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Posted: 11 years ago
pari i have no words for how i appreciate u but i must say east or west u r the best my scene of this stiry is Manyata uday remembring all moment startng se leke end tk k yad krte h...
Manyata'pta ni mere hath keise uth gye..
Shayed,glti thodi to h meri..

Uday'puri bat ni suni,bina kuch sune,use kuch bi bol diya.
Manyata'duniya bhar ki baatien sunati rhti hu,or jb tym aata h tb.

Uday'bkwas krta rhta hu bkwas sunta rhta hu,lekin uski bat ni sun skta tha.
Manyata wipes tears'koi bat ni,dost bnane me main weise bi aachi hu,phr se bna lungi..
ha ni to
Uday smile'ldte-2 kb dost bne pta ni chla,ldte-2 kb dur huye wo bi pta ni chla,ldte-2 hm phr dost bnjayenge..
pkka..
ha ni to.
Dono apne apne ghr pe.
Manyata'ek bar uday tune hi kha

Uday'infct ek bar ni
2 bar kha tha..

Both asking apne apne ghr pe..
'ki bhagwan g ko hmari solid chemistry bhoot pasnd h,isliye hmesha wo mila dete h,or hm 3rd tym bi aachanak hi mile h
THANKU GOD G..

Manyata'phr se taiyar rh gadhe meri bak bak sunne k liye..
Ha ni to.
Uday'meri naugtynes baatein sunne or shne k lye taiyar rh lalmirchi..
'ha ni to.

Both smilng.
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-29

In nxt mrng
Manyata sbse phle ready hoke beithi h,
Wo breafast kr ri h,
Br'itni jaldi breakfast aur wo bi manyata tu,kya bat h?
Manyata'maa,papag ko bi breakfast do mere uper kyn njr lga rhe ho.
Komal'of oh ye subha hoti ni ki indono ki baatein suru ho jati h.

Jay vijay bi aate h..
Br'oye manyata puter aaj clge me gundagurdi dikhane ki jrurt ni h,kal phle hi din chot lg gai.
Manyata'kya h papag,aapna aisi cheeze mna mt kiya kro jo posible na ho.
Br'isme imposible kya h bhai?
Jay'aap ko to ldna aata ni,hmko ldna aata h to ldne ni dete.

Br vijay ko dekhte h.
Vijay'kya h?menu ki dekh rh si.
Br'q meri aankhe h main to dekhuga.
Vijay'aise mt dekha kro,aise dekhte ho to lgta h,shadi krane ki soch rhe ho.
Manyata jay hsti h.

Br hapy'ha shadi krne ki soch rha c main..
Manyata-jay'hawww..maa aapki shautan aane wali h..
Komal'hbye rabba,mere bache mere hi dushman h.menhus baatein mt kiya kro.
Vijay'hmeine kya kiya?apke pujniye pati kh rhe h ki shadi krne ki soch rhe h..
Br'oye khote main teri shadi ki soch rha hu.
Komal'mt socho,wrna apke sochne ki chakker me hmara tlak ho jayega.
Br'arey..
Sb hsne lgte h.
Manyata aww.meri maa,ab inhe milegi kaun,aap jeisi khubsurat to milne se ri...

Vijay'ha maa ye bat to h.
Jay'aapko jrur ko mil skta,bt papa k lye 9 chance...
3 no bolte h ha ni to. Bye sham ko milte h..

Wo chale jate h.,

uday home

Uday jagat dhire-2 bolte h
Uday'aise hi chal,dekh abi bolega.
Jagat'ha wo to mujhe bi malum h...
Uday'uday kb tk aaoge...

Jagat'phr bolenge clge me koi jhagda ho to ldne ki jrurt ni h.
Uday'phr bolege bahar ka kuch mt khana.
Jagat'phr bolege ki uday

Phr gr
'clge se kb tk aaoge?

Dono phr bhoot tej hste h.
Maya'isme hsne ki kya bat h..?
Uday'ni ni kuch ni,wo hm sham tkaa jayenge?
Gr'clge me khin jhagda ho to
Ds'of oh ek hi dialouge puchta rhta h yad ho jate h sb ko..
Chup krke nashta kr..
Uday'ha ni to.
Jagat'mja aata h jb ds shout hoti h papa pe to.
Uday'ha ni to
Gr'maa inke samne mt daata kro mujhe.
Uday khada hota h
'ha ds daatna to dekh liya,ab dekhna h aap marti keise ho?
Jagat'o ha ds,apne bete ko maar na.
Ds'pr keise?
Uday'main sham ko nya danda kharid lauga.
Gr'oye khote,niklo jao yha se,khbrdar jo danda leke aaya.
Ds'ha ni to.
Sb hste h.
Or uday-jagat unanti clage chale jate h..

Akash phuchta h delhi,usi clge me...

Or tara bi clge adres leke whi phuchti h..

Tara'pta ni manyata h kha,ruk cal krti hu.
Wo cal krne lgti h.
Tbi uday jgat unanti aate h...

Jagat'oye bhai ye tara h na.
Unanti'arey ha,main aati hu milke.
Uday'hm bi milege.

Wo jeise hi jane lgte h tbi akash
'ary uday,yar main
Wo 3no ruk jate h
Uday'arey akash fatichar tu yha kya krne aya h?
Akash phr btata h.
Jagat'tu yhi pdhega?
Akash'ha
Uday'oye hoye apni fuljhadi ka picha krte-2 aya h.
Akash blushg
Jagat-uday dono'rhne de blushng krte huye bi bhayanak lgta h..
Sb hste h.
Unanti'iske chaker me tara,kha gai?

Manyata nter in clge.
Tara bhoot tej chilati h'manyata..

Saara clge use dekhne lgta h.
Uday sbko na dekh k manyata ko dekhta h..

Manyata smile kr ri h.
Tara jake sb se milti h..
Hug krti h..

Manyata'tara chal clas me beithte h.
Tara'main studnt thodi hu.
Manyata'arey chalna aaj k liye bn ja..
Tara'agr pkdi gai to.
Jay'to di ko janti ho na.
Tara'to phr chal..

Uday'oye jagat chal lal mirchi se phle clas me chalna h..
Akash'manyata bi h main bi miluga.
Unanti'ja mil le weise hi bhadki h tere ko dekh k or bhadk jayegi..
Akash'ni main bad me mil lunga.
Uday'saala darpok.
Jagat'chal bhai.bad me milte h.
Wo dono chale jate h.

In rum sb msti kr rhey h
Uday jagat aate h clas me
All haye
Hmara hero aagya.
Jagat'thanku yar.
Tanvi'jagat tu ni uday ko kh rhe h.
Uday'agar mujhe khoge to wo jagat k liye hoga.
Simriti'ok to kal se hm jagat ko khege.
Jagat'yes,thanku bhai.

Uday door ki trf dekh rha h kb wo ayegi.
Jagat'ldkiya bdi dhire chalti h..
Uday'mehndi lga rkhi ho jeise.
Jagat'bhai aaj sry bol hi denge.
Uday'chl na,avi hi,glti kya ki h,aaj tk bola h jo ab boluga.
Jagat'ha ye bat bi h.

Jay'di aaj sry bolke khel khtm krte h.
Manyata'oye phle bi hmare bich jhagde huye baatein ho jati thi na phr ho jayegi.

Vijay'tara al d bst.main jata hu apni clas me.

Phle tara ko clas me nter krate h to ek ldka aap kal to ni ni thi.
Tara'pr aaj to hu.

Uday'tara idhr aaja.
Tara'haaye tum dono bi ho,wow.

Manyata'chlna jaldi madam aa gai.
Saare apni sits pe jaldi-2 beithne lgte h.
Jeise hi jay beithti h weise hi jagat use side krke uske 7th beith jata h..
Jay ko gusa aata h.
Tara khin or beith gai h.
Or manyata jb tk apni sit dhundhti h tb tk mam
Aa jati h.
Sb beithe
manyata khadi h.
Mam:wht happend manyata beith kyn ni ri ho?
Manyata'mam sit ni h.
Mam'uday k pas beith jao sit khali h.

Manyata uday ko dekhti h or uday manyata ko.
Tara'beith jana,utne me to aa jayegi.
Phr sb hste h.
Manyata chup kr.
Uday hsta hua side ho jata h,manyata smile krti hui beith jati h..
Jagat thout' kitne dino bad hsa h mera bhai..
Jay thout'hy bhagwan dosti kra dena phr re.plz
Tara thout'bhagwan g bchalena..

Mam'hy u yelow suit tum nai ho.
Tara sun ni ri h.
Uday'mam grey col.h ye.
Mam'o sry grey suit tum nai ho.
Tara again nt listen.
Manyata'mam tara nam h iska.
Tara jaldi se'ye yes mam.
Mam'r u new?
Uday' mam kal aapne dekha tha isko?
mam ' ni to
Uday'ha to jrur new h mam...

Mam'ya ryt..
Tara'mam beith jau?
Mam'nam kya h tumhara?
Uday'star
All studnt laughng
Manyata'mam tara.
Uday'uh,no she s layer mam
Nt mam tara nly name h tara...
Again al laughng...
Manyata tightly bolti h'jyada bol rha h..
gadha.

Jagat jay ko janbujh k bol rha h'udhr hona girayegi kya mujhe..
Jay'chup chap jeise beitha h beitha rh.

Uday manyata ki chuni dekhta h,phr manyata bi dekhti h ki ye kya dekh rha h.
Manyata'kya h kya dekh rha h?
Uday naugty'bs kuch dekh rha hu.
Phr manyata apna suit sb check krti h.
Uday cntinuos dekh rha h,'oye hoye kya lg rha h?

Manyata'kya?
Uday'tera suit fhata h...
Manyata achanak shouted khadi hoti h'kya?
Ni,kha se?
Mam'manyata kya hua?
Uday jagat hste h..
Jagat'ab to bs ho chuka h.
Manyata made a childish face'mam main bahar jau?
Uday'ni mam mt jane dena bhaag jayegi..
Uday'dhire se 'beith ja wrna dhire-2 jyada fhat rha h..
Manyata ne side se suit pkad rkha h.
,tara tu idhr aa,mujhe udhr jana h.
Uday dar jata h
'ab aage bhaag jayegi ye.
'ni ni tu beith ja wrna fta to ni h fhat jayega ab...

Manyata'gadha jhuthe.
Mam'manyata whi beith jao.
Uday'ha ni to.

Wo beith jati h...

Manyata thout'keise bat kru isse?wo apne zulfe ki lhet k 7th soch ri h.

Uday notice hr or muskurata h...
Uday thout'haayee addaye jitna dur hou utna pas krti h...
Teri addaye.
Zulfe chod,kuch bol to shi...

Manyata thout'gadha,bnder kuch bolega ni..bol na..

Continuos
Pari
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gr8 update pari :)
akash ko manyata se too pyar nahi hua na???
plz cont soon :) 
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Posted: 11 years ago
flawless update pari manveer nok jhok was bst😊
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-30

Mam'chalo btao chemistry h kya?
Uday jagat laughng..

Mam'why u r laugh?

Manyata to soch me dubi h ki wo keise uday se bat kre...

Mam'manyata tum kyn muskura ri ho?

Manyata break cncentration..
'mam koi naraj h to usse keise bat krni chahiye?
Mam'ye chemistry ki clas h ruthne mnane ki ni.
Manyata'of oh.
To mt btao na mam,aap apna swal pucho.
Jagat'mam ask'wht s chemistry?
Manyata also laughng.
Mam angry'wht d hell?wht happend?

Jagat'mam main to isliye hsa aap chemistry ki mam ho or aapko pta ni..

Ye dono kyn hse pta ni.
Uday'mam main to isliye hsa,qki u chemistry teacher nd u don't 9 wht s chemistry?
Shame..
Manyata'main bi isliye hsi mam.

Uday'mam glt bat h maine jagat ne alg alg reason btaye h ye cheting kr ri h.

Tara'ya manyata uday s ryt.

Manyata'chup ho,mam chemistry means c h e m i s t r y.
Ye hota h mam.
Main isliye hsi...

All studnt laughng.

Mam soch me dubi h..
Uday'mam pdhao na,chemistry.
Mam'oh yes.

Mam pdhana start krti h..

Uday took manyata
Manyata took mam

Tara piche mudke
'uday dadi kha h?
Uday'tere ghr pe
Tara lightly shout'kya?

Uday'kyn?kya kam h?
Tara'arey unse mile kafi tym ho gya milna h.
Uday'thik h miladunga.
Abi aage muh kr wrna,phr puchegi wht s chemistry?

Uday again took manyata
Manyata took front.
Uday thout'luk at me manyata..
Manyata use ni dekhti.
Wo ek pagalpan ki trh dekh rha h use..
Again thout'mujhe dekh agar bat krna chahti h to jrur dekhgi dekh..

Manyata suddn use dekhti h.
She thout'dekhne k liye Kh rhe the kya?ab kuch bol de.
Both r eyecntct..

Kuch deir bad.
Tanya'kal se main uday k 7th bethugi.
Simriti'kyn?mujhe apni kis complete krni h,main bathugi..

Uday manyata break eyecntct..

Jagat'mere 7th koi ni bethga kya?
Jay'mt bethna iske 7th wrna kb kya kr de kuch pta ni hota gadha..
Uday'oye ye mera nam h,ullu h wo.
Jagat'corect.
Jay'manyata main bahar ja ri hu.

Jagat'bhai unanti nd akash watng chl jaldi wrna akash pta ni kha jayega.
Saare studnt jane lgte h..
Manyata covring buk,suddn tara'manyata jaldi chal na chod ye sb mujhe bi akash se milna h unanti se bi chlna.
Manyata'arey meri buks.
Tara use pkad k le jati h,uski buks whi rh jati h..

Tara'unanti keisi h tu?akash hi.
Unanti'i m fyn.
Akash'ya me 2.
Jagat'ha pta h,tara tum bta skti ho manyata jay delhi me keise?

Manyata phone pe kisi se bat kr ri thi,side me jake.

Tara'of oh!jagat tera dimag bi pta ni kha h?
Manyata,jay vijay uncle nd aunty sb aye h delhi khali manyata jay ni aye h.
Uday fun mood'kya bat kr ri h?sachi..
Waah hmein lga ye dono aai h,pr aai kyn h or kb?

Tara'uncle g heartatck aya tha,dr.ne delhi hi ilaz h iska to sb aa gye.
Uday jagat unanti all feel embrased.
Unanti'lekin.
Vijay cum'main btata hu.
Phr wo saari bat btata h...

Uday look manyata
'glti ho gai yar,ek ki wjaye 2 pdhne de thappad,ek mujhe dusra jagat ko'

Jagat'iske papa ko heartatck aya tha,or uper se hmari laughage..

Unanti'ds ne kha tha koi bat to jrur hogi..

Akash'uday say sry hr yar.
Uday'akash idhr aa,sry ni boluga,becoz hmare bich jhagda hota rhta H bt sry thanku ni bolte.smjha.
Akash'lekin keise?

Uday'mile h dubaara kuch to socha hoga uper wale ne..
Ha ni to..

Manyata cut cal
'chale ghr,papa ne jaldi bulaya h...

Vijay'ha chal bye.

Uday'oye chlo sb,kal plan krege bat krne k liye...

Uday jagat unanti nd akash wo to chale jate h..

Uday bar-2 phiche mud k dekhta h manyata ko..
Akash'uday jaldi chlna,barish type mausum ho rha h..

Uday'ha aata hu,ye bi lalmirchi jaldi ni ayegi..
To wo chale jate h..

Jay,tara vijay
'ye manyata kb tk ayegi?
Tara'meri wjh se uski buk rh gai clas me.
Jay'sham ka tym ho rha h,clge bi khali ho rha h...
Vijay'main dekh k..
Suddn barish start hoti h bhoot tej...

Manyata apne rum me buk colect kr ri h,tbi rum bnd krne wala aata h,wo gaane sun rha h,or darwaaza bnd krdiya usne,manyata again apni buks chod ke chilane lgi'oye drwaaza khol,uncle darwaaza kholo...

Vijay'tum log gaadi me beitho main dekh k aata hu.
Principal'ye abi tk clge me kya kr rhe ho,chalo ghr,gate bnd krna h...
Vijay'mam wo hmari
Principal'9 xcuse chalo,mujhe pta khin jake tumlog sharab msti kroge.
Chalo.
Jay'9
P:chlge aap log ya apke parents ko kal bulake shikayat kraye...
Tara'vijay phle ghr chal uncle ko bulake layenge.
Vijay'ye princpal ko to jan se mardunga.. Jaldi chalo,papag ko btate h..

Manyata door ko hit kr ri h,window pe chad chad k dekh ri h..
'arey mar gye kya sb darwaaza kholo,mera phone kha h?
Mera phone'oh sit wo vijay k pas.
Hy bhagwan musibat,yar koi to kholo,ander main hu manyata...

Uday,jagat,unanti nd akash ghr phuchte h.
Gr'Arey akash tum aagye beta..?
Sb chup,koi ni bol rha h.
Akash'g uncle..
Gr'chalo,mumy papa thik h.
A:g sb thik h.

Gr'o aaj kya ho gya bde chup chup ho.
Jagat'akash pyara aa gya apka to hmari himat jo hm bole.
Maya'ja jaldi fresh hoke aa..
Uday'kya maa?
Menu bukh ni h.
Gr'khale wrna taqat khtm ho jani h.
Uday'jis din lgega aapko taqat khtm ho gai h usdin ld lena.
Ds'tu kyn apne bacho se panga leta h.
Gr'dekhta hu ki mere hi h ya
Uday'mumy,dady aape shak kr rhe h.
Gr'oye khote pkad k pit dunga.
Maya'chuna mt mere bacho shi kh rhe h,.
Uday'ha
Jagat'ni
Unanti'to...

Uday apne rum me chala jata h,remove s shrt nd blck vest pe h,or apni window k pas khada ho jata h...
Ds'kya hua uday?
Uday'ds tu aa gai,wo phr sb btata h manyata k 7th kya hua tha...
Ds'maine to phle kha tha,ki wo aise hi ni gai..
Uday sad nd dadi hug'ds main ab kya kru?
Mujhe usse bat krni h.
Jagat'ha ho jayega..
Weise uski aankho me dekh k kya lgta h..?
Uday'uski aankho me dekh k phle albhabet a pe hota hu z pe phuchne wala hota hu to dubara a pe phucha deti h.
Jagat'pta h pinky ki aankho me to main a pe hi atka rhta hu.
Ds'puch liyo,a 2 z aata h ya ni...

Vijay'tara phono kro papa ko..
Jaldi
Tara'ha,kr ri hu..
Tara phone me uncle search krti h,to u k albahabet h to wo jaldi jaldi me uday ko cal krdeti h..

Uday'bat to shi h ds tu man..
Tbi uday ki cel bjti h
'hello.
Tara'ha uncle g,
Uday'kaun bol rha h,papa to bna ni abi,uncle kha se bn gya.
Tara apna phone dekhti clng uday.
'o teri uday main hu tara..
Sry wo
Vijay'abe cut mt kr ise hi bula Bula le..
Tara cryng'uday wo manyata clge me khi bnd ho gai h.
Wo principal ne jane ni diya..
Uday shocked'kya?kha pe keise?
Tum log kha naach rhe the,or manyata ko bi o shit..
Vijay phone leta h'uday bad me bol liyo,plz manyata ko dhundh lo..
Uday preshan'main aa rha hu,cal cut.
Akash'kya hua?
Uday'jagat tu aa piche se,main jata hu.
Unanti'hua kya?rain bhoot heavy ho ri h.
Uday phr btata h.

Uday apna bol k weise hi vest me chala jata h..

Jagat'main bi
Unanti'main chalugi,manyata k pas
Jagat'tu kya
Akash'main bi plz
Jagat'lekin
Ds'kam to tera bi ni h,leja inko bi.
Jagat'chlo..
Jaldi.

Vijay jay nd tara clge k watchman se ld rhe h..
Ander jane k liye..

Manyata ander hairan preshan ro ri hoti h
'mujhe bnd krdiya ganda
Niklne de tb btati hu..'ha ni to.

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Fantastic update Pari, Too good.πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thank God UV-M  & Jagat- J are friends now.πŸ˜›
Thanks for the lovely update,😊 Now I'm waiting for the next update.πŸ˜‰
Great update dear.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Love your work.πŸ€— πŸ€—