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manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 (Page 3)

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Hahaha very nice and iss mein Sab ko ha nahi to wali bemari hai kya?
And I liked this punjabi style

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awesome  yaar cont soon dear :)

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hayyee pari dil khush kar diya...punjabi upd8 .hayee...o kudiyen tenu punjabi achi aati hain waah...amazing work plz upd8 soon n plz pmClap

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Pari, First chap. was fantastic.Thumbs Up
Thanks for the update & PM.Smile

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Awww awesome updat.omg Pushpa hahaha loved it

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Awesome story Pari. Loving it! Yaar itne ideas kahan se laati ho??? 

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D story is worth saying A-W-W-W...awww..loved it:)cont ASAP..

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Manveer ss...
Two HEART:that BEAT as One...:-)



Part-2nd

In nxt mrng.
Uday soya hua h.
Jagat unanti aate h
'veer g utho,aaj aapko ldki dekhne jaana h'
Uday cusion ko tightly hug krta h'jaa na idhr se,isliye ni uth rha hu,.
Tbi gr oye sb uth gye,taiyar ho jao jaldi se,uday uth jaa..
Uday'yar ye kaun si ghadi me is ghr me paida hua main'
Jagat'jis ghadi me mumy papa ki shadi hui thi'
All laughng..

Manyata k ghr unki neighbour aati h mrs.permindr.
'o komal bhn meri gal sunno,meri kudi nu ldke wale dekhne aa rhe h..manyata jay ko bhej do meri hlp kr degi'
Manyata'oye hoye,simaran ko dekhne ldke wale aa rhe h,hm aajayenge aunty,tussi chinta na kro...
Mrs.p:o beta jaldi aja,ldke wale ane wale h.
K:g ye aajayegi..

Idhr sb gr k ghr se sb niklte h,uday sad h.
Gr'oye uday sakal thik kr apni,hske chal ldki dekhne ja rha h..'
J:tbi to dukhi h..
Gr:oye maine jo kha wo kr,jyada jwan mt ldao...
Uday ne phr apne papa ko kha idhr dekho meri trf to gr uski trf dekhta h.'kya h?
To uday fake hsi hsta h or bolta h'ab thik h,aise hi daat dikhata rhu'
To gr use bdi aankhe krke dekhta h,
Maya'hy babag shubh kam k liye ja rhe ho kbi to thand rkha kro'..
Wo phr sb chup chap chale jate h sb..

Manyata jati h apne neighbour k ghr'oye simran kha h tu?oye hoye tu to bdi shoni lg ri si,chl maine to apni shadi tudwa di,teri to kra k rhugi..lekin chahra udas kyn h.?
Simarn:oye manyata,menu ye shadi ni krni..
M:kyn?
S:main kisi or se pyar krti hu,or aaj rat ko hm bhaag rhe h...
M:o teri..
S:kamini,dhire bol.
M:bhaag ri h,dimag to Thik h.
Simran rone lgti h'main uske bina ni rh skti hu,kuch krna manyata..
M:arey tu ro mt ldke ko sb bta diyo,agr smjhdar hoga to smjh jayega,ni to main smjhdar bna dungi..ha ni to.
'aacha ruk main tere liya tika leke aati hu apna'sir pe lga liyo.
Mrs.permindr:oye manyata kha ja ri h.
Manyata piche mudke khti h
'bs aunty simran k tika lane ja ri hu,aati hu..

Or aage se ldke wale aajate h,aage uday hi hota h,lekin wo jagat se piche muh krke bat krta h.
Or manyata piche mudke aunty ko bolti h aa ri hu

Ekdum se dono ek 7th face aage krte h or unki solid takker hoti h..
Both in little eyecntct.
Manyata k sir pe chot lgti h to wo guse me'fod do mera sir.
To uday bi bolta h'jagat pather la,inki muraad puri krdu..
Unanti,jagat or uday hste h.
Manyata'aankhe h ya button dekh k ni chl skte the.'
Uday'button h tumhari aankhe.
M:ye mera dialouge h,apna dialouge bolo..
Uday phr chup hoke sochne lgta h kya bolu phr soch k bolta h'jb aage ki trf chalte h na to face aage hi rkhna chahiye'
Manyata'aacha kyn jb piche chalte h to kya aapka face piche ho jata h'
To uday phr us candy eyes se dekhta h.
Phr manyata ki bat pe jagat unanti hste h..
U:glti tumhari
M:ungli{finger}niche,or glti agr meri h to tumhari bi h.
J:tumhein pta h hm kaun h.
M:dekh tere jeisa fatichar is ghr ka rishtedar hoga...ja beith kha pi or yha se ja.or ha tum dialouge jra soch k bola kro
U:bhut tej ho tum
M:ha to saara tej bnne ka theka tumne liya h...ullu.ha ni to.wo chali jati h.
Un:veer g usne bi ha ni to bola.
U:mera sunke bola hoga...

Simran k papa bolte h'phle ldke ldki bat krle,phr kuch bat age bdhate h.
Gr:g.
To simran bar-2 manyata ko dekhti h ki wo kb ayegi.
Uday-simran chat pe jate h.
Or phr wha se unanti'main bi bhabhi se milungi,aati hu.
J:meri bi to bnegi,main bi aata hu.
To chat pe jagat uday nd unanti h.
Or simran akeli.
Simran ki to halt khraab ho ri h'ye manyata kha h?
J:g aapne kuch kha?
S:ni g..kuch bolo.
U:kuch.
S:g.
U:aap hi ne to kuch bolo.bol diya kuch.

Niche manyata aati h,aunty simran.
Mrs.p:shh.chup hoja ldke wale h,wo chat pe h..
Manyata phr chat pe jati h bhaag k'simran tu thik to h?
Sb dekhte h.
Manyata uday ko khti h'aap kya kr rhe ho idhr.
Uday naugtynes'aapse milne aaye h..
Manyata'ldka kaun h?
Uday or jagat'hm h na ldke.
M:oh,kamal h aplog ldke ho.lgta ni h.
S:oye chup hoja ye h ldka.
M:kya?o teri maine to kuch jyada hi..tu apni problem to bta ise..
Simran apni problem unhe bta deti h...
Uday to khush'ha thik h,mna krdo shadi ni krni mujhe bi.'
M:ye mna krde,ye na ni khegi,aap na bolege.
U:oye,soniye..main to na ni boluga,mujhe apne papa g se mar ni khani..
M:ha to kya ise shaq h mar khane ka.
Un:simran tum saare kam glt kro mere papag ko glt kam krne wale log bilkul ni pasnd,wo phr apne aap reject krdenge..
S:o g mere se koi kam glt ni hota,main glti krti hu to wo shi ho jata h..
Uday manyata ko dekhta h'ye aapki gundi dost kb kam ayegi..
Manyata'pre hat,gunda hoga tu,tu chinta mt kr tere se gltiya main kraungi.
Uday'chalo mujhe kuch ni krna pdega,shadi to ab to pkka tuit jayegi'
M:ha tuit jayegi.
Dono 7t
h bolte h
'ha ni to'
Manyata'ye kb se bolte ho tum.
Uday,mtlb jb se paida hua hu tb se..bolta hu
M:ary wah jb tum paida huye the tb se tum bolne lge the..
Kmaal h.
Uday manyata k kareeb jata h'ha bolne lga tha,tumse jwan ldani thi na isliye..ha ni to.chalo
Or ha shadi tuit jani chahiye simran g...
Weise aapka kya nam h?
M:chl simran ulte sidhe logo ko main apna nam ni btati.ha ni to..hat.

Uday smile krta h
Wo 3 no jake beith jate h shanti se..
Manyata udhr khadi hil rhi h,or simran paani leke aati h aram se,tb simran paani leke aati h weise hi manyata janbujh k 'aunty wo simran,or simran se takker kha jati h,or uske 7th se saara paani gir jata,or paani k glass simran k papa pe girte h.
'oye simran puter itna kya ghabraa ri h'..main kpde bdal k aata hu...
Maya:arey koi ni,simran beta aaram se..
S:g.main juice leke aati hu..
M:ha tu ja main ye kaanch saaf krdungi.
To jo glass gire h wo manyata utha ri h,ek tukda uday k pairo k pas h,to wo manyata uthati h'pair htao apna ye kaanch uthana h.
Uday msti se khta h'main ni htauga!
M:thik h mt htao,to wo ek kanch apne hath pe se leti h or uday k pairo pe chubha deti h.
Uday'aa,tum
Gr:uday kya hua?
U:ku kuch ni papag...
Manyata apni eyes roling krti h,jb sharart ni krni aati na to ni krni chahiye.ha ni tn.
Wo chali jati h.
Uday'jagat jate jate is mirchi ko thanda krna pdega'
J:ha ni to...

To manyata jay ko cal krti h'jay sun ghr k bahr khadi hoke dekhti rh,jeise hi simran juice leke aaye,jeise hmesha hwa ki trh ghr me aati h weise hi aajaiyo,or juice gira diya. Cal cut..
To simran juice leke aati h,or manyata kitchen k pas khadi hoke dekhti h...

Tbi achanak jay bina idhr udhr dekhe'arey simran teri shadi ho ri h,or wo uske bck pe hit krti h,juice to girta h wo bi girti h.
Manyata'o teri,simran bi gir gai,ye jay ko hwa k jeise kho to tufaan bn jati h'
Jay'o,simran btana chahiye tha na,chl uth main thik kr deti hu...
Mrs.permindr:o simran tu beith main sb krdungi,tu dar gai h.
Gr:ni yhi kregi sb,jb tk kregi ni tb tk sikhegi keise..lekin abki baari aaram se aana..
Simran kitchen me jati h'ab kya lejau?
Manyata guse me kuch bi leja,ha ni to ja hi ni rhe h.

To manyata ne vijay ko ye kh rkha tha ki jay k bad teri baari h,simran jo bi leke jaaye jhatke se aa jaiyo or takkra jaiyo..bck steps se nter kriyo ghr me.

To simran tea leke jati h iritate hoke..
M:o teri wo chai legai,haye ram vijay bhai khin dhka na dede,chai grm hoti h jay kuch kr...

Wo tea leke jati h..
Tbi vijay uper dekhta or bck step leta aata h'or simran bhai,suna h teri shadi wadi ho ri h wo jeisi aage hota tble se touch hota h phr simran pe girta h nd tea bi gir jati h.
Tea kisi pe girti ni h,lekin ek cup tea giriraj k pairo pe girti h.wo gusse chilane lgte h'ye ho kya rha h,aapki ldki ko to kuch krna hi ni aata...
Manyata aati h'vijay bhai tea tha ye.
V:tumhi ne to kha...
Jay:chup rho...

Or wo 3no itni innocently beithe h,or hs rhe h.,
Gr'khilaya pilaya kuch ni or jb se girai ja ri ho'hm rishte krne aaye h,na ki ye dekhne ki apne ghr ka kitna saamn tod diya..
Jagat dhire se uday k kan me bolth'chai giri h,pair jal rha h isliye itna or gusa ho rhe h...
Uday tightly hsta h,udhr jitne bi youngstr the sb khush the ki jo hm chahte the wo ho gya..
Gr:apni kudi nu kuch sikhao,chl uday..glti krdi yha aake...

To sb jane lgte h.
Manyata'chl simran main bi chlti hu.
Tbi unanti'simran ek bat btao,ghr se bhaagogi to tumhare ghr ki izzat'
S:o g,mere pariwar ko meri khushi ki parwaah ni to main kyn?mere pyar ne meri liye jan dene ki koshish ki thi.hm rat ko isliye bhaag rhe h.
U:ha thik se pckng krdena iski.wo manyata ko khta h.
Manyata muh bnake jane lgti h tbi uday use thoda pair se push krta h.
Manyata ekdum girne wali hoti h'bt wo pick up krleta h apne arm me use
'uday'jb chalna ni aata ho na to chalna sikh lena chahiye...
Manyata'mtjhe mt sikha kya krna h,chod mujhe.
Uday'chod du pkka..
M:ha ..
Wo use chod deta h wo niche gir jati h..
Manyata irritate hoke...
Or uday hs ke jane lgta h.
To manyata jaldi uthati h or tej tej chalti h uday ko dhakka deti h'jyada hero mt bna kr smjha ha ni to.'

Un:chado na veer g na aap har manne wale ho or aapse bi tej h..chalo ghr...

Precap:brijraj-giriraj fight...

Pari


Edited by maneet.. - 28 May 2013 at 7:06am

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