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manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 (Page 28)

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Awesome wotk pari...
I just read 1st part And 2nd...
A req to u pls pm me whn u will update and checter sk me which update in which page pls notice tht...
Becoz donne may lAzy lagta hay...LOL 

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Oye Pari meri jaan,meri kamini how r u?awesome update yaar.Specially the last one.I mean bechara haddi ka dukkan.Un charo ki bich phaas gaya:pN yaar the last scene waz really hillarious.Bechara Vj haha:pCont soon meri kamini.N agar tune mujhe jottey,chappals marey na toh toh toh kya main bhi tuje maroongi hahaha(evil smirk).

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
awesome updateClap wonderful

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
hey pari... omg im really sorry first i was reading this ss but i dont know how i just forogt about it im really really sorry dear i didnt mean to do that however i did have the character sketch in my mind but was not able to find the link of ur ss but somehow im glad i finally got the link please update next part soon and once again im really sorry 

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 6:44pm | IP Logged
Hi Pari
luv'd the update
tum har tharah ki luv stories ache si likhti ho
Ek tharaf serious wala jo humme rulathe hai toh dusri tharaf ye romantic comedy jo humein hasaathe hai
so hats off to u dearClapClapClap
Aur pyaar ke har ki rang ko ache se express karti ho so i'm giving u the title of
Dr. LOVEWink
I humbly request u to accept this title.
Yunhi hamare Manveer ko Pyar ke different rang mein aage bhi dikhate rehna pls...




Edited by afreshbegin - 27 August 2012 at 6:44pm

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
@preya its ok dear.
9 need 2 say sorry.
Just chil.
@afreshbegin haayee finaly dr.love ka tag mil gya..
Thanku so much darlng.

Mujhse link mt maanga kro,i m using cel yar.
Isliye link share ni kr pati.
Nd thanku so al.
I m hapy u lyk mah stry.

Pari

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-37
Jagat'vijay tubi kamal krta h,ldki
bchpan se tere sath h,or tujhe
pta ni chla ki wo tujhse love sove
krti h.
Vijay'ni yar
Uday'apne aap ko ldka smjhe tb
to feelings bahar aye.
Akash'yar tara kitni smjhdar h
na,meri wali to smjhti hi ni kuch.
Uday'teri wali bi teri jeisi fatichar
hogi.
Akash'oye aisa mt bol,jb pta
chlega na kaun h bolti bnd ho
jayegi.
Uday-jagat'aisi kaun si item bomb
mili h tujhe..
Akash'btadunga bad me.
Manyata'arey vijay kuch soch na
ab kya?
Vijay'colage me fresher party h
na or kisi ko bi le ja skte h,tara ko
main le jaunga.
Jay'tara ko main lejaunga.
Manyata'ha jay vijay ne yhi bola.
Jay'arey ise phle tara ko rokna
pdega..
Wo kal chali jayegi.
Vijay'arey ha.
Pr keise?
Jagat'bta lalmirchi tu to budhi ki
dukaan h.
Manyata'arey haddi,phle tu bta
apna idea.bta
Jagat'sidiyo se gira do.
Vijay'itne ptle h ki 10bar girge phr
bi haddiya ni tuitegi...
Uday'vijay station tk tara or uske
baap ko leja wha baap ko chda
diyo,tara ko phr yha leaaiyo.
Sb hsne lgte h.
Jay'tara ko hi kidnap krlo.
Jagat-uday'ay tu rhne de,pta chla
apni jan bi khtre me pdh gai.
Akash'sbne kha wo ptle h,unhe
sidhi k thru window pe chadhao,or
jb aadhe stairs pe ho tb sidhi gira
do.
Thodi bhoot to haddi tuitegi...
Again all laugh
Unanti'vijay tara se hi puchlo kya
krna chahiye.
Vijay'main,ni ek slap ne aacha
khas dheela kr diya dusre me to
main gya..
Uday'tara ko hm rok lenge uski
chinta mt kro,bs tara k lye
westurn taiyar rkhna.
Manyata sad.
Uday'manyata tere bad pe Kuch h.
Manyata happy'kya?
Uday'jyada khush mt ho main ni
hu,pasnd aaye to rkhliyo wrna
faik diyo...
Jagat'soch smjh k faikiyo
mehnga h.
Jagat'chal dimag chalate h keise
rukega tara ka baap..
Ha ni to.
Tara chat pe ro ri h.
Vijay or sb sidhiyo me khade h.
Jay'arey ja na,kuch ni hoga.
Unanti'vijay wo ro ri h jao na.
Vijay'yar dar lg rha h khin phr mar
diya to.
Uday'kha liyo,weise bi jo pyar krta
h uske hatho mar khane ka mja hi
kuch or hota h.
Vijay'aacha,tujhe keise pta?
Uday'kamine maine kha rkha h..
Manyata look uday,nd uday
blushng eyes se dekh k use avoid
krta h.
Jagat'kamine tara ko to koi mil
jayega,apni soch..
Tujhpe to koi lyn bi ni marti...
Manyata'ryt.
Bhai jao na.
Vijay'aacha thik h,weise jagat lyn
to tere pe bi koi ni marti.
Jagat'bhai pe to marti h,main bi
njoy krleta hu.
Uday'ha mujhe to kis dene k lye
tarsti h.
Manyata'kis ni tera bs chale to
unke 7th bad pe chla jaye.
Uday'haaye,tu kyn jealous ho ri
h,chl tere bad pe.
Manyata,raaba,gadha khin ka.
Wo uday ko lightly hit krti h,phr
wo bi return hit krta h.
Jay'ye kya kr rhe ho dono.
Manyata'hitng hitng khel rhe h.
Jagat'thanku,chal jay hm bi
khelte h.
Jay'jagat tu chup rh,vijay ja na..
Vijay'main bi yhi kheluga,tara k
7th..
Uday'ha ja pta chal hitng ki jgh
slapng khelne lg gai..
Manyata'oye dra mt.
Ja vijay kuch ni hoga...
Vijay himmat krke jata h...
Sb dekhte h stairs me se...
Vijay dhire se jata h
'tara.
Tara bck turn hoti h
'kya h?
Kya krne aaye ho?
Vijay'ek 7th do swal..
Tara use guse me dekhti h,
Vijay'aacha,main btata hu.
Wo Tum chat pe thi isliye aaya hu.
Wo tumne mujhe phle kyn ni
btaya ki tum mujhse pyar krti
ho..?
Tara'kyn btati?
Tumhein khud ehsas ni hua kya?
Vijay'kbi us trh se dekha ni.
Tara'ab aadhi adhure kapdo me
tere samne aaungi tb us njr se
dekhega mujhe.
Uday dhire se'ye tara jitni skal se
sharif lgti h utni hi shaitan h.
Manyata'face se to tere bi
masumiyat jhalkti h,lekin h ek nu.
K
Jay'kamina.
Manyata'ha ni to.
Jagat'waah,tumbi to yhi ho.
Vijay'ab.
Tara'ab kya?pyar kisi or se shadi
kisi or se.
Vijay inocently'bache kisi or se.
Tara'tu such me kamina h.
Vijay'ye 3 pati tujhe mtlb tu 3bar
shadi kregi..
Tara shockd'kyn main 3 bar shadi
kyn krugi.
Vijay'ekpyar se,dusre tere papa ki
pasnd se,3rd tere bache k lye.
Tara preshan'hy waaheguru,ha
main kitta 3 shadi.bs
Khush ab ja.
Vijay sitng d knee'or agar ye
3quality kisi ek me ho to kya
khyal h g?
Tara suddn'aisa ka...
Vijay tu beitha kyn h?
Vijay'o yar itni aachi gf ni khona
chahta,tu meri chamakchalo
bnegi..?
Tara'menu asli jwab sunna h.
Vijay'i love u 2 g.
Tara happily use hug krleti h.
'tu jeisa bi h,mujhe bchpan se hi
bhoot pasnd h'ha ni to.
Wo dono hug krke khade h.
Sb claping krte huye aate h..
Jagat'oye hoye,mil gye do dil.
Uday'rangeela-rangeeli mil gye...
Manyata'ab tara ni bulayege.
Jay'ab to bhabhi shabhi
bulayenge..
Akash'jay shabhi ni bhabhi jyada
beter h.
Unanti'wow,wht cute couple.
Akash'yar meri wali bilkul vijay
jeisi h,nasmjh..
H.
Uday'arey bn jayegi,bs tu deir mt
kriyo...
Bol diyo jaldi.
Akash'koshish kruga.
Jagat'phr to ho gya.
Rhne de...
Vijay'chalo niche jaldi wrna koi
dekh lega yar.
Phr sb rum me jate h,abi jaane
wale hote h to unke rum me
komal khadi h,
'arey manyata jay tara vijay kha
ho sb. Or drwaaze pe uday jagat
khade h.
Manyata hste huye aati h 'ander
chal
Tbi komal bckturn hone wali hoti
h,tbi manyata chilai h'aa..
Komal bckturn hoti h'hi raba kya
hua?
Or uday jgat akash unanti chup
jate h.
Jay'maa,tum ander ho,main bahr
dhundh ri thi.
Jagat use preshan h'lekin bahar
keise milegi ye to ander h..
Manyata'hm bahar dundh rhe
the,kuch kam tha kya?maa.
Uday'ja tara k baap k lye pkwaan
bna,wo khayega.
Wo dono hste h.
Manyata unhe aankhe dikhati h.
Komal'ha chal tara k papag k lye
pkwaan bnane h.
Phr sb hste h.
Komal'yha kaun-2 hs rha h.
Manyata'main or jay hi to h.
K:ni koi or bi h.
Vijay'ha to main or tara h
na,bhagwan ne hmein bi hsne ki
shakti di h.
Komal:tara pckng krlena,kal
savre-2 jana h.
Tara'g aunty..
Komal'manyata jay kitchen me
aajana...
Manyata'g maa.
Wo chali jati h.
Sb phr ander jate h
Manyata'menu tnsn ho ri h,kya
kru?
Uday'ek kam kr bahar apne papag
ko khin bg krde.
Jay'kyn?
Jagat'jo kha h wo kr..
Manyata'ok.
Chal jay tara.
Jay tara tum kitchen me jao.
Vijay tu chat pe jake ro.
Vijay'kyn?
Uday'ja ro,ye tere baap ko uper
bhejegi.
Jagat'wo tere me bg hojayege.
Akash'jitna chup kraye chup mt
hoiyo.
Manyata'arey vijay k rone se
papag dukhi ho jate h.
Jaa na.
Wo chala jata h...
Uday'akash unanti ko leke ghr
leke ja..
Wo bi chale jate h..
Manyata'papag wo vijye chat pe
jake ro rha h.
Br'kyn?
Manyata'kh rha h Aapne kuch kha
h.
Br'maine kya kha h?
Manyata'menu ki pta jao puch lo.
Br'ye khota bi pta ni ldkiyo ki trh
rone lgta h.
Devendr tu beith,main aata hu.
Devendr'o g thik h.
Aram se mnaiyo.
Br wo chale jate h,
Wo jeise jate h weise uday jagat
aate h.
Aaps me bat krte huye.
Uday'arey bda bura hua.
Jagat'un uncle ki to halat hi
khraab thi. Manyata'arey kya
hua?
Uday'o g railway station pe ek
baap beti punjab ja rhe the to .
Devendar'to kya hua g?
Jagat'to pucho mt kuch gunde
aaye or ldki k baap ko pkad k
pitne lge..
Manyata'haayee rabba.
Uday janbujh k tej bolta h'or pta h
hmein lga ki wo gunde pit jayenge
uncle se qki uncle bde mote tagde
the,pr ulta whi pit gye.
Devendr'o lekin wo pit kyn rhe
the?
Jagat'jwan beti thi,uthake legye.
Devendr soch me
Manyata'o teri uncle g kal to
aapke 7th tara bi jayegi.
Wo dar jate h.
'arey ha kal to menu bi jana h.
Uday'soch lijiye uncle,wo uncle bi
aapki trh the,or ldki to ldki hoti h.
Manyata'dono pke kamine h.
Devendar dra hua khada hota h'o
lekin aap log kaun ho?
Uday'arey sry,hm to glt ghr me
khade h,
Jagat'sry g,hm to apne uncle ko
rokne ja rhe the..
Hm chalte h
Uday'or ha ye gunde hmesha
station pe rhte h..,
Bye g.
Wo chale jate h.
Manyata'ye duniya bdi khraab h.
Ha ni to.
Wo bolkd chali jati h.
Devendr preshan...
Manyata apne rum me,uski bad
pe uday ka gft rkha h,wo uthati h,
Uday kidki pr'dekhlo pasnd ayega..
Manyata smile nd uday pases hr
smile with wink.
Bye.
Continueos
Pari

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 12:02am | IP Logged
gr8 work pari..Clap..pls continue soon...Smile

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