta h..
'maine kha liya le ab tu kha..

Vijay normal ho jata h.
Manyata'cngrats drama safal.
Vijay'aapko dwai khilani thi.

Gud nyt papag.
Wo sb chale jate h.

Br irritate'komal,ye tumhare hi bache h.
Komal'aacha h,jitne tej aap ho utne tej mil gye h.
Hto pre.
Mere bache ache h.
Ha ni to..


Precap-uday purpose manyata
Jagat purpose jay...
Pari

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
woww pari i loved it please cont soonClap

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Nice update PariThumbs Up
Its so cute and funny...Uday and Jagat are mazay ka naLOL
Keep it upHug
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Awesome update Pari.Clap Clap Clap
Loved M-UV Scene n Tara-Br-Komal Scene.LOL
Superb update n Hillarious  too.ROFL 
12 Rs. kat gaye Akash was damn funny.ROFL I liked Akash in this SS.ROFL Jagat-UV are hillarious man.ROFL
Thanks for the regular fab. updates.Smile
Precap was damn good, I'm so excited for the next chapter.Dancing
Great update.Thumbs Up
HUGS.Hug Hug

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
Very nice update pari... Cnt wait 4 the next part ur precap has made me sooo curious

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